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PETER SMITH
Below	
  are	
  the	
  series	
  of	
  journals	
  Peter	
  Smith	
  had	
  wrote	
  in	
  his	
  life.	
  
Peter	
  is	
  a	
  loyalist	
  who	
  believes	
  in	
  the	
  King.	
  After	
  his	
  ancestors	
  
moved	
  to	
  America	
  he	
  lived	
  in	
  Georgia	
  where	
  lots	
  of	
  other	
  loyalist	
  
families	
  were,	
  then	
  to	
  Boston	
  in	
  search	
  of	
  a	
  better	
  job	
  and	
  ?inally	
  
to	
  Philadelphia	
  because	
  of	
  problems	
  with	
  Bostonians.	
  
Throughout	
  his	
  life,	
  Peter	
  had	
  been	
  very	
  patriotic	
  all	
  his	
  life	
  and	
  
believes	
  in	
  the	
  King	
  no	
  matter	
  what.	
  In	
  his	
  early	
  life	
  he	
  admired	
  
the	
  soldiers	
  that	
  roamed	
  the	
  streets	
  of	
  Georgia	
  with	
  their	
  Red	
  
Coats	
  swaying	
  in	
  the	
  wind.	
  But	
  whenever	
  there	
  was	
  a	
  soldier	
  
being	
  picked	
  on,	
  he	
  would	
  be	
  fed	
  up	
  and	
  he	
  couldn’t	
  understand	
  
the	
  fury	
  Americans	
  had	
  against	
  the	
  King.
Thursday, May 16, 13
AFTERWORD
There	
  were	
  lots	
  of	
  effects	
  this	
  revolution	
  had	
  on	
  both	
  America	
  and	
  Great	
  
Britain.	
  A	
  long-­‐term	
  effect	
  was	
  the	
  making	
  of	
  the	
  new	
  government.	
  After	
  the	
  
Articles	
  of	
  Confederation	
  failed,	
  the	
  government	
  had	
  to	
  make	
  a	
  new	
  
government,	
  which	
  was	
  the	
  Constitution.	
  This	
  making	
  of	
  the	
  new	
  
government	
  was	
  a	
  long-­‐term	
  effect	
  as	
  it	
  is	
  still	
  in	
  use	
  today	
  as	
  it	
  spreads	
  
power	
  using	
  Checks	
  and	
  Balances	
  in	
  the	
  government.	
  A	
  short-­‐term	
  effect	
  
was	
  the	
  anger	
  the	
  British	
  still	
  had	
  on	
  the	
  Americans.	
  Some	
  British,	
  especially	
  
the	
  King,	
  wanted	
  America	
  back	
  as	
  one	
  of	
  their	
  colonies	
  so	
  they	
  fought	
  a	
  war	
  
again	
  in	
  1812,	
  which	
  I	
  tried	
  to	
  foreshadow	
  with	
  my	
  last	
  post.
Once	
  this	
  revolution	
  changed,	
  America	
  of?icially	
  became	
  independent	
  and	
  
started	
  to	
  carry	
  its	
  own	
  weight	
  completely.	
  With	
  the	
  King	
  no	
  longer	
  in	
  
control,	
  the	
  colonies	
  were	
  able	
  to	
  expand	
  westward	
  because	
  the	
  
Proclamation	
  of	
  1763	
  was	
  no	
  longer	
  in	
  use.	
  But	
  after	
  the	
  revolution	
  was	
  
over,	
  the	
  thoughts	
  of	
  Americans	
  towards	
  the	
  British	
  didn’t	
  change	
  and	
  lots	
  
of	
  them	
  thought	
  of	
  the	
  British	
  as	
  trash.	
  The	
  war	
  may	
  have	
  changed	
  the	
  
American	
  country	
  but	
  it	
  did	
  not	
  change	
  any	
  feelings	
  of	
  each	
  enemy.
A	
  difference	
  that	
  occurred	
  after	
  a	
  while	
  was	
  America	
  becoming	
  independent	
  
and	
  started	
  Westward	
  expansion.	
  The	
  shape	
  of	
  America	
  with	
  thirteen	
  
colonies	
  started	
  to	
  change	
  as	
  now	
  America	
  is	
  about	
  half	
  of	
  North	
  America	
  
and	
  has	
  ?ifty	
  states.	
  	
  A	
  similarity	
  was	
  America	
  staying	
  as	
  one	
  country.	
  
Although	
  America	
  did	
  ?ight	
  the	
  Civil	
  War,	
  it	
  has	
  never	
  been	
  torn	
  into	
  two	
  
different	
  countries.	
  
