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Answering your research question and making a smashing claim. Thesis or Thesicle?
Don't laugh... it's a real word. Source: the Oxford English Dictionary
Talk to a partner about the following: ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Thesis defined: ,[object Object],[object Object],Source: Oxford American Dictionary
What makes a strong thesis? ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
What's wrong with this thesicle? ,[object Object],Source: the Purdue Online Writing Lab,  http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/588/01/
How would you revise this to be DEBATABLE? ,[object Object],Source: the Purdue Online Writing Lab,  http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/588/01/ Thesis:
How would you revise this to be DEBATABLE? ,[object Object],Source: the Purdue Online Writing Lab,  http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/588/01/ Thesis 1: At least twenty-five percent of the federal budget should be spent on limiting pollution.
How would you revise this to be DEBATABLE? ,[object Object],Source: the Purdue Online Writing Lab,  http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/588/01/ Thesis 2: America's anti-pollution efforts should focus on privately owned cars.
What's wrong with this thesicle? ,[object Object],Source: the Purdue Online Writing Lab,  http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/588/01/
What needs to be defined or specified? ,[object Object],Source: the Purdue Online Writing Lab,  http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/588/01/ ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
How would you revise this to be FOCUSED? ,[object Object],Source: the Purdue Online Writing Lab,  http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/588/01/ Thesis:
How would you revise this to be FOCUSED? ,[object Object],Source: the Purdue Online Writing Lab,  http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/588/01/ Thesis focus: illegal drugs and gang violence. Thesis: Illegal drug use is detrimental because it encourages gang violence.
You Get the Idea
Any Questions?
Articulating your thesis Moving from your research question and notes to a working thesis.
Creating a Working Thesis ,[object Object]
Option 1: Organize your Evidence ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Option 2: Freewrite ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Creating a Working Thesis ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Get started! ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Meet with your Research Team ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
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