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What is the primary idea of the
      content in the articles?
The primary idea is about how to use a map-based
GPS car navigation system and how do car
navigation systems work.

One type of GPS navigation system involves a
monitor that displays a map; the other kind uses
voice recognition and a text display of the street
you're on. These instructions are for an Alpine map-
based system.

GPS has some convenient capability we need while
at the wheel,so the primary

idea is about car navigation system.
Do you think the individual sections and
headings in the document (articles) clearly
represent the idea that was communicated.
Explain the reasons behind your comments.

I think that individual sections and headings in the document clearly represent the idea that was
                                         communicated.

    In first article is written about How to Use a Map-Based GPS Car Navigation System.

Instructions of GPS Car Navigation is explained in an easily understood manner by nine step.

                  Select Route by Point of Internet is written by step of four.

              In two article is written about how do car navigation systems work.

            Content of navigation system is written in an easily understood manner.
What details are included in
                            the articles?
  The explanation of the usage of the car navigation system is described from step one to step
                                              nine.

   In concrete terms the method of displaying map of place which I want to go is described.

                          The method is using the up and down keys.

                            Next, choose a site for your destination.

                                      Finally, press enter.

                             This is the method of displaying map.

Other, car navigation capabilities and accent of GPS satellites and car navigation is written with
                                        a fine-tooth comb.
Was there anything that was
  confusing? If so, what is it?
No, there wasn't.

Because I think the individual sections and headings in the document clearly
represent the idea that was communicated ,I wasn't be confused.

I think that how to use a map-based GPS car navigation is explained in an
easily understood manner.

Other, I think that how do car navigation systems work is written in an
easily understood manner.

For example, car navigation system work is divided into four finding.

How to use Map-Based GPS Navigation System is written in an easily understood
manner by step.
What is good about the writing?
        Why is it good?
  Writing about how to use map-based GPS car navigation system is
                              good.

 Because everyone doesn't understand the usage of the car navigation
                             system,

  I think that writing about how to use map-based GPS car navigation
  system is good. Because it is difficult for elderly person's person to
                             understand quite,

I think that the explanation of the car navigation system of this article is
 very good. The explanation of the car navigation system of this article
                                 is written

                              for everyone.
Are there any errors that need
        to be corrected?
No,there are not.
How to use car navigation system is written accurately as below.
Step1: Read the instructions that come with the product.
Step2:Turn on the car's ignition.
Step3: Turn on the navigation system. A disclaimer will appear on the screen.
Step4: Press Enter on the remote to remove the disclaimer.
Step5: Press the Menu button on the remote.
Step6: Using the Up and Down keys on the remote control, select how you want the
system to find your route. When the selection is highlighted, push Enter on the
remote control. A new screen appears with a list of selections.
Step7: Using the Up and Down keys, choose a site for your destination, and press
Enter. A map appears, and the system calculates the route.
Step8: Listen to the voice prompting you to begin the trip. A map of the route
appears on screen.
Step9: Make the turn. Proceed to next turn when the system prompts you via voice
and map.
What specific suggestions for
improving the articles can you make?
I think that heading and document should be added.
Good point and bad point

of car navigation system should be written. I think
that good point is guiding the place which has not
been to the place in the destination if there is a car
navigation system. I think that bad point is high the
repairing cost. Other, the car navigation system is
high the price. I think that applied usage of the car
navigation system is explained. I think that I can
drive more happily by using the car navigation
system applying.
Identify three basic differences between how your
   group would author a similar document and how
   this author authored it (as you see it in the link).
I think that I write good point and bad point of car navigation
 system. Good point is guiding the place which has not been
   to the place in the destination if there is a car navigation
                             system.

 I think that I write about how to use a map-based GPS car
             navigation in a similar vein by step.

 I think that I write about introduction of commodity of car
                       navigation system.

    I introduces the price and the function of various car
                     navigation systems.
Study the following video carefully
     and then summarize 10 major points
     that you were able to understand.
One-Eye major point is option function.


Mail is turned over by using the optional feature and the photograph can be turned over.


Two-Eyes major point is to locating people in an Emergency.


Here is background info and a few options for keeping up with the whereabouts of family, friends and
employees.


Three-Eyes is GPS-enabled Cell Phones.


Motorola and Blackberry were the first GPS-enable phones to proliferate the United States.


Four-Eyes is Location-Based Services.


LBS providers have agreements with the wireless network carriers to receive data from a cell phone and
make it accessible to you via an Internet web site or call center.
Study the following video carefully
     and then summarize 10 major points
      that you were able to understand.

                                 Major point iPhone’s Faux GPS System.


 First off, Apple has managed to patch up a feature originally rumored to be in the iPhone: a GPS system.
However, it's still a virtual global positioning system (GPS)?a real one at this point would probably require
                                   a change in your actual iPhone hardware.


                               Major point how to get GPS-style directions.


 Go to the Maps section and press the Directions button. In the "From:" section, instead of typing in your
                       current address, press the little Bookmark icon to the right.