Thursday, May 16, 13
March 5, 1770
Paul Revere’s drawing of the
“massacre”
The real drawing of the “massacre”
Thursday, May 16, 13
Shots of a Massacre
March 5 1770
The whistles of the bullets echoed around the city of Boston. It seemed as if time had stopped. Ice ran down my spine as I looked out the
window of my shop. Down the street, on King’s Street, I see blood trickling on the pavement like a little stream weaving itself between the dirt. It
was hard to tell the difference between a Red Coat and a bloody man. Screams flooded my ears and tears show in my eyes as this event
reminded me of the time when I traveled here with my family from Georgia, looking for a new life.
The ground shook as my stallions, with their white manes flashing in the light, pulled my carriage along the trail. Before the eyes of my
family and I, there was a new life and a new beginning. I, Peter Smith, had arrived in Boston, Massachusetts in the March of 1769, about of
year before today.
I am a male silversmith, as my last name says so and I proudly look up to the crown that sits in England after my ancestors came here
long ago with the settlers. The crown is our symbol of hope and it shall always be our leader. I am no American though, as I come from Georgia
I am a proud loyalist and I will always remain loyal to the crown.
I can understand the fury some settlers felt in the Proclamation of 1763. This proclamation stated that we, English colonists, were not
allowed to go west of the Appalachian Mountains to keep us out of Indian business. However, we are not the center of the world. We colonists
must realize that the king made this proclamation to help our butts from getting an arrow stuck in our bloody limbs!
But here, in this new city, I have seen tension build between the Bostonians and the British soldiers. “Lousy lobsterbacks!” or “Go back
home to England!” were chanted at the soldiers down and back the street. When a soldiers walked by on the street, a block later he would be
soaking wet or have a crevice square on his butt. Everybody knew what happened, some snickered but loyalists, like me, always felt pity. It
must be hell for those soldiers. After traveling six months to get here, they get treated like nothing at all. Who do these colonists think they are,
god or something?
But today, March 5, 1770 was the limit. The Bostonians deserved every bit of pain they received. 5 people dead? Hell, that seems too
easy on the Bostonians. The King must show who is in power and who is right! And this was no massacre. These people were armed with
clubs other weapons! What do they expect to happen when they throw snowballs at the soldiers? And after clubbing Captain Thomas
Preston? All he was trying to do was order the soldiers to stand down and negotiate to the Bostonians to go away. Likewise, why would they
yell “fire!” at the soldiers when the soldiers are panicking with all the people crowding them? Those people deserved to be shot because they
brought it onto themselves. But hell, hope these colonists don’t get too feisty, like a cat guarding its food, over this “massacre”. And the new
name for this event, the Boston Massacre, will always be remembered as a day where things change in the lives of each soul in the 13
colonies.
Thursday, May 16, 13
June 10 1774
A picture I drew of the
Bostonians chanting in the
streets
The sons of liberty dumping the
tea into the Boston harbor that I
found in a dump
Thursday, May 16, 13
Let us be taxed!
June 10, 1774
"No taxation without representation!" is what the crowd cheers. What is this? After King George III used his money to fight a seven
year long war in order to save us which put him in lots of debt, the Bostonians repay him with this? I proudly will be taxed if it is in order
to save the crown and British from going bankruptcy. But I fear that I am alone on this thought here in Boston. If this were Georgia, my
whole city would think alike and remain loyal to the crown. That is how it ought to be around here. What can be achieved from rioting
and chanting to these soldiers? Hell, I’ll be surprised if they even lift an eyebrow to those rebellious pests.
The quartering act, the sugar act, the stamp act. We as colonists of England should proudly pay these taxes if it is to serve a
purpose. I am willing to give my money or let soldiers stay at my house for a good cause. Those spoiled brats call themselves American.
To hell with that! We are British citizens and our king fought a war for us so it is time we repay them by stop boycotting their goods.
Who cares about the tar and feathers? If you are British, be proud of it and show what we are really made of to those colonial cripples!
Stamps here, stamps there, British goods here, British goods there, this is what I want! When this happens, we will stop being
taxed and we will be treated just like any other Englishmen but for now, we pay the price of the war our beloved King fought against
France, for us.
But sometimes there is a limit to what can be done. The colonists are out of control. Some “Americans”, calling themselves the
Sons of Liberty, dressed up as Indians, on December 16, 1773, colonists stormed into a ship and dump all the imported tea into the
Boston Harbor! “Hoorah!” they screamed cried as they called this the Boston Tea Party as I heard the next morning when I woke up to
the cries of triumph the colonists howled. What will that reach for us, how will that help? All it will do is anger the king and we will be
punished even more! And of course, we were punished by the Coercive Acts, also called the Intolerable acts by the colonists. These
acts gave more power to the British Parliament and reduced town meetings, which angered the colonists greatly.
People like me who believe in these taxes have to pay the price with you darn colonists! And that tea could have drunken the tea
in the morning just like any other family does in England and had fun with our families, NOT GETTING A PUNISHMENT FOR AN
INCIDENT THAT CHANGED NOTHING AT ALL! Curse them colonists, curse them to the ends of hell and please father, help them come
to their senses before they do anything more stupid than they have already done.
Thursday, May 16, 13
July 5, 1776
King George III’s picture
which I keep in my room
Declaration of Independence copy
handed out to people in the streets
with John Hancock's giant signature
Thursday, May 16, 13
Please	
  Sign	
  your	
  John	
  Hancock
July	
  5,	
  1776
	
  
“Sign	
  your	
  John	
  Hancock	
  right	
  here,”	
  they	
  told	
  me	
  as	
  I	
  was	
  signing	
  a	
  paper.	
  This	
  phrase	
  has	
  been	
  popular	
  ever	
  since	
  
yesterday,	
  July	
  4,	
  1776	
  when	
  the	
  delegates	
  of	
  almost	
  every	
  colony	
  signed	
  the	
  Declaration	
  of	
  Independence.	
  After	
  so	
  many	
  years	
  of	
  
yelling,	
  “No	
  taxation	
  without	
  representation!”	
  they	
  ?inally	
  start	
  to	
  change.	
  
A	
  month	
  ago	
  I	
  moved	
  here,	
  to	
  Philadelphia.	
  I	
  couldn’t	
  handle	
  Boston	
  no	
  more.	
  It	
  was	
  full	
  of	
  American	
  patriots	
  who	
  would	
  go	
  
mad	
  in	
  order	
  to	
  deceive	
  the	
  crown.	
  The	
  “massacre”	
  6	
  years	
  ago	
  and	
  the	
  rebellious	
  minds	
  against	
  taxation	
  drove	
  me	
  away.	
  But	
  here,	
  
in	
  Philadelphia,	
  I	
  feel	
  safer	
  and	
  more	
  at	
  ease.	
  But	
  today,	
  a	
  change	
  has	
  occurred	
  to	
  me.	
  The	
  declaration	
  was	
  signed	
  and	
  I	
  fear	
  the	
  
worst.
Three	
  days	
  ago,	
  on	
  July	
  2,	
  1776,	
  the	
  Second	
  Continental	
  Congress	
  voted	
  to	
  review	
  Thomas	
  Jefferson’s	
  work	
  of	
  the	
  
Declaration.	
  As	
  Jefferson	
  was	
  the	
  ?iercest	
  and	
  strongest	
  writer	
  in	
  the	
  congress,	
  he	
  was	
  elected	
  to	
  write	
  the	
  ?inished	
  declaration	
  but	
  
four	
  others,	
  John	
  Adams,	
  Benjamin	
  Franklin,	
  Robert	
  Livingston,	
  and	
  Roger	
  Sherman	
  were	
  all	
  named	
  to	
  produce	
  the	
  ?irst	
  draft	
  of	
  the	
  
declaration	
  which	
  followed	
  along	
  the	
  path	
  of,	
  all	
  humans	
  have	
  equal	
  rights.	
  But	
  we	
  were	
  born	
  with	
  equal	
  rights!	
  Even	
  if	
  it	
  doesn’t	
  
seem	
  so	
  with	
  the	
  King,	
  he	
  is	
  no	
  sel?ish	
  pig.	
  He	
  knows	
  the	
  needs	
  of	
  the	
  people	
  and	
  we	
  must	
  remember	
  he	
  saved	
  us	
  from	
  them	
  French	
  
and	
  Indians!
	
