5. Senior Member Pakistani
Nice 14 August is very special day .... well nice sharing
Sat Aug 13, 2016 11:30 am
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Dr Maqsood Hasni
Senior Proud Pakistani
punjab
aap ne tovajo farmaee is ke liay bari bari meharbani
Sun Aug 14, 2016 8:24 am
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I K QAZI
6. Moderator
Germany
Tamaam Ehliyaan e Wattan Ko 69 Wi Jishan e Azaadi Mubbarak
Ho.Shukriya Hasni Sahib!!!!!
Sun Aug 14, 2016 7:30 pm
http://www.forumpakistan.com/14-aguest-ik-din-hai-t128168.ht
ml#ixzz4HPLHFVoS
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ch0c0
Star Member
bht bht allwww...
xactly....
28. ویبیجی
tovajo ke liay ehsan'mand hoon.
Allah aap ko khush rahe
jald hi tafsilun arz karne ki koshesh karoon ga
lane lay janay ka kaam jabreel hi karta hai.
aql-e-kul bhi maroof hai
adami bila aql kaam chala rara hai
natijatun jo ho raha hai samnay hai
maqsood hasni
« فرور :بروزی07,2014
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Kabi Waqt mila to Suljhaonga teri Uljhanein
abhi Uljha hon bht Waqt ko Suljhane me !!!
iqbal
Full PK Member
Wed Dec 19, 2012 2:39 am
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tovajo ke liay shukarriya janab
Dr Maqsood Hasni
Senior Proud Pakistani
46. punjab
Fri Jan 18, 2013 3:07 pm
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EyMan
5 Star Member
Nice....
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bari bari meharbani janab
Allah aap sab ko khush rakhe
Dr Maqsood Hasni
Senior Proud Pakistani
47. punjab
Thu Mar 14, 2013 7:26 pm
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Esa karty hn, tum py marty hn,
Hum ny yun bhi to mar he jana hy
Ibn
5 Star Member
Sun Mar 17, 2013 1:35 am
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os pe is pe marme ki baat na karain
Allah aap ko Allah par marne wali zindgi ata farma'ay
48. Dr Maqsood Hasni
Senior Proud Pakistani
punjab
Sat Mar 23, 2013 9:53
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Esa karty hn, tum py marty hn,
Hum ny yun bhi to mar he jana hy,,
Ye sahi hey.....
EyMan
5 Star Member
Tue Apr 09, 2013 3:49 pm
49. _________________
haan marna to hai hi kayoon'na halal mout mara ja'ay. zindgi
eak bar milti hai is se bai'waqat kisi bare kaz ke hawala se monh
mora ja sakta hai.
Dr Maqsood Hasni
Senior Proud Pakistani
punjab
Mon Apr 15, 2013 10:24 pm _________________
Very Nice and beautiful heart touching poetry
IramShah
Lahore
Wed Jun 05, 2013 9:30 pm
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ahbaab ki tovajo ke liay ehsan'mand hoon. Allah aap sab ko
khush rakhe
Dr Maqsood Hasni
Senior Proud Pakistani
punjab
Mon Jun 24, 2013 8:45 pm _________________
nice poetry shair ki ha ap ne
thanks dear friend
77tahmina
Thu Aug 01, 2013 4:34 pm ________________
shukarriya janab.............
51. Allah aap ko khush rakhe
Dr Maqsood Hasni
Senior Proud Pakistani
punjab
Sat Sep 21, 2013 10:03 pm
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So Nice and more beautiful poetry. I like your sharing. Well Done
faiza222
Senior Proud Pakistani
Pakistan
Wed Nov 13, pm _________________
52. Some time it is difficult to express ones feelings.Or to convey
what is in the heart inside.Sometime the other side do not
conceive what you want to convey.But it is correct to say what you
want say:
I K QAZI
Moderator
Germany
Thu May 29, 2014 7:27 pm
http://www.forumpakistan.com/aazad-kar-dou-t94057.html#ixzz4HPKrCW2R
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سے منہ کس
55. کر دع ل اندرونیں
س مول انیکہ مدحیں
Thu Jul 24, 2014 9:36 pm
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Hamesha hi nahi rehte kabhi chehre naqabon main
Sabhi kirdar khulte hain kahani khatm hone par
mobi_loger
islamabad
Thu Sep 11, 2014 3:53 pm
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khoob
atay rahiay aur kuch na'kuch zaroor share karte rahiay
56. Dr Maqsood Hasni
Senior Proud Pakistani
punjab
Thu Sep 11, 2014 5:40 pm
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bohot nice Dr saab,,
n Mobi yu wer also v nice,,,,,,keep sharing,,
Ibn
5 Star Member
Sun Sep 14, 2014 7:09 pm
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57. is khasusi tovajo ke liay ehsan'mand hoon
Dr Maqsood Hasni
Senior Proud Pakistani
punjab
Mon Sep 22, 2014 9:12 pm
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boht umda sharing Smile
Bin-Momin
Forum Family Member
Thu Jan 08, 2015 11:27 am
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58. Wah g Wah bht zaberdast k yah hamy Poetry daikny ko mil rahe
hn.... Razz
doragames
Islamabad
Tue Oct 13, 2015 8:37
http://www.forumpakistan.com/kis-monh-se-t114540.html#ixzz4HPL2FmUT
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Dr.Hasni aap kaa qalaam behtreen hai, dheron daad lekin
Janaab kitne log isse parh sakte hain yeh mujhe maaloom nahin.
