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Writing for Different
Audience, Form and
      Purpose
Purpose
How do you identify a
    text’s purpose?
Word Level- look for:
• fact and opinion
• Subject specific words
• Description e.g. adjectives, imagery...
• Verb types e.g. imperatives or modal
• Persuasive language e.g. rhetorical devices
• Personal e.g. use of pronouns
Sentence Level – look for:
• Tense and narrative voice
• Balance of sentence functions e.g. interrogative,
  statement, exclamatory, imperative
• Balance of sentence types e.g. simple,
  compound, complex, minor
Text Level – look for:
• Topic sentences
• Length of paragraphs
• Layout and presentational devices e.g. Images,
  colour, headings...
• Connectives
• Order of information e.g. chronological
Form
How do you identify a
     text’s form?
Look for:
• Text level features like
  presentational devices and
  layout
• Word level features like ‘yours
  sincerely’ or ‘dear diary’
Audience
Audience
• What is an audience?
• Can you match these text
  types to their audience?
          TEXT                     AUDIENCE


The Gruffalo               Adults, 18-34, with an
                           interest in the horror genre
The Chris Moyles Radio     For Year 10 and 11
Show                       students studying science
                           GCSE
Nightmare on Elm Street    Teenagers with an interest
                           in rap music
A KS4 science textbook     Children aged 2-5 and their
                           parents
An advertisement for the   Adults who like animals,
new Eminem album           25-60
A leaflet for the RSPCA    18-45 year olds on their
                           way to work/school
How do you identify a
   text’s audience?
Word Level – look for:
• Register
• Complexity of words
• Noun and verb forms e.g. use
  of abstract nouns
Sentence Level – look for:
• Narrative voice
• Complexity of sentence forms
Text Level – look for:
• Presentational features like
  font size, amount of text versus
  image, colour, layout...
What is the text’s register?


  Register?

  A form of language appropriate to a
  particular situation i.e. formality.


  Formality has a spectrum:



Highly formal                            Highly
                                         informal
What is the text’s register?



 Highly                                  Highly
 formal                                  informal




Where would you place the following situations
on this spectrum:
• A meeting between a teacher and the head
teacher?
• A conversation between a customer and a shop
assistant?
• A letter from a firm of solicitors?
Why is the level of formality appropriate in each
situation?
What is the text’s register?



Look at the selection of texts:
• Where on the spectrum would you place
them and why?
• How has this influenced the basic
language features?
Word formality
A text’s register is determined by the way
a writer uses language and structure.

When a writer chooses their words they
have any number of synonym choices
and have to decide on the formality of the
word they want.

Look at these words and put them on
your formality register:
mate               acquaintance
friend             associate
colleague          bro
pal                buddy
chum               comrade
Can you think of any others?
Words can also have different
   meanings to a reader


Denotation = literal meaning/dictionary
definition
e.g. Winter denotes the season between
autumn and spring.



Connotation = associated meanings of
words/emotions and attitudes aroused by
words
e.g. Winter connotes cold, dark,
depressing.


What does winter mean to you?
Denotation and connotation

  Explain the differences in the following sets
  of near synonyms, in terms of their differing
  connotations:


Sets of                      Differences
Synonyms
My house / my home / my
pad / my place
Fat / plump / big-boned /
obese
Cheap / inexpensive /
bargain / economical
Time to practice...
               Text:   Text:   Text:   Text:

Purpose
Three          •
               •
features       •
which show
the purpose
Form
One feature    •
which shows
the form
Audience
Three          •
               •
features       •
which show
the audience
Theme of
text
1. Adrenaline Junkies 3-4
2. A bigger wave 6
3. Walk into the past 10
4. Fact facts: the faces of
   poverty 12
5. People against poverty 14
6. Your country needs you 17
7. Noel Chavasse 18
8. Everyday life 19-20
9. Jaws 22
10.I think I caught one 23
11.How to... 26
12.Cambodia 31-32
Some synonyms have different effects on the
 reader. Some are stronger or more forceful.
Look at the words below. They are all synonyms
   for a evil person but some are more evil or
powerful than others. Put them on the line in the
                 order of ‘evilness’.
Identifying Purpose,
     Audience and Form

How would you recognise ...?
A persuasive text
An informative text
A text for young children
An instructional text
A text for scientists
A magazine article
A Website article
A review
A text for teenagers
What is the purpose, audience and form of
  the article ‘I think I’ve caught one’?
So when reading the extracts for
   the first time, you should
           identify…



• Tone (friendly,
  argumentative, sad, shocking,
  excited etc.)
• Purpose (persuade, argue,
  advise, inform, entertain etc.)
• Audience (age, gender,
  interests, education...)
• Form (e.g. letter, broadsheet
  article, tabloid article, leaflet
  etc.)
Tone
              What is tone?
Tone is a literary technique that is a part of
composition, which encompasses the attitudes
toward the subject and toward the audience
implied in a literary work.