   But	
  once	
  this	
  declaration	
  was	
  approved,	
  56	
  delegates	
  of	
  the	
  continental	
  congress	
  signed	
  it.	
  With	
  their	
  signatures,	
  they	
  have	
  all	
  
blasted	
  themselves.	
  How	
  do	
  they	
  expect	
  the	
  King	
  to	
  not	
  hang	
  them?	
  How	
  would	
  the	
  colonists	
  make	
  an	
  army	
  that	
  could	
  defeat	
  the	
  
strongest	
  military	
  in	
  the	
  world?	
  The	
  sprit	
  may	
  be	
  important,	
  but	
  people	
  must	
  be	
  realistic.	
  I’d	
  rather	
  live	
  my	
  life	
  and	
  a	
  King,	
  whom	
  I	
  
admire	
  deeply,	
  than	
  throw	
  away	
  my	
  life	
  and	
  get	
  convicted	
  of	
  Treason.
Life,	
  liberty,	
  and	
  the	
  pursuit	
  of	
  happiness	
  are	
  written	
  on	
  the	
  paper	
  of	
  independence.	
  We	
  have	
  life,	
  we	
  have	
  liberty	
  and	
  we	
  
should	
  appreciate	
  life	
  while	
  we	
  can,	
  not	
  beg	
  for	
  more.	
  The	
  king	
  could	
  easily	
  just	
  slaughter	
  us	
  and	
  let	
  us	
  rot	
  out	
  here	
  in	
  America,	
  a	
  six	
  
month	
  voyage	
  from	
  England,	
  but	
  no,	
  he	
  sends	
  soldiers	
  over	
  to	
  protect	
  us	
  from	
  foreign	
  nations	
  and	
  also	
  Indians.	
  The	
  King	
  uses	
  his	
  
money	
  for	
  us.	
  Why	
  do	
  we,	
  colonists	
  from	
  England,	
  ask	
  for	
  more?	
  The	
  King	
  gives	
  us	
  what	
  we	
  deserve	
  so	
  we	
  should	
  pay	
  him	
  our	
  
respect	
  and	
  try	
  to	
  earn	
  his	
  trust	
  if	
  we	
  want	
  more.	
  That	
  is	
  how	
  we	
  should	
  have	
  approached	
  the	
  king	
  from	
  the	
  beginning,	
  not	
  chant	
  in	
  
the	
  streets	
  or	
  bully	
  the	
  soldiers.	
  But	
  most	
  of	
  all,	
  we	
  should	
  have	
  kept	
  the	
  Declaration	
  of	
  Independence	
  out	
  of	
  hand	
  and	
  proudly	
  be	
  
a	
  colony	
  of	
  England.	
  We	
  already	
  have	
  the	
  natural	
  right	
  to	
  live	
  so	
  why	
  don’t	
  we	
  use	
  it	
  and	
  make	
  King	
  George	
  III	
  proud	
  of	
  us?	
  Let	
  us	
  
loyalists	
  pray	
  that	
  King	
  George	
  III	
  takes	
  the	
  declaration	
  as	
  a	
  joke	
  and	
  does	
  not	
  let	
  the	
  chains	
  off	
  of	
  the	
  Red	
  Coats.
Thursday, May 16, 13
December 26, 1776
Art drawn by my friend of
the Hessian soldiers
Another drawing that the same
friend drew after we escaped from
the battle
Thursday, May 16, 13
The	
  loss	
  of	
  the	
  battle
December	
  26,	
  1776
	
  
I	
  screamed	
  I	
  screamed.	
  Christmas	
  night	
  was	
  supposed	
  to	
  be	
  a	
  happy	
  night,	
  not	
  a	
  bloody	
  massacre!	
  The	
  continentals	
  took	
  us	
  by	
  
surprise.	
  We	
  didn't	
  have	
  time	
  to	
  reach	
  for	
  our	
  muskets	
  before	
  George	
  Washington	
  led	
  the	
  bloody	
  continental	
  army	
  into	
  the	
  fort.	
  We	
  
couldn’t	
  see	
  it	
  coming.	
  I	
  wish	
  I	
  could	
  live	
  this	
  day	
  freely	
  and	
  happily	
  for	
  the	
  one	
  time	
  in	
  the	
  past	
  few	
  months,	
  ever	
  since	
  I	
  joined	
  the	
  Royal	
  
British	
  army.
I	
  still	
  remember	
  the	
  day	
  when	
  the	
  Red	
  Coats	
  came	
  to	
  my	
  house	
  in	
  Philadelphia.	
  They	
  were	
  moving	
  north	
  in	
  the	
  colonies,	
  sieging	
  
one	
  city	
  at	
  a	
  time.	
  But	
  the	
  man	
  asked	
  me	
  if	
  I	
  wanted	
  to	
  join	
  the	
  army.	
  He	
  said	
  I	
  would	
  be	
  a	
  hero	
  and	
  treated	
  well	
  once	
  the	
  war	
  was	
  over.	
  He	
  
made	
  a	
  promise	
  to	
  me	
  saying	
  that	
  the	
  war	
  would	
  end	
  within	
  a	
  few	
  months.	
  I	
  thought	
  of	
  what	
  he	
  said	
  and	
  gave	
  him	
  the	
  answer	
  of	
  yes,	
  I	
  
would	
  happily	
  join	
  the	
  Royal	
  British	
  army	
  and	
  ?ight	
  along	
  with	
  my	
  fellow	
  Englishmen.	
  
But	
  the	
  promise	
  wasn’t	
  kept.	
  Sure	
  we	
  had	
  never	
  lost	
  a	
  battle	
  for	
  the	
  longest	
  time,	
  but	
  the	
  bloody	
  war	
  raged	
  on.	
  Blood	
  had	
  been	
  
splattered	
  onto	
  my	
  palms	
  as	
  my	
  comrades	
  fell	
  down	
  to	
  the	
  ground.	
  I	
  was	
  not	
  excused	
  to	
  help	
  my	
  friends	
  and	
  the	
  only	
  thing	
  I	
  could	
  do	
  was	
  
?ight	
  for	
  him	
  and	
  push	
  forward	
  in	
  the	
  battle.	
  I	
  hate	
  it	
  but	
  I	
  cannot	
  turn	
  back	
  now.	
  I	
  agreed	
  to	
  ?ight	
  and	
  I	
  will	
  not	
  betray	
  my	
  word.
But	
  they	
  would	
  not	
  give	
  up.	
  No	
  matter	
  how	
  many	
  battles	
  we	
  won,	
  they	
  would	
  keep	
  coming	
  at	
  us.	
  They’d	
  use	
  barbaric	
  ways	
  of	
  
?ighting	
  such	
  as	
  Guerilla	
  warfare	
  and	
  take	
  out	
  my	
  friends	
  one	
  at	
  a	
  time.	
  I	
  could	
  not	
  forgive	
  them	
  but	
  more	
  then	
  anything,	
  I	
  wanted	
  to	
  war	
  
to	
  end.
Lexington	
  and	
  Concord,	
  the	
  place	
  where	
  the	
  ?irst	
  shot	
  of	
  the	
  war	
  was	
  ?ired.	
  That	
  one	
  shot	
  that	
  dragged	
  all	
  of	
  us	
  into	
  hell.	
  The	
  shot	
  
heard	
  around	
  the	
  world,	
  as	
  people	
  called	
  it,	
  the	
  end	
  of	
  peace	
  and	
  the	
  beginning	
  of	
  hell	
  as	
  the	
  minutemen	
  faced	
  the	
  Red	
  Coats	
  head	
  to	
  head.	
  