Main khud agar text books kee tarah se likhaa ho to urdu
asaanee se parh saktaa hoon warnaa zaraa mushkil hotee hai.
icon_flower
59. Clapping Smiley
surindarn
« September 26, 2014»
http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/urdu-poets/%DA%A9%
D8%B3-%D9%85%D9%86%DB%81-%D8%B3%DB%92-t117
236.0.html
Dil kay goshoon par
Sagar pi kar
Her qatra piyas somondar
Palkoon ka sawun
Janay kab barsay ga
60. Faraat ka damun
Sholay lay kay bhaga hai
Sahil shakti kis say mangay?!
Mothi band kar lo
Palkoon kay os par
Ratoon kay sapnay
Suraj ki aankhoon main
Bheek kay kokray
Kali zulfoon kay mundar
Maskan hain kali jiba waloon kay
Janay say pehlay
61. Aankhoon main dhonwaan bhar lo
Chand ka chehra
Rawan ki bhagti lay kar
Mosa kay koon say
Dil kay goshoon par
Raban hi rab likh raha hai
« رچ م :بروز30,2009, »
janaab Hasni SaaHeb: aadaab!
aap kee naz^meN dekheeN. maashaa Allah aap bohat likh rahe
haiN. meHnat aur shauq ke saath mut^aali,a'h bhee mil jaaYe to
teHreer meN nikhaar baRh jaataa hai. apnee taKhleeqaat par
62. meree daad qubool keejiYe. is ke ba's do teen baateN kehne kee
ijaazat chaahataa hooN. buraa nah maaneN. in baatoN se aap
kee qadr-afzaayee maqSood hai, tanqeed naheeN.
ek saath itnee bohat se naz^meN lagaane se log in ko dekh
naheeN paate haiN. kam likhiYe aur dostoN ko paRhne aur
raaYe dene kaa mauqa' deejiYe. warnah faa,idah kam ho gaa.
doosree baat yeh keh Roman Urdu kaa koyee saadah aur achhaa
niz^aam apnaa leejiYe aur usee ko ista'maal keejiYe. maujoodah
shakl meN aap kee teHreer paRhne aur samajhne meN diqqat
hotee hai. teesre yeh keh likh kar Khud bhee paRh liyaa keejiye
taa.k Ghalat^iyaaN kam se kam hoN. aur sab se aaKhir meN yeh
a'rZ^ hai keh agar naz^m kaa markazee Khayaal apne Zehn
meN saaf rakheN aur us kee adaa,igee meN waZ^aaHat kaa
ehitmaam kareN to sab ko ziyaadah faa,idah ho gaa.
63. maiN is Khat^ ke tawassut^ se apne deegar dostoN se bhee
iltimaas kartaa hooN keh woh Dr Hasni aur doosre nau-waarid
dostoN kaa Anjuman meN istiqbaal kareN aur un kee
taKhleeqaat par chand alfaaz^ hee sahee lekin kuchh likh diyaa
kareN. isee t^araH chiraaGh se chiraaGh jaltaa hai. ham ek
doosre se Ghaafil hoN ge to yeh chiraaGh bujh jaaYe gaa.
« اپر :بروزیل01,2009 »
Sarwar A. Raz
http://www.bazm.urduanjuman.com/index.php?topic=3347.0
Raam bhali karay ga
64. Hath kay badlay hath
Khon kay badlay khon
Jan kay badlay jan
Adoo nay
Magar loot liya hai
Kis say faryaad karain
Wohi monsaf howa hai
Jis kay hath main pathar
Baghal man khanjar
Maqola yah baqi hai
Char ja baita suli
65. Raam bhali karay ga
« اپر :بروزیل01,2009صبح , »
mukarramee Hasni SaaHeb: aadaab!
aap ko UrduAnjuman meN dekh kar masarrat huyee.