Tone may be formal, informal, intimate,
solemn, somber, playful, serious, ironic,
guilty, condescending, or many other
possible attitudes.

Each piece of literature has at least one theme,
or central question about a topic, and how the
theme is approached within the work is known as
the tone.

Create a mindmap of potential tones a writer may
use.
How do we evaluate
 the tone of a text?
When you read a text for the first
time you should be thinking
about: meaning, tone and the
response you think the writer
wanted from the reader.
The tone and reader response
are created by the overall text –
the events and their order, the
narrative voice, the use of
imagery, the word choices, the
layout on the page...
It is like looking at a picture and
being able to sense the tone and
mood an artist wanted to create.
Or hearing a piece of music and
having it put you in a particular
mood.
How do we evaluate
   the tone of a text?
• Listen to the songs. How does
  each make you feel?

  This is probably the mood and
  tone the artist was going for
  when they composed the song.
  They wanted to make the reader
  feel a particular way about an
  idea or issue. They also wanted
  to portray their own feelings.
TEACHER: choose
       some songs with clear
          tone and mood
            http://www.youtube.com/watch?
            v=ZWBfjjGGkNQ
                           http://www.youtube.com/watch?
                           v=e2KAI4FronQ
                   e.g. Ride of the
             Valkyires, Swan Lake,
              The Lazy song Bruno
              Mars, Muse’s olympic
             theme, So what Pink...
           (all available on youtube
              – but just listen don’t
                         watch)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?
v=9W0Z9_hMg8Q              http://www.youtube.com/watch?
                           v=66molzUEkWI
How do we evaluate the
   tone of a text?

Take a look at the images
that follow. For each write
down the tone/mood in the
image and how you think the
artist wanted the person
looking at it to feel. What
emotion do they evoke in
you?
1
2
3
4
5
6
7
8
9
10
How do we evaluate
       the tone of a text?
  Any text is just like the songs or
  painting, it is a way of communicating
  an idea and feeling.
  Now take a look at these extracts of
  non-fiction writing :
• What is the tone/mood of each
  extract? How does the writer feel
  about the subject of their writing?
• How do you think the writer wanted
  the person reading it to feel? What
  emotion do they evoke in you?
• How does the writer show the
  tone/mood in this extract?
1. What is happening to Britain?     2. Flying at 200mph might not sound
 One man is stabbed for wearing      particulary thrilling. After all, a jet
a Rolex. One girl is shot for        airliner travels at three times that
texting on her mobile. One gran      speed and that’s about as exciting as a
is battered for the pennies in her   bus ride. But when you’re flying on
purse. And no one seems to           your side and so low that you think
care.                                your ear is going to brush the ground,
                                     it’s one hell of a buzz.
3. I wonder whether we shouldn’t
just quietly do away with all        4. Imagine being beaten every day of
elderly people on the eve of their   your life. Imagine being starved and
60th birthday? It could be done      left out in the cold by the person who is
in a gentle fashion, with a          supposed to love you. Imagine being
celebrational (but suitably          maliciously tortured and left to die in
spiked) loving cup, and the          agonising pain.
system would carry with it many      Sadly, this is the reality for thousands
advantages... Statistics tell us     of animals in Britain today.
that one person in seven is now
over the age of 65. That makes     6. There’s an awful lot of
8 million, and looking after them  sentimentality around the concept of
costs the nation £1 billion per    extinction. We have the sense that
year. So the answer is simple –    when a species dies our we should all
get rid of all the old grey        fall to our knees and spend some time
beards...                          wailing. But why? Apart from a few
                                   impotent middle-class Chinamen or if
5. Raising a cool £200k for        you want a nice rug, it makes not the
charity is no mean feat even       slightest bit of difference if Johnny
when you have four feet to help.   tiger dies out. It won’t upset our
Mr Fowley, a large, 5 year old, 12 power supplies or heal the rift with
and half stone Leonburger canine Russia.
is one such fundraiser whose
adventures are to be published in 7. You never forget a close encounter
paperback next year. Through all with a bear. They can approach
his good work and many             slowly., sedately, stealthily, but once
appearances on behalf of charity they are upon you, its is one of the
Mr Fowley has gathered celebrity most terrifying experiences you are
status and now has a worldwide     ever likely to have.
fan club.
How do we evaluate
    the tone of a text?
What are we looking for/at?
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Purpose, Audience, Form and Tone