They	
  had	
  no	
  chance,	
  yet	
  they	
  stayed	
  and	
  didn’t	
  turn	
  their	
  backs.	
  “Do	
  not	
  ?ire	
  unless	
  ?ired	
  upon!”	
  they	
  would	
  tell	
  their	
  men	
  but	
  something	
  
went	
  wrong.	
  Either	
  a	
  mis?ire	
  or	
  an	
  accident	
  it	
  doesn’t	
  matter.	
  The	
  war	
  had	
  started	
  and	
  there	
  was	
  no	
  turning	
  back.
Yesterday,	
  December	
  25,	
  1776,	
  the	
  tide	
  of	
  the	
  war	
  changed.	
  The	
  continental	
  army	
  ?inally	
  won	
  a	
  battle,	
  a	
  very	
  major	
  battle.	
  900	
  out	
  
of	
  the	
  1500	
  men	
  at	
  Trenton	
  were	
  captured	
  along	
  with	
  22	
  killed	
  and	
  the	
  patriots	
  did	
  not	
  lose	
  any.	
  Most	
  of	
  these	
  men	
  were	
  the	
  German	
  
mercenaries,	
  Hessians.	
  I	
  barely	
  made	
  it	
  out	
  in	
  one	
  piece.	
  With	
  one	
  friend,	
  we	
  both	
  snuck	
  out	
  to	
  the	
  forest	
  as	
  soon	
  as	
  the	
  ?irst	
  gunshot	
  was	
  
echoed	
  throughout	
  the	
  camp	
  as	
  if	
  god	
  was	
  warning	
  us	
  to	
  run.	
  I	
  was	
  relieved	
  I	
  did	
  not	
  drink	
  a	
  pint	
  of	
  beer	
  or	
  else	
  I	
  would	
  have	
  turned	
  out	
  
to	
  be	
  one	
  of	
  the	
  unlucky	
  people.	
  
God	
  help	
  us	
  all	
  and	
  help	
  us	
  end	
  this	
  bloody	
  war.
Thursday, May 16, 13
The country where
the Treaty of Paris
was signed
A drawing hung up all over America
of Lord Cornwallis surrendering to
George Washington
September 4, 1783
Thursday, May 16, 13
Independence	
  and	
  defeat
September	
  4,	
  1783
NO	
  BLOODY	
  WAY!	
  I	
  refuse	
  to	
  accept	
  this!	
  I	
  will	
  not	
  tolerate	
  this	
  joke	
  at	
  all	
  until	
  I	
  rot	
  to	
  death!	
  America	
  has	
  not	
  defeated	
  us,	
  the	
  
British,	
  in	
  this	
  eight	
  yearlong	
  war.	
  A	
  ragged	
  army,	
  merely	
  formed	
  of	
  farmers,	
  has	
  defeated	
  the	
  most	
  powerful	
  army	
  in	
  the	
  world!	
  How?	
  
How	
  could	
  this	
  happen?	
  These	
  were	
  the	
  thoughts	
  of	
  thousands	
  and	
  thousands	
  of	
  British	
  people,	
  especially	
  King	
  George	
  III.	
  The	
  
continental	
  army	
  has	
  done	
  the	
  impossible.	
  No	
  one	
  would	
  have	
  thought	
  this	
  could	
  happen.	
  It	
  was	
  as	
  if	
  the	
  world	
  had	
  ?lipped	
  upside	
  
down	
  and	
  our	
  souls	
  drifted	
  out	
  to	
  space.
As	
  scary	
  as	
  it	
  seems,	
  I	
  was	
  there,	
  at	
  Yorktown	
  when	
  we	
  started	
  to	
  crumble.	
  Lord	
  Cornwallis	
  led	
  us	
  to	
  ?ight	
  the	
  continentals	
  but	
  
turned	
  back	
  our	
  forces	
  and	
  “?led”	
  to	
  Yorktown.	
  His	
  plan	
  was	
  to	
  lure	
  the	
  continentals	
  in	
  and	
  once	
  they	
  got	
  to	
  the	
  peninsula,	
  they	
  would	
  
suffer	
  utter	
  defeat,	
  as	
  the	
  Naval	
  cannons	
  would	
  bombard	
  them	
  to	
  pink	
  mist.	
  But	
  it	
  did	
  not	
  happen.	
  Americans	
  had	
  support	
  form	
  
France	
  and,	
  only	
  a	
  few	
  years	
  ago,	
  started	
  training	
  the	
  soldiers	
  more	
  and	
  more	
  to	
  be	
  stronger	
  and	
  better	
  disciplined.	
  But	
  that	
  was	
  not	
  it	
  
as	
  their	
  navy	
  snuck	
  up,	
  like	
  hawks,	
  behind	
  ours.	
  With	
  our	
  ships	
  vulnerable,	
  the	
  French	
  massacred	
  them	
  ruthlessly	
  and	
  sank	
  every	
  
single	
  one	
  of	
  the	
  beauties.	
  We	
  were	
  all	
  surrounded.	
  Yorktown	
  was	
  a	
  Peninsula,	
  meaning	
  water	
  surrounded	
  us	
  in	
  three	
  different	
  
directions.	
  The	
  French	
  navy	
  in	
  the	
  sea	
  and	
  the	
  continentals,	
  with	
  the	
  help	
  of	
  some	
  French,	
  stormed	
  towards	
  us	
  like	
  a	
  big	
  rain	
  cloud	
  
inching	
  its	
  way	
  down	
  the	
  horizon.	
  We	
  had	
  not	
  choice	
  but	
  to	
  surrender	
  after	
  having	
  500	
  deaths	
  during	
  this	
  battle.	
  6,000	
  of	
  us	
  British	
  
soldiers	
  surrendered	
  at	
  Yorktown.	
  This	
  battle	
  was	
  a	
  great	
  devastation	
  to	
  any	
  British	
  man	
  or	
  woman.	
  
