2. Development 1
What's going well with the design?
I think that the design itself is very simple and not very effective. There
isn't much about this that I like, although I do like the idea of having the
lines shooting out from the image of the can. I think that the overall
design is the same theme as the packaging and the magazine advert, but
that’s it.
What can be developed?
I think that the bubbles around the can need to be developed, perhaps
adding more feature to it like the dotting or changing the shape of it. I
also think that the stripes themselves need to be worked on as they don’t
match on both sides and are not bold enough. I also think that the colours
need to be worked on, perhaps I could do alternating coloured stripes and
I could also make the strips have more of a stroke, helping them to stand
out more.
3. Development 2
What's going well with the design?
I really like the explosion at the bottom of the page, featuring a
town up piece of paper with IRN-BRU 32 written on it. I also
think the background of the web banner is good because its
unusual and interesting to look at, and is using the colours that
INR-BRU have become known for, orange and blue. I was
struggling with where to have the placement of the cans
themselves on the banner, and was considering not putting
them on at all. I think without the cans the banner looked more
professional and less gaudy. This theme of the banner is
exciting and fun to look at, which will help the audience to be
interested in the product more.
What can be developed?
I think I need to develop a way to work the can into the design
of the web banner, because at the moment the can looks looks
out of place and doesn’t stand out enough. I think that I need to
get the IRN-BRU 32 bigger somehow, possibly by having at the
banner instead of the bottom.
4. Development 3
What's going well with the design?
I really like the way I have focused primarily on the name of the
product, having it in bold, bright lettering that stands out from the orange
background. I also like the way I created vein type things holding the can.
Although this banner is not similar to themes or designs I have already
done, I think that it is interesting and unusual.
What can be developed?
I like the idea of this web banner, but it is is unlike any of the products I
have created already so I would want to make it more pop art
themes, maybe by making the text itself in a pop art styled theme. I also
would need to develop the veins, making them more pop arty as well.
5. Development 4
What's going well with the design?
I like the blue and the orange of the web banner, I think that they are very
vibrant and and would stand out well on a background. I also like the pop
art element of this banner design, adding the pop art women and the font
used helped to cement this theme.
What can be developed?
I think that I could go into much more detail on the banner itself, adding
more shapes and textures into the background to make it even more pop
arty. I also think that I could further develop the woman, making her have
more detail on her face and also add more detail into the font/text. I could
also try and find a place for the can to be shown on the banner.
6. Development 5
What's going well with the design?
I really like the way I have combined the older styled pop art dots and the
more recognisable rotoscoping styled pop art. I think this theme is well
shown through this design. I also like the way the IRN-BRU 32 is in big
bold lettering, and is easy to read and to see. I have also managed to ensure
that I put the product on the web banner as well, having it in the top left
hand corner, nice and easy to see. I also like the variations of colours, how
some are really bright and others more muted, but still featuring orange
and blue For the main two colours that represent IRN-BRU.
What can be developed?
I think that I could develop the main
title of the web banner, somehow
making it bolder and to help it stand
out more. I also would want to try and
get the cans to look like they were part
of the shooting stars on the bottom left
hand corner, perhaps getting them to
look like they were shooting off the
page.