Khush-aamadeed! yaqeen hai keh yahaaN ke dost aur maaHaul
aap ko pasand aaYeN ge aur aap apnee shirkat se Urdu kaa
kaam baRhaane meN hamaaree madad kareN ge. shukriyah.
aap kee muKhtaSar naz^m dekhee. aaj kal ke Haalaat par
achhaa tabSirah hai. aur is Haalat kaa koyee Hal bhee naz^ar
naheeN aataa. aap ke Khayaalaat achhe haiN aur in kaa iblaaGh
bhee Zarooree hai. bayaan meN behtaree kee gunjaa,ish hai.
meraa Khayaal hai keh aap ko sab se pehle yeh sochnaa ho gaa
66. keh kaun see Sinf meN likhaa jaaYe, ya'nee paaband naz^m,
aazaad naz^m yaa nacree naz^m? us ke ba'd unheeN uSooloN
par likhaa aur parkhaa jaa saktaa hai.
Anjuman meN aate rahiYe. hameN aap kee Z^aroorat hai. aur
apne dostoN ko bhee da'wat deejiye. shukriyah.
Sarwar A. Raz
« اپر :بروزیل01,2009 ,»
http://www.bazm.urduanjuman.com/index.php?topic=3369.0
PALKOON PAR SHAAM
Godaz palkoon par shaam gozari
67. Her mosam yaad ka nishter
Her subh Sehra ka pather
(Suraj) Binaee ka mamba
Aakhain kho baitha
Her Aasha zakhmi zakhmi
Her nagama
Izraeli Israfili
Khoon main bhiga Aanchal
Gunga ka
Her rasta
Chup ka kaidi
68. Darya kinaray
Moun daikhay hain
Bai'aab nadi main
Gulab ki kashain
Pani pani
Palkain,
Sanpoon kay ghar
Janein kidher
Palkoon ki shaam
Her shaam par bhari hai
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69. bahut umdah Janaab, dheron daad.
surindarn
December 08, 2014,
http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/urdu-poets/palkoon-par-R
eply
Mujh ko mun mandar main saja lo
Kah aankh darichoon say
Qos-e-qaza kay rangoon main dhal kar
Ganga jal main dhol kar
Baharoon kay mosam jhankain
Khursheed shabad
70. Jiwan dharti ko binaee bakhshain
Tairi aaghosh main palti moskanain
Mairi tairi mirti ko
Amarta kay bardan main tankain
Mujh ko mun mandar main saja lo
Kah Kaam Daiva
Her bar kab,
Khush bahti ka mangal sutar
Golab galo main rakhta hai
Kali ratoon main
Hontoon ki hidat bharta hai
71. Mujh ko mun mandar main saja lo
Kah tairay aankh darichoon say
Baharoon kay mosan jhankain
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Bohat khoob Dr Maqsood ji...
honeyrose
« March 29, 2009, 08:53:11 AM »
Good One Hasni Ji !!!!!
«March 30, 2009,AM »
http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shairi-e-zindagi/aankh-da
richoon-say-t44935.0.html
72. Sheh ki lathi
Anarkali kay
Diwaroon main chonnay ka
Jab bhi mosam aata hai
Aas kay mosam mar jatay hain
Her jatay hain
Chand aur suraj
Aaksh aur dharti
Ziast kay sab rang
Phikay par jatay hain
73. Kal ki mang sajanay ko
Ishq phir bhi zinda rehta hai
Dukh sukh sehta hai
Yah khail shazadoon ka hai
Shazaday kab martay hain
Sheh ki lathi
Anarkali kay sar par
Mandlati rehti hai
Kamzoor ozoo par
Sab mosam bhari hotay hain
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74. accha likha hai aapne Dr. ji
Roja
«March 30, 2009, AM »
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Bohat Achche Maqsood Ji,./
Nice One.
Azeem Aarzu
«March 30, 2009, AM »
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aap ahbaab maira sarmaya hain.