I	
  was	
  a	
  prisoner	
  of	
  war	
  for	
  a	
  very	
  long	
  as	
  the	
  war	
  raged	
  on.	
  After	
  Yorktown,	
  there	
  were	
  no	
  big	
  battles.	
  We	
  knew	
  we	
  had	
  lost.	
  The	
  
British	
  in	
  New	
  York	
  were	
  our	
  only	
  hope	
  but	
  as	
  time	
  had	
  told	
  us,	
  it	
  was	
  impossible	
  for	
  a	
  miracle	
  to	
  happen	
  for	
  us.	
  
The	
  war	
  of?icially	
  ended	
  on	
  September	
  3,	
  1783	
  with	
  the	
  Treaty	
  of	
  Paris.	
  On	
  that	
  day,	
  I	
  was	
  ?inally	
  released	
  from	
  prison	
  in	
  
dishonor.	
  As	
  I	
  had	
  nothing	
  left	
  here	
  in	
  the	
  united	
  colonies,	
  I	
  had	
  decided	
  to	
  go	
  back	
  to	
  England,	
  where	
  I	
  can	
  call	
  home.	
  
Today,	
  my	
  family	
  and	
  I	
  are	
  aboard	
  a	
  British	
  ship,	
  carrying	
  fellow	
  soldiers	
  and	
  their	
  families	
  back	
  to	
  England,	
  all	
  of	
  us	
  having	
  the	
  
same	
  thoughts.	
  Before	
  I	
  left,	
  I	
  saw	
  glimpses	
  of	
  rebuilding	
  and	
  rumors	
  of	
  a	
  new	
  government	
  in	
  the	
  United	
  States	
  of	
  America.	
  They	
  called	
  
this	
  government	
  the	
  Articles	
  of	
  Confederation.	
  But	
  rumor	
  also	
  has	
  it	
  that	
  this	
  government	
  is	
  a	
  failure	
  and	
  one	
  man,	
  James	
  Madison,	
  
is	
  in	
  charge	
  of	
  making	
  a	
  new	
  one.
The	
  blood	
  shed	
  throughout	
  the	
  war	
  had	
  tormented	
  us	
  British	
  and	
  we	
  do	
  not	
  know	
  how	
  we	
  can	
  pick	
  up	
  our	
  lives	
  again.	
  But	
  one	
  
thing	
  is	
  clear,	
  the	
  American	
  colonies	
  had	
  done	
  the	
  impossible	
  of	
  defeating	
  the	
  most	
  powerful	
  military	
  in	
  the	
  war,	
  the	
  British	
  army.	
  But	
  
as	
  impossible	
  as	
  it	
  seems,	
  there	
  is	
  still	
  a	
  ?lare	
  in	
  some	
  British	
  soldiers	
  mines	
  of	
  losing	
  to	
  the	
  colonies	
  at	
  war.	
  I	
  cannot	
  believe	
  how	
  they	
  
still	
  seek	
  vengeance	
  upon	
  the	
  Americans	
  but	
  war	
  changes	
  people	
  in	
  one	
  way	
  or	
  another.	
  All	
  I	
  can	
  pray	
  to	
  god	
  is	
  for	
  help	
  in	
  the	
  years	
  to	
  
come	
  and	
  the	
  hope	
  that	
  England	
  will	
  not	
  seek	
  war	
  against	
  the	
  colonies	
  any	
  more.
Thursday, May 16, 13
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Amrev thingy final