  • 3.
  • 4. How do you identify a text’s purpose? Word Level- look for: • fact and opinion • Subject specific words • Description e.g. adjectives, imagery... • Verb types e.g. imperatives or modal • Persuasive language e.g. rhetorical devices • Personal e.g. use of pronouns Sentence Level – look for: • Tense and narrative voice • Balance of sentence functions e.g. interrogative, statement, exclamatory, imperative • Balance of sentence types e.g. simple, compound, complex, minor Text Level – look for: • Topic sentences • Length of paragraphs • Layout and presentational devices e.g. Images, colour, headings... • Connectives • Order of information e.g. chronological
  • 6.
  • 7. How do you identify a text’s form? Look for: • Text level features like presentational devices and layout • Word level features like ‘yours sincerely’ or ‘dear diary’
  • 9. Audience • What is an audience? • Can you match these text types to their audience? TEXT AUDIENCE The Gruffalo Adults, 18-34, with an interest in the horror genre The Chris Moyles Radio For Year 10 and 11 Show students studying science GCSE Nightmare on Elm Street Teenagers with an interest in rap music A KS4 science textbook Children aged 2-5 and their parents An advertisement for the Adults who like animals, new Eminem album 25-60 A leaflet for the RSPCA 18-45 year olds on their way to work/school
  • 10. How do you identify a text’s audience? Word Level – look for: • Register • Complexity of words • Noun and verb forms e.g. use of abstract nouns Sentence Level – look for: • Narrative voice • Complexity of sentence forms Text Level – look for: • Presentational features like font size, amount of text versus image, colour, layout...
  • 11. What is the text’s register? Register? A form of language appropriate to a particular situation i.e. formality. Formality has a spectrum: Highly formal Highly informal
  • 12. What is the text’s register? Highly Highly formal informal Where would you place the following situations on this spectrum: • A meeting between a teacher and the head teacher? • A conversation between a customer and a shop assistant? • A letter from a firm of solicitors? Why is the level of formality appropriate in each situation?
  • 13. What is the text’s register? Look at the selection of texts: • Where on the spectrum would you place them and why? • How has this influenced the basic language features?
  • 14.
  • 15.
  • 16.
  • 17.
  • 18. Word formality A text’s register is determined by the way a writer uses language and structure. When a writer chooses their words they have any number of synonym choices and have to decide on the formality of the word they want. Look at these words and put them on your formality register: mate acquaintance friend associate colleague bro pal buddy chum comrade Can you think of any others?
  • 19. Words can also have different meanings to a reader Denotation = literal meaning/dictionary definition e.g. Winter denotes the season between autumn and spring. Connotation = associated meanings of words/emotions and attitudes aroused by words e.g. Winter connotes cold, dark, depressing. What does winter mean to you?
  • 20. Denotation and connotation Explain the differences in the following sets of near synonyms, in terms of their differing connotations: Sets of Differences Synonyms My house / my home / my pad / my place Fat / plump / big-boned / obese Cheap / inexpensive / bargain / economical
  • 21. Time to practice... Text: Text: Text: Text: Purpose Three • • features • which show the purpose Form One feature • which shows the form Audience Three • • features • which show the audience Theme of text
  • 22. 1. Adrenaline Junkies 3-4 2. A bigger wave 6 3. Walk into the past 10 4. Fact facts: the faces of poverty 12 5. People against poverty 14 6. Your country needs you 17 7. Noel Chavasse 18 8. Everyday life 19-20 9. Jaws 22 10.I think I caught one 23 11.How to... 26 12.Cambodia 31-32
  • 23. Some synonyms have different effects on the reader. Some are stronger or more forceful. Look at the words below. They are all synonyms for a evil person but some are more evil or powerful than others. Put them on the line in the order of ‘evilness’.
  • 24. Identifying Purpose, Audience and Form How would you recognise ...? A persuasive text An informative text A text for young children An instructional text A text for scientists A magazine article A Website article A review A text for teenagers What is the purpose, audience and form of the article ‘I think I’ve caught one’?
  • 25. So when reading the extracts for the first time, you should identify… • Tone (friendly, argumentative, sad, shocking, excited etc.) • Purpose (persuade, argue, advise, inform, entertain etc.) • Audience (age, gender, interests, education...) • Form (e.g. letter, broadsheet article, tabloid article, leaflet etc.)