Allah Sahib aap sab ko kush a
75. Dr Maqsood Hasni
«March 30, 2009, AM »
http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shairi-e-zindagi/sheh-ki-lathi-t44994.0.html
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Shaam bhi mairi hai
Tairay jivan ki her nikhri subh
Dar mairay par, sajda kartay gozri
Khushoon ki sari kalyaan
Mairay qadmoon main dhar kar
Eak naam maira tairay hisay aaya
Yah kali ratain
76. Khoof par bhari ratain
Damun main tairay rakh kar
Aasha ki mirti ka
Kayoon saman karoon
Tairi subh mairay mathay ka jhomar
Tairi shaam maira oran hai
Tairi subh bhi mairi thi
Tairi shaam bhi mairi hai
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Bahut hi khoobsurat likha hai aapne..
{Angel}
77. «March 30, 2009, AM »
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Bahut khoob Applause
Roja
«March 30, 2009AM »
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aap donoon k liay mairay dil main bari izzat aur ehtaram hai
Eshvar aap donoon ki her kamna puri
Dr Maqsood Hasni
«March 30, 2009AM »
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78. Nysha
wah wah very nice gain. superb!
«March 30, 2009, PM »
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mohabat aur itna piyar dainay k badlay mein na'cheez kiya day
sakta hoon.
mairay pas duaoon k siwa kiya hai?!
Allah sahib aap ko barkat day.
Dr Maqsood Hasni
« March 30, 2009, PM »
http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shairi-e-zindagi/shaam-bhi-mairi-hai-t44996.0.html
79. Mujhy ik Khaab likhna hai
Mujhy ik khaab likhna hai
Aankhoon main mahtaab likhna hai
Aankhain hi kiya
Sar Bil ki tajori main para hai
Mairay purkhoon ki yah kamaee
Os kay hath kaisay aaee
Mairay kisi apnay nay
Apni zarorat kay liay
Kuch takoon main
80. Kahein os ko na day aaya ho
Pochna to ho ga
Maira sar borida jism
Mohtasib tak jaay kaisay
Faraz ka qaraz chokaay kaisay
Kiya sonay, sonaay kaisay
Aaj baishak,
Mal-o-manal aziz rakhta hai
Apni aankhoon kay evaz
Day sakta hoon mein
Khizr ki chaap
81. Jo ab mairi zarorat nahain
Mujhy ik khaab likhna hai
Aankhoon main mahtaab likhna hai
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Nice One Again Maqsood Ji,.
Azeem Aarzu
«March 30, 2009, AM »
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Wah wah dr. sb. aap bahut accha likhte ho. Daad kabul kijiyega.
and be regular.
Roja
«March 30, 2009,AM »
82. ***
Once again so nice to read such lines from you..
You write really well.. Keep writing plz
{Angel}
« March 30, 2009,AM »
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lafzoon kay moamla main kam hi kamzoor parta hoon likin aaj
janay lafz kahaan gay kah shukarriya ada karnay k qabil bhi
nahain raha.
aap sab maira asasa hain.
Eshvar aap sab ko hamaisha salamat rakhy.
Dr Maqsood Hasni
83. «March 30, 2009, AM »
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Wow Very nice Dr Ji. kya khoob likha hai. keep writing....
Nysha
«March 30, 2009,AM »
{Angel}
« March 30, 2009,AM »
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Khoobsurat Alfaazon ko hamesha taarifein hi milti hia...
{Angel}
«March 30, 2009, 12:00:57 PM »
84. ***
shukarreya janab
Dr Maqsood Hasni
« March 31, 2009, AM »
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Bahoot khoob Dr. Hasni ji!
Rau
«March 31, 2009, AM »
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tovajo k liay,
bari bari mehar'bani janab.
85. Dr Maqsood Hasni
March 31, 2009, AM »
http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shairi-e-zindagi/mujhy-ek
-khaab-likhna-hai-t44995.0.html
Bai'nawa dastak
Reet bot ki shanasaee mangay
Ishq karbala si aabla paee mangay
Hosn talu kay dosh
Bala ka golnosh
Chasham bakaf nikla
86. Zist nay hathoon hath liya
Dhoop main saya-e-shajar tehra
Koee ossay namood-e-sahar samjha
Wo paikar-e-firdous
Aankh kay sab tarkash
Jo sath laya tha
Kab chala paya tha
Apnay saay say lot giya
Aaena patharoon say
Apni kichioon ki binaee mangay
Lafzoon ki bainawa dastak
87. Fakhtaoon say bairiyaee mangay
Parsaee mangay
Darya baresh
Sehra badloon say rihaee mangay
Zist ka hr naqsh
Sila-e-bairadaee mangay
Reet bot ki shanasaee mangay
Ishq karbala se aabla pae mangay
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bahoot khoob Dr. ji behad umada likha hai aapne... kadi gehrai
hai isme
Nysha
88. « March 31, 2009, AM »
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tovajo farmae k liay shukar'gozar hoon.
