1. Take out your
personal narrative

2. Agenda:
• Review of run-ons
• Partner practice fixing run-ons
• Complete P. 71 “PROOFREAD”
• Read your narrative to a partner.

3. Partner Practice
Partner A Partner B

4. SCENARIO 1

5. “#1. Brown bears include the grizzly and
the kodiak, the largest brown bear is the
kodiak.”

6. Partner A Partner B
I think #1 is a run-
on because…You are correct!

7. SCENARIO 2

8. Partner A Partner B
I think #1 is
correct.
Unfortunately, it’s not.
Now that you know it’s
a run-on, where do you
need to correct it?
I think the
sentence ends at
“kodiak.”
You are correct!

9. OR

10. Partner A Partner B
I think #1 is a run-
on because…
You are incorrect.
Circle the subject and
underline the verb.

11. R . T

12. For each sentence…
•I think that #1 is correct/a
run-on because…
•You are correct/incorrect
because…