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ENEMY
by
Amy Jackson, Mario Mantillas and Kiaran O’leary

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CUT IN
INT. SCENE- PHONE SCENE
In the frame an unknown person receives a text CLOSE UP which
is about Lola attacking her victim.
CUT TO:
INT. SCENE- LOLA AT HOME WITNESSING VIOLENCE
CLOSE UP and OVER THE SHOULDER SHOT Of Lola washing her hands
and hears her dad shout
DAD
All you do is fucking moan!
MUM
Please don’t hurt me!
MEDIUM SHOT Lola coming out of the bathroom and going down-
stairs.
CUT TO:
INT. SCENE- TAKES KNIFE
MEDIUM SHOT of Lola walking into the room and a CLOSE UP of
Lola picking up the knife and a EXTREME CLOSE UP of the knife
with a slow ZOOM.
CUT TO:
INT. SCENE- LOLA GETS WEAPON
Lola is seen from a LOW ANGLE SHOT running down the stairs and
enters the kitchen MEDIUM OVER THE SHOULDER SHOT. CLOSE UP
Lola takes a knife from the kitchen draw CAMERA PAUSE. FADE IN
Lola goes out the door. CUTS TO Lola speed walking down the
drive.
DIEGETIC SOUND OF FRONT DOOR BANGING
CUT TO:
EXT. SCENE- PARK WITH THE ENEMY - MORNING
TRACKING of Lola walking to the park. LONG OVER THE SHOULDER
SHOT Lola walks into the park and bumps into Victim one. ME-
DIUM SHOT of the two girls starring each other out and they

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get into a verbal dispute. The dispute dies down as result of
lola walking away TRACKING SHOT.
LOLA
What the fuck are you looking at?
VICTIM 1
What! say that
again? go on, i
dare you.
LOLA
I said what the fuck are you looking
at?
VICTIM 1
You you tramp
LOLA
Get out my face!
VICTIM 2
ER your a tramp, your just going to
end up like your mum!
Lola walks away from the argument, ignoring their comments as
they shout abuse.
CUT TO:
INT. CLASSROOM AGGRAVATION
OVER THE SHOULDER MEDIUM SHOT. The two victims are whispering
causing Lola to get paranoid. EYE LINE MATCH of Lola looking
at the clock. CUTS TO CLOSE UP of the clock.
TEACHER
Ok girls, Today we are going to look at stress and what causes
stress. In front of you you’ve got some sheets of images of
people that look like they might be stressed. Looking at the
top right hand picture, what can you tell me thats happening
in the picture.
VICTIM 2
She looks angry.

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LOLA
Thats obvious.
VICTIM 1
Thats obvious.
TEACHER
Lola, thank you. What else can you tell me about that picture?
What else can you tell me?
Lola taps her pen.
TEACHER
Lola can you stop tapping the pen please thank you.
CUT TO:
EXT. FIGHT SCENE
The recording shows Lola verbally abusing her victim and being
provoked resulting in Lola pulling out a knife. The video cuts
and the audience is left with a pause of the end caption of
the video in the unknown persons hand.
LOLA
What do you think your playing at?
VICTIM 1
What do you think your talking
about?
LOLA
What’s your problem? I didn’t do
anything.
LOLA
Shut up!
VICTIM 1
Get off me!
CUT TO:
INT. SCENE. LOLA REFLECTING

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CLOSE UP of LOLA giving a monologue on why she isolated her-
self and resorted to violence with peers.