  • 1. PETER SMITH Below  are  the  series  of  journals  Peter  Smith  had  wrote  in  his  life.   Peter  is  a  loyalist  who  believes  in  the  King.  After  his  ancestors   moved  to  America  he  lived  in  Georgia  where  lots  of  other  loyalist   families  were,  then  to  Boston  in  search  of  a  better  job  and  ?inally   to  Philadelphia  because  of  problems  with  Bostonians.   Throughout  his  life,  Peter  had  been  very  patriotic  all  his  life  and   believes  in  the  King  no  matter  what.  In  his  early  life  he  admired   the  soldiers  that  roamed  the  streets  of  Georgia  with  their  Red   Coats  swaying  in  the  wind.  But  whenever  there  was  a  soldier   being  picked  on,  he  would  be  fed  up  and  he  couldn’t  understand   the  fury  Americans  had  against  the  King. Thursday, May 16, 13
  • 2. AFTERWORD There  were  lots  of  effects  this  revolution  had  on  both  America  and  Great   Britain.  A  long-­‐term  effect  was  the  making  of  the  new  government.  After  the   Articles  of  Confederation  failed,  the  government  had  to  make  a  new   government,  which  was  the  Constitution.  This  making  of  the  new   government  was  a  long-­‐term  effect  as  it  is  still  in  use  today  as  it  spreads   power  using  Checks  and  Balances  in  the  government.  A  short-­‐term  effect   was  the  anger  the  British  still  had  on  the  Americans.  Some  British,  especially   the  King,  wanted  America  back  as  one  of  their  colonies  so  they  fought  a  war   again  in  1812,  which  I  tried  to  foreshadow  with  my  last  post. Once  this  revolution  changed,  America  of?icially  became  independent  and   started  to  carry  its  own  weight  completely.  With  the  King  no  longer  in   control,  the  colonies  were  able  to  expand  westward  because  the   Proclamation  of  1763  was  no  longer  in  use.  But  after  the  revolution  was   over,  the  thoughts  of  Americans  towards  the  British  didn’t  change  and  lots   of  them  thought  of  the  British  as  trash.  The  war  may  have  changed  the   American  country  but  it  did  not  change  any  feelings  of  each  enemy. A  difference  that  occurred  after  a  while  was  America  becoming  independent   and  started  Westward  expansion.  The  shape  of  America  with  thirteen   colonies  started  to  change  as  now  America  is  about  half  of  North  America   and  has  ?ifty  states.    A  similarity  was  America  staying  as  one  country.   Although  America  did  ?ight  the  Civil  War,  it  has  never  been  torn  into  two   different  countries.   Thursday, May 16, 13
  • 3. March 5, 1770 Paul Revere’s drawing of the “massacre” The real drawing of the “massacre” Thursday, May 16, 13
  • 4. Shots of a Massacre March 5 1770 The whistles of the bullets echoed around the city of Boston. It seemed as if time had stopped. Ice ran down my spine as I looked out the window of my shop. Down the street, on King’s Street, I see blood trickling on the pavement like a little stream weaving itself between the dirt. It was hard to tell the difference between a Red Coat and a bloody man. Screams flooded my ears and tears show in my eyes as this event reminded me of the time when I traveled here with my family from Georgia, looking for a new life. The ground shook as my stallions, with their white manes flashing in the light, pulled my carriage along the trail. Before the eyes of my family and I, there was a new life and a new beginning. I, Peter Smith, had arrived in Boston, Massachusetts in the March of 1769, about of year before today. I am a male silversmith, as my last name says so and I proudly look up to the crown that sits in England after my ancestors came here long ago with the settlers. The crown is our symbol of hope and it shall always be our leader. I am no American though, as I come from Georgia I am a proud loyalist and I will always remain loyal to the crown. I can understand the fury some settlers felt in the Proclamation of 1763. This proclamation stated that we, English colonists, were not allowed to go west of the Appalachian Mountains to keep us out of Indian business. However, we are not the center of the world. We colonists must realize that the king made this proclamation to help our butts from getting an arrow stuck in our bloody limbs! But here, in this new city, I have seen tension build between the Bostonians and the British soldiers. “Lousy lobsterbacks!” or “Go back home to England!” were chanted at the soldiers down and back the street. When a soldiers walked by on the street, a block later he would be soaking wet or have a crevice square on his butt. Everybody knew what happened, some snickered but loyalists, like me, always felt pity. It must be hell for those soldiers. After traveling six months to get here, they get treated like nothing at all. Who do these colonists think they are, god or something? But today, March 5, 1770 was the limit. The Bostonians deserved every bit of pain they received. 5 people dead? Hell, that seems too easy on the Bostonians. The King must show who is in power and who is right! And this was no massacre. These people were armed with clubs other weapons! What do they expect to happen when they throw snowballs at the soldiers? And after clubbing Captain Thomas Preston? All he was trying to do was order the soldiers to stand down and negotiate to the Bostonians to go away. Likewise, why would they yell “fire!” at the soldiers when the soldiers are panicking with all the people crowding them? Those people deserved to be shot because they brought it onto themselves. But hell, hope these colonists don’t get too feisty, like a cat guarding its food, over this “massacre”. And the new name for this event, the Boston Massacre, will always be remembered as a day where things change in the lives of each soul in the 13 colonies. Thursday, May 16, 13
  • 5. June 10 1774 A picture I drew of the Bostonians chanting in the streets The sons of liberty dumping the tea into the Boston harbor that I found in a dump Thursday, May 16, 13
  • 6. Let us be taxed! June 10, 1774 "No taxation without representation!" is what the crowd cheers. What is this? After King George III used his money to fight a seven year long war in order to save us which put him in lots of debt, the Bostonians repay him with this? I proudly will be taxed if it is in order to save the crown and British from going bankruptcy. But I fear that I am alone on this thought here in Boston. If this were Georgia, my whole city would think alike and remain loyal to the crown. That is how it ought to be around here. What can be achieved from rioting and chanting to these soldiers? Hell, I’ll be surprised if they even lift an eyebrow to those rebellious pests. The quartering act, the sugar act, the stamp act. We as colonists of England should proudly pay these taxes if it is to serve a purpose. I am willing to give my money or let soldiers stay at my house for a good cause. Those spoiled brats call themselves American. To hell with that! We are British citizens and our king fought a war for us so it is time we repay them by stop boycotting their goods. Who cares about the tar and feathers? If you are British, be proud of it and show what we are really made of to those colonial cripples! Stamps here, stamps there, British goods here, British goods there, this is what I want! When this happens, we will stop being taxed and we will be treated just like any other Englishmen