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Language is at the core of user experience. From microcopy to error messages, from product information to legal text, the words you use matter. This session will look at how you make sure that your ...

Language is at the core of user experience. From microcopy to error messages, from product information to legal text, the words you use matter. This session will look at how you make sure that your copy is readable and actionable.

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  • 1. Clear Language and Readability Zurich Content Strategy Meetup September 24 2013
  • 2. What makes language clear? What makes texts readable?
  • 3. The obvious basics
  • 4. Readability The quality of written language that makes it easy to read and understand.
  • 5. Representational elements that make reading difficult • Small type, long lines, insufficient contrast. • Long paragraphs with no segmentation • Clutter.
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  • 7. Linguistic elements that help reading: • short words, short sentences. • familiar terms over technical terms • Syntactic simplicity: • no dependent clauses (Nebensätze) • Split up compound words: Parkettbodenschleifmaschinenenverleihfirma • Don‘t use machine-readable IDs for idetification of elements. (IBAN, Error Codes)
  • 8. High level elements that help. • coherence • consistency • Illustrations and diagrams • redundancy
  • 9. Familiarity: Fitting the target audience • The language used must reflect the target audience • You can only make it harder for everybody • Know for who you have to make it really easy. • Don‘t buy into the „Kompetenzvermutung“ nonsense. It‘s a trap.
  • 10. Measuring Readability: Fry readability graph Averagesentences/100words Average amount of syllables / 100 words
  • 11. Measuring Readability: Flesch-Reading-Ease FREen = 206.835 - ( 1.015 · ASL) - (85.6 · ASW) FREde = 180 - ASL - (58.5 · ASW) ASL = Average Sentence Length: Total words / total sentences http://de.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lesbarkeitsindex ASW = Average number of Syllables per Word Total syllables / total words
  • 12. What users want • Gain overview • Scan the content • Make decision „Is this for me?“
  • 13. Users don‘t read, they skim • Users won't read your text thoroughly in a word-by-word manner • The first two paragraphs must state the most important information.
  • 14. People scan web pages in an F-shaped pattern
  • 15. Make it scannable • Break down texts into concise paragraphs • Offer headings to paragraphs
  • 16. Signal vs Noise ratio The ratio of relevant to irrelevant information should be as high as possible. PENDENTPENDENTPENDENT Empfänger Fällig Betrag Krankenkassse Helsana 25.09.2013 235.65 UPC Cablecom 30.09.2013 76.50 GE Money Bank 08.10.2013 56.80 PendentPendent Krankenkassse Helsana 25.09.2013 235.65 UPC Cablecom 30.09.2013 76.50 GE Money Bank 08.10.2013 56.80
  • 17. Clarity Plain language Not ambiguous simple to the task no fillers
  • 18. This is a Swiss Ballot Paper for a referendum. The question asked has always this simple form.
  • 19. This is from the brochure accompanying the referendum.
  • 20. Short sentences. Scannable Subheads
  • 21. A far less readable ballot paper for a local referendum on a public credit.
  • 22. This is an Italian ballot paper on a change of legislation regarding electoral lists. The question contains every passage of the legislation that is being changed.
  • 23. Workflow
  • 24. Writing is rewriting. Revision is where the magic happens.
  • 25. Establish a workflow • Establish the workflow before the project starts • Discuss the Brand: voice / identity / existing material What is the message? • Who is in charge, who is not? • How many revisions are there going to be? • Who has the last word and why.
  • 26. Links • True writing is rewriting http://fmwriters.com/Visionback/Issue9/ true.htm • Wikipedia on Readability measurements: http://de.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lesbarkeitsindex • Kate Kiefer: Voice and Tone http://www.uie.com/brainsparks/2013/09/17/ kate-kiefer-lee-voice-and-tone-live/