3. Peer feedback
• The feedback I received from my peers was both
positive and constructive. I used some points to change
my pitch slightly to improve it from the feed back I
received.
• Good- thoroughly thought about the price in order to
deceive the chosen target audience by keeping it under
£3 so they think they are getting a deal. Also knows a lot
about the genre of music you want to focus your
magazine on, so you can include lots of detail.
• Improvements- to improve you could have a clearer on
what you want to include on your double page spread.