but for now, we pay the price of the war our beloved King fought against France, for us. But sometimes there is a limit to what can be done. The colonists are out of control. Some “Americans”, calling themselves the Sons of Liberty, dressed up as Indians, on December 16, 1773, colonists stormed into a ship and dump all the imported tea into the Boston Harbor! “Hoorah!” they screamed cried as they called this the Boston Tea Party as I heard the next morning when I woke up to the cries of triumph the colonists howled. What will that reach for us, how will that help? All it will do is anger the king and we will be punished even more! And of course, we were punished by the Coercive Acts, also called the Intolerable acts by the colonists. These acts gave more power to the British Parliament and reduced town meetings, which angered the colonists greatly. People like me who believe in these taxes have to pay the price with you darn colonists! And that tea could have drunken the tea in the morning just like any other family does in England and had fun with our families, NOT GETTING A PUNISHMENT FOR AN INCIDENT THAT CHANGED NOTHING AT ALL! Curse them colonists, curse them to the ends of hell and please father, help them come to their senses before they do anything more stupid than they have already done. Thursday, May 16, 13
  • 7. July 5, 1776 King George III’s picture which I keep in my room Declaration of Independence copy handed out to people in the streets with John Hancock's giant signature Thursday, May 16, 13
  • 8. Please  Sign  your  John  Hancock July  5,  1776   “Sign  your  John  Hancock  right  here,”  they  told  me  as  I  was  signing  a  paper.  This  phrase  has  been  popular  ever  since   yesterday,  July  4,  1776  when  the  delegates  of  almost  every  colony  signed  the  Declaration  of  Independence.  After  so  many  years  of   yelling,  “No  taxation  without  representation!”  they  ?inally  start  to  change.   A  month  ago  I  moved  here,  to  Philadelphia.  I  couldn’t  handle  Boston  no  more.  It  was  full  of  American  patriots  who  would  go   mad  in  order  to  deceive  the  crown.  The  “massacre”  6  years  ago  and  the  rebellious  minds  against  taxation  drove  me  away.  But  here,   in  Philadelphia,  I  feel  safer  and  more  at  ease.  But  today,  a  change  has  occurred  to  me.  The  declaration  was  signed  and  I  fear  the   worst. Three  days  ago,  on  July  2,  1776,  the  Second  Continental  Congress  voted  to  review  Thomas  Jefferson’s  work  of  the   Declaration.  As  Jefferson  was  the  ?iercest  and  strongest  writer  in  the  congress,  he  was  elected  to  write  the  ?inished  declaration  but   four  others,  John  Adams,  Benjamin  Franklin,  Robert  Livingston,  and  Roger  Sherman  were  all  named  to  produce  the  ?irst  draft  of  the   declaration  which  followed  along  the  path  of,  all  humans  have  equal  rights.  But  we  were  born  with  equal  rights!  Even  if  it  doesn’t   seem  so  with  the  King,  he  is  no  sel?ish  pig.  He  knows  the  needs  of  the  people  and  we  must  remember  he  saved  us  from  them  French   and  Indians!   But  once  this  declaration  was  approved,  56  delegates  of  the  continental  congress  signed  it.  With  their  signatures,  they  have  all   blasted  themselves.  How  do  they  expect  the  King  to  not  hang  them?  How  would  the  colonists  make  an  army  that  could  defeat  the   strongest  military  in  the  world?  The  sprit  may  be  important,  but  people  must  be  realistic.  I’d  rather  live  my  life  and  a  King,  whom  I   admire  deeply,  than  throw  away  my  life  and  get  convicted  of  Treason. Life,  liberty,  and  the  pursuit  of  happiness  are  written  on  the  paper  of  independence.  We  have  life,  we  have  liberty  and  we   should  appreciate  life  while  we  can,  not  beg  for  more.  The  king  could  easily  just  slaughter  us  and  let  us  rot  out  here  in  America,  a  six   month  voyage  from  England,  but  no,  he  sends  soldiers  over  to  protect  us  from  foreign  nations  and  also  Indians.  The  King  uses  his   money  for  us.  Why  do  we,  colonists  from  England,  ask  for  more?  The  King  gives  us  what  we  deserve  so  we  should  pay  him  our   respect  and  try  to  earn  his  trust  if  we  want  more.  That  is  how  we  should  have  approached  the  king  from  the  beginning,  not  chant  in   the  streets  or  bully  the  soldiers.  But  most  of  all,  we  should  have  kept  the  Declaration  of  Independence  out  of  hand  and  proudly  be   a  colony  of  England.  We  already  have  the  natural  right  to  live  so  why  don’t  we  use  it  and  make  King  George  III  proud  of  us?  Let  us   loyalists  pray  that  King  George  III  takes  the  declaration  as  a  joke  and  does  not  let  the  chains  off  of  the  Red  Coats. Thursday, May 16, 13
  • 9. December 26, 1776 Art drawn by my friend of the Hessian soldiers Another drawing that the same friend drew after we escaped from the battle Thursday, May 16, 13
  • 10. The  loss  of  the  battle December  26,  1776   I  screamed  I  screamed.  Christmas  night  was  supposed  to  be  a  happy  night,  not  a  bloody  massacre!  The  continentals  took  us  by   surprise.  We  didn't  have  time  to  reach  for  our  muskets  before  George  Washington  led  the  bloody  continental  army  into  the  fort.  We   couldn’t  see  it  coming.  I  wish  I  could  live  this  day  freely  and  happily  for  the  one  time  in  the  past  few  months,  ever  since  I  joined  the  Royal   British  army. I  still  remember  the  day  when  the  Red  Coats  came  to  my  house  in  Philadelphia.  They  were  moving  north  in  the  colonies,  sieging   one  city  at  a  time.  But  the  man  asked  me  if  I  wanted  to  join  the  army.  He  said  I  would  be  a  hero  and  treated  well  once  the  war  was  over.  He   made  a  promise  to  me  saying  that  the  war  would  end  within  a  few  months.  I  thought  of  what  he  said  and  gave  him  the  answer  of  yes,  I   would  happily  join  the  Royal  British  army  and  ?ight  along  with  my  fellow  Englishmen.   But  the  promise  wasn’t  kept.  Sure  we  had  never  lost  a  battle  for  the  longest  time,  but  the  bloody  war  raged  on.  Blood  had  been   splattered  onto  my  palms  as  my  comrades  fell  down  to  the  ground.  I  was  not  excused  to  help  my  friends  and  the  only  thing  I  could  do  was   ?ight  for  him  and  push  forward  in  the  battle.  I  hate  it  but  I  cannot  turn  back  now.  I  agreed  to  ?ight  and  I  will  not  betray  my  word. But  they  would  not  give  up.  No  matter  how  many  battles  we  won,  they  would  keep  coming  at  us.  They’d  use  barbaric  ways  of   ?ighting  such  as  Guerilla  warfare  and  take  out  my  friends  one  at  a  time.  I  could  not  forgive  them  but  more  then  anything,  I  wanted  to  war   to  end. Lexington  and  Concord,  the  place  where  the  ?irst  shot  of  the  war  was  ?ired.  That  one  shot  that  dragged  all  of  us  into  hell.  The  shot   heard  around  the  world,  as  people  called  it,  the  end  of  peace  and  the  beginning  of  hell  as  the  minutemen  faced  the  Red  Coats  head  to  head.   They  had  no  chance,  yet  they  stayed  and  didn’t  turn  their  backs.  “Do  not  ?ire  unless  ?ired  upon!”  they  would  tell  their  men  but  something   went  wrong.  Either  a  mis?ire  or  an  accident  it  doesn’t  matter.  The  war  had  started  and  there  was  no  turning  back. Yesterday,  December  25,  1776,  the  tide  of  the  war  changed.  The  continental  army  ?inally  won  a  battle,  a  very  major  battle.  900  out   of  the  1500  men  at  Trenton  were  captured  along  with  22  killed  and  the  patriots  did  not  lose  any.  Most  of  these  men  were  the  German   mercenaries,  Hessians.  I  barely  made  it  out  in  one  piece.  With  one  friend,  we  both  snuck  out  to  the  forest  as  soon  as  the  ?irst  gunshot  was   echoed  throughout  the  camp  as  if  god  was  warning  us  to  run.  I  was  relieved  I  did  not  drink  a  pint  of  beer  or  else  I  would  have  turned  out   to  be  one  of  the  unlucky  people.   God  help  us  all  and  help  us  end  this  bloody  war. Thursday, May 16, 13