                                 Major point is home screen magagement.


One update that really should have been available six months ago and is now is movable icons. This allows
       you to reconfigure the order of the icons so as to better manage the iPhone's home screen.

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Peer review exercise 5

  • 1. What is the primary idea of the content in the articles? The primary idea is about how to use a map-based GPS car navigation system and how do car navigation systems work. One type of GPS navigation system involves a monitor that displays a map; the other kind uses voice recognition and a text display of the street you're on. These instructions are for an Alpine map- based system. GPS has some convenient capability we need while at the wheel,so the primary idea is about car navigation system.
  • 2. Do you think the individual sections and headings in the document (articles) clearly represent the idea that was communicated. Explain the reasons behind your comments. I think that individual sections and headings in the document clearly represent the idea that was communicated. In first article is written about How to Use a Map-Based GPS Car Navigation System. Instructions of GPS Car Navigation is explained in an easily understood manner by nine step. Select Route by Point of Internet is written by step of four. In two article is written about how do car navigation systems work. Content of navigation system is written in an easily understood manner.
  • 3. What details are included in the articles? The explanation of the usage of the car navigation system is described from step one to step nine. In concrete terms the method of displaying map of place which I want to go is described. The method is using the up and down keys. Next, choose a site for your destination. Finally, press enter. This is the method of displaying map. Other, car navigation capabilities and accent of GPS satellites and car navigation is written with a fine-tooth comb.
  • 4. Was there anything that was confusing? If so, what is it? No, there wasn't. Because I think the individual sections and headings in the document clearly represent the idea that was communicated ,I wasn't be confused. I think that how to use a map-based GPS car navigation is explained in an easily understood manner. Other, I think that how do car navigation systems work is written in an easily understood manner. For example, car navigation system work is divided into four finding. How to use Map-Based GPS Navigation System is written in an easily understood manner by step.
  • 5. What is good about the writing? Why is it good? Writing about how to use map-based GPS car navigation system is good. Because everyone doesn't understand the usage of the car navigation system, I think that writing about how to use map-based GPS car navigation system is good. Because it is difficult for elderly person's person to understand quite, I think that the explanation of the car navigation system of this article is very good. The explanation of the car navigation system of this article is written for everyone.
  • 6. Are there any errors that need to be corrected? No,there are not. How to use car navigation system is written accurately as below. Step1: Read the instructions that come with the product. Step2:Turn on the car's ignition. Step3: Turn on the navigation system. A disclaimer will appear on the screen. Step4: Press Enter on the remote to remove the disclaimer. Step5: Press the Menu button on the remote. Step6: Using the Up and Down keys on the remote control, select how you want the system to find your route. When the selection is highlighted, push Enter on the remote control. A new screen appears with a list of selections. Step7: Using the Up and Down keys, choose a site for your destination, and press Enter. A map appears, and the system calculates the route. Step8: Listen to the voice prompting you to begin the trip. A map of the route appears on screen. Step9: Make the turn. Proceed to next turn when the system prompts you via voice and map.
  • 7. What specific suggestions for improving the articles can you make? I think that heading and document should be added. Good point and bad point of car navigation system should be written. I think that good point is guiding the place which has not been to the place in the destination if there is a car navigation system. I think that bad point is high the repairing cost. Other, the car navigation system is high the price. I think that applied usage of the car navigation system is explained. I think that I can drive more happily by using the car navigation system applying.
  • 8. Identify three basic differences between how your group would author a similar document and how this author authored it (as you see it in the link). I think that I write good point and bad point of car navigation system. Good point is guiding the place which has not been to the place in the destination if there is a car navigation system. I think that I write about how to use a map-based GPS car navigation in a similar vein by step. I think that I write about introduction of commodity of car navigation system. I introduces the price and the function of various car navigation systems.
  • 9. Study the following video carefully and then summarize 10 major points that you were able to understand. One-Eye major point is option function. Mail is turned over by using the optional feature and the photograph can be turned over. Two-Eyes major point is to locating people in an Emergency. Here is background info and a few options for keeping up with the whereabouts of family, friends and employees. Three-Eyes is GPS-enabled Cell Phones. Motorola and Blackberry were the first GPS-enable phones to proliferate the United States. Four-Eyes is Location-Based Services. LBS providers have agreements with the wireless network carriers to receive data from a cell phone and make it accessible to you via an Internet web site or call center.
  • 10. Study the following video carefully and then summarize 10 major points that you were able to understand. Major point iPhone’s Faux GPS System. First off, Apple has managed to patch up a feature originally rumored to be in the iPhone: a GPS system. However, it's still a virtual global positioning system (GPS)?a real one at this point would probably require a change in your actual iPhone hardware. Major point how to get GPS-style directions. Go to the Maps section and press the Directions button. In the "From:" section, instead of typing in your current address, press the little Bookmark icon to the right. Major point is home screen magagement. One update that really should have been available six months ago and is now is movable icons. This allows you to reconfigure the order of the icons so as to better manage the iPhone's home screen.