  • 26. Tone What is tone? Tone is a literary technique that is a part of composition, which encompasses the attitudes toward the subject and toward the audience implied in a literary work. Tone may be formal, informal, intimate, solemn, somber, playful, serious, ironic, guilty, condescending, or many other possible attitudes. Each piece of literature has at least one theme, or central question about a topic, and how the theme is approached within the work is known as the tone. Create a mindmap of potential tones a writer may use.
  • 27. How do we evaluate the tone of a text? When you read a text for the first time you should be thinking about: meaning, tone and the response you think the writer wanted from the reader. The tone and reader response are created by the overall text – the events and their order, the narrative voice, the use of imagery, the word choices, the layout on the page... It is like looking at a picture and being able to sense the tone and mood an artist wanted to create. Or hearing a piece of music and having it put you in a particular mood.
  • 28. How do we evaluate the tone of a text? • Listen to the songs. How does each make you feel? This is probably the mood and tone the artist was going for when they composed the song. They wanted to make the reader feel a particular way about an idea or issue. They also wanted to portray their own feelings.
  • 29. TEACHER: choose some songs with clear tone and mood http://www.youtube.com/watch? v=ZWBfjjGGkNQ http://www.youtube.com/watch? v=e2KAI4FronQ e.g. Ride of the Valkyires, Swan Lake, The Lazy song Bruno Mars, Muse’s olympic theme, So what Pink... (all available on youtube – but just listen don’t watch) http://www.youtube.com/watch? v=9W0Z9_hMg8Q http://www.youtube.com/watch? v=66molzUEkWI
  • 30. How do we evaluate the tone of a text? Take a look at the images that follow. For each write down the tone/mood in the image and how you think the artist wanted the person looking at it to feel. What emotion do they evoke in you?
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  • 41. How do we evaluate the tone of a text? Any text is just like the songs or painting, it is a way of communicating an idea and feeling. Now take a look at these extracts of non-fiction writing : • What is the tone/mood of each extract? How does the writer feel about the subject of their writing? • How do you think the writer wanted the person reading it to feel? What emotion do they evoke in you? • How does the writer show the tone/mood in this extract?
  • 42. 1. What is happening to Britain? 2. Flying at 200mph might not sound One man is stabbed for wearing particulary thrilling. After all, a jet a Rolex. One girl is shot for airliner travels at three times that texting on her mobile. One gran speed and that’s about as exciting as a is battered for the pennies in her bus ride. But when you’re flying on purse. And no one seems to your side and so low that you think care. your ear is going to brush the ground, it’s one hell of a buzz. 3. I wonder whether we shouldn’t just quietly do away with all 4. Imagine being beaten every day of elderly people on the eve of their your life. Imagine being starved and 60th birthday? It could be done left out in the cold by the person who is in a gentle fashion, with a supposed to love you. Imagine being celebrational (but suitably maliciously tortured and left to die in spiked) loving cup, and the agonising pain. system would carry with it many Sadly, this is the reality for thousands advantages... Statistics tell us of animals in Britain today. that one person in seven is now over the age of 65. That makes 6. There’s an awful lot of 8 million, and looking after them sentimentality around the concept of costs the nation £1 billion per extinction. We have the sense that year. So the answer is simple – when a species dies our we should all get rid of all the old grey fall to our knees and spend some time beards... wailing. But why? Apart from a few impotent middle-class Chinamen or if 5. Raising a cool £200k for you want a nice rug, it makes not the charity is no mean feat even slightest bit of difference if Johnny when you have four feet to help. tiger dies out. It won’t upset our Mr Fowley, a large, 5 year old, 12 power supplies or heal the rift with and half stone Leonburger canine Russia. is one such fundraiser whose adventures are to be published in 7. You never forget a close encounter paperback next year. Through all with a bear. They can approach his good work and many slowly., sedately, stealthily, but once appearances on behalf of charity they are upon you, its is one of the Mr Fowley has gathered celebrity most terrifying experiences you are status and now has a worldwide ever likely to have. fan club.
  • 43. How do we evaluate the tone of a text? What are we looking for/at? • • • • •