  • 11. The country where the Treaty of Paris was signed A drawing hung up all over America of Lord Cornwallis surrendering to George Washington September 4, 1783 Thursday, May 16, 13
  • 12. Independence  and  defeat September  4,  1783 NO  BLOODY  WAY!  I  refuse  to  accept  this!  I  will  not  tolerate  this  joke  at  all  until  I  rot  to  death!  America  has  not  defeated  us,  the   British,  in  this  eight  yearlong  war.  A  ragged  army,  merely  formed  of  farmers,  has  defeated  the  most  powerful  army  in  the  world!  How?   How  could  this  happen?  These  were  the  thoughts  of  thousands  and  thousands  of  British  people,  especially  King  George  III.  The   continental  army  has  done  the  impossible.  No  one  would  have  thought  this  could  happen.  It  was  as  if  the  world  had  ?lipped  upside   down  and  our  souls  drifted  out  to  space. As  scary  as  it  seems,  I  was  there,  at  Yorktown  when  we  started  to  crumble.  Lord  Cornwallis  led  us  to  ?ight  the  continentals  but   turned  back  our  forces  and  “?led”  to  Yorktown.  His  plan  was  to  lure  the  continentals  in  and  once  they  got  to  the  peninsula,  they  would   suffer  utter  defeat,  as  the  Naval  cannons  would  bombard  them  to  pink  mist.  But  it  did  not  happen.  Americans  had  support  form   France  and,  only  a  few  years  ago,  started  training  the  soldiers  more  and  more  to  be  stronger  and  better  disciplined.  But  that  was  not  it   as  their  navy  snuck  up,  like  hawks,  behind  ours.  With  our  ships  vulnerable,  the  French  massacred  them  ruthlessly  and  sank  every   single  one  of  the  beauties.  We  were  all  surrounded.  Yorktown  was  a  Peninsula,  meaning  water  surrounded  us  in  three  different   directions.  The  French  navy  in  the  sea  and  the  continentals,  with  the  help  of  some  French,  stormed  towards  us  like  a  big  rain  cloud   inching  its  way  down  the  horizon.  We  had  not  choice  but  to  surrender  after  having  500  deaths  during  this  battle.  6,000  of  us  British   soldiers  surrendered  at  Yorktown.  This  battle  was  a  great  devastation  to  any  British  man  or  woman.   I  was  a  prisoner  of  war  for  a  very  long  as  the  war  raged  on.  After  Yorktown,  there  were  no  big  battles.  We  knew  we  had  lost.  The   British  in  New  York  were  our  only  hope  but  as  time  had  told  us,  it  was  impossible  for  a  miracle  to  happen  for  us.   The  war  of?icially  ended  on  September  3,  1783  with  the  Treaty  of  Paris.  On  that  day,  I  was  ?inally  released  from  prison  in   dishonor.  As  I  had  nothing  left  here  in  the  united  colonies,  I  had  decided  to  go  back  to  England,  where  I  can  call  home.   Today,  my  family  and  I  are  aboard  a  British  ship,  carrying  fellow  soldiers  and  their  families  back  to  England,  all  of  us  having  the   same  thoughts.  Before  I  left,  I  saw  glimpses  of  rebuilding  and  rumors  of  a  new  government  in  the  United  States  of  America.  They  called   this  government  the  Articles  of  Confederation.  But  rumor  also  has  it  that  this  government  is  a  failure  and  one  man,  James  Madison,   is  in  charge  of  making  a  new  one. The  blood  shed  throughout  the  war  had  tormented  us  British  and  we  do  not  know  how  we  can  pick  up  our  lives  again.  But  one   thing  is  clear,  the  American  colonies  had  done  the  impossible  of  defeating  the  most  powerful  military  in  the  war,  the  British  army.  But   as  impossible  as  it  seems,  there  is  still  a  ?lare  in  some  British  soldiers  mines  of  losing  to  the  colonies  at  war.  I  cannot  believe  how  they   still  seek  vengeance  upon  the  Americans  but  war  changes  people  in  one  way  or  another.  All  I  can  pray  to  god  is  for  help  in  the  years  to   come  and  the  hope  that  England  will  not  seek  war  against  the  colonies  any  more. Thursday, May 16, 13
  • 13. CITATIONS ! Mackenzie, John. "American Revolution War." American Revolution : The Battle of Yorktown. Chalfont Web Design, 2002. Web. 13 May 2013. <http:// www.britishbattles.com/battle-yorktown.htm>. Penner, Lucille R. Liberty! New York: Scholastic, n.d. Print. Mintz, S., & McNeil, S. (2013). Change this text to the title of the section. Digital History. Retrieved (insert the date your retrieved the information here without parentheses) from http://www.digitalhistory.uh.edu/(add the complete URL for the specific page) "PRIMARY SOURCE ANALYSIS TOOL." Primary Source Analysis Tool. Library of Congress, n.d. Web. 13 May 2013. <http://www.loc.gov/teachers/primary-source-analysis-tool/>. Adams, Abigail. "Letter to Her Husband." Primary Source. N.p., n.d. Web. 1 May 2013. <http:// revolutionaryvoices.wikispaces.com/file/view/ primary_source_letter_Abigail_Adams_Letter_to_Her_Husband _%28original%29.jpg/325462000/ primary_source_letter_Abigail_Adams_Letter_to_Her_Husband _%28original%29.jpg>. "No Taxation Without Representation." No Taxation Without Representation. JK, n.d. Web. 13 May 2013. <http:// Thursday, May 16, 13
  • 14. CITATIONS ! "Boston Massacre Historical Society." Boston Massacre Historical Society. Boston Massacre Historical Society, 2008. Web. 13 May 2013. <http://www.bostonmassacre.net/ pictures/pictures4.htm>. Holshouser, Hellen. "Heart of a Southern Woman." Our Grandfather Crossed the Deleware and Fought with George Washington! Helen Holshouser, 27 Feb. 2013. Web. 14 May 2013. <http://heartofasouthernwoman.blogspot.com/2013/02/our- grandfather-crossed-deleware-and.html>. "Hessian Jager." Hessian Jager. N.p., 14 Sept. 2010. Web. 14 May 2013. <http://www.battleofgrotonheights.com/images/ hessian_yager.jpg>. "King George III Pictures." King George III Pictures. Social Study Network, 2011. Web. 14 May 2013. <http:// www.venturausd.org/balboa/Anter/SSN/Revolutionary_Era/ King_George_III/King_George_III_pics.html>. By: Lauren, Elizabeth, Zoey. "Boston Tea Party." Boston Tea Party. Encyclopedia Britannica Online School Edition, n.d. Web. 14 May 2013. <http://www.cr-cath.pvt.k12.ia.us/lasalle/Resources/8th Websites 2013/Lauren Elizabeth Zoey Rev War/Elizabeth Janey rev war/Boston_Tea_Party.html>. Thursday, May 16, 13
  • 15. CITATIONS ! Ashford, Elizabeth. "Antique French Map." Antique French Maps. Encore Editions, n.d. Web. 14 May 2013. <http:// www.encore-editions.com/antique-french-maps-map-3565011- rand-mcnally-and-company-1897-france-maximum-size-30- x-40>. Thursday, May 16, 13