8. Feedback Take out the jump cuts Good Put a soundtrack in the background Make parts smoother Join the music up properly at the beginning Change the aliens voice make it more realistic Make the story longer Add more scenes
9. Changes made Added and changed the soundtrack Took out jump cuts Made smoother Joined the soundtrack to the beginning properly Added a few more scenes
11. Feedback Good Like the soundtrack Like the sound effects e.g. Bubbles New scene added is better adds to context More shot types make it more interesting Good end product Extra scene added is good Movement of the space men could be more animated One jump cut could be taken out