Allah aap ko kush rakhay.
Dr Maqsood Hasni
«March 31, 2009, AM »
http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shairi-e-zindagi/baibawa-
dastak-t45002.0.html
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Mein jo bhi hoon
89. Mein jo bhi hoon
Is say kiya
Chaand aur suraj ki kirnoon par
Maira bhi to haq hai
Dharti ka her mosam
Khuda ka her ghar
Maira bhi to hai
Quran ho kah Gita
Romrain ka her qissa
Baebal ka her warqa
Garanth ka her panna
90. Maira bhi to hai
Taqseem ka dar
Jab bhi khulta hai
Laat kay daftar ka her munshi
Barood ka malik
Parchi ka mangat
Taqseem ka dar band kar daita hai
Daftari molaan kay monh main
Kheer ka chancha rehta hai
Pandat aur Father
Madrassay ka mashtar
91. Haan naan kay pul par baithay
Totay ko fakhta kehtay hain
Dadgar kay dar ka sawali
Pani balota hai
Kamtar say bhi kamtar
Kalaj ka monshi
Jivan'dan hawa ko tarsay
Gholamoon kay sum pitay
Barshoon ki zad main hai
Sab acha ka tilk saja kar
Sofaid ghar kay chamchay
92. Toni kay karchay
Taqat kay pait main
Korbal korbal kartay yah kiray
Ajmal ka monh charatay hain
Raam aur Esa kay bool
Maical Jaksan ki phorti
Kareshma ki chosti main
Rol khol gay hain
Masael ki rori par baitha
Mein gonga behra
Zakhmi zakhmi
93. Madinay walay ki rah daikhay hoon
Ali Ali pokaray hoon
Nanak say bhudhi'maan
Lakchaman aur Baha say Veer
Talashay hoon
Mein jo bhi hoon
Is say kiya
Mithay boloon par
Maira bhi to haq hai
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Aap ki feelings aapki soch...bohot hi umdah... Bohot hi Khoob
Hasni Ji
94. Celmira
« March 31, 2009, AM »
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khasusi tovajo k liay ehsan'mand hoon.
Dr Maqsood Hasni
« March 31, 2009, AM »
http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shairi-e-zindagi/mein-jo-bhi-hoon-t45014.0.html
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Sonny main aaya hai
Sonny main aaya hai
Hum aagay bhar gay hain
Taraqi kar gay hain
95. Suraj ab sharaq say othta hai?!
Sofaid ghar kay mundar ka bout
Kis Mahmood nay tora hai?!
Os ki gardan ka sarya
Kis Tipu nay phora hai?!
Pound satarling dallor
Ropay kay dou miltay hai?!
Sonny main aaya hai
Hum aagay bhar gay hain
Taraqi kar gay hain
Baiwa ko tok milta hai,
96. Woh pait bhar khati hai?!
Ghareeb ki bitya
Doli charti hai?!
Jo jivan dan karay
Wo daroo ki shishi
Moft main milti hai?!
Sonny main aaya hai
Hum aagay bhar gay hain
Taraqi kar gay hain
Mosa ho kah Esa
Girjay aur Haikal kay zindan say
97. Mokt howay hain?!
Budh Ram Baha
Kah Nanak kay pairo hoon
Ya phir
Chirad Shrif kay basi
Apna jivan jitay hai?!
Sonny main aaya hai
Hum aagay bhar gay hain
Taraqi kar gay hain
Gotay aur Bali
Taigor tay Jami
98. Sue Feng aur Shelle
Sab kay tehray hain?!
Molaan Pandat aur Gijay ka waris
Insanoon ko insanoon kay kaam aanay ki kehta hai?!
Sonny main aaya hai
Hum aagay bhar gay hain
Taraqi kar gay hain
Shair aur bakri
Eak ghaat pay pani pitay hain,
Eak kach main rehtay bastay hain?!
Saithoon ki basti main
99. Mil bant kar khanay ki charcha hai?!
Khail rishwat ka nakaam howa hai?!
Monsaf,
Kayoonkar Iman Quran ki kehta hai?!
Sonny main aaya hai
Hum aagay bhar gay hain
Taraqi kar gay hain
Mun tan ka waris
Tan mun ka bhaidi
Jab bhi tehray ga
Jivan ka her sukh
100. Qadmoon ki thokar
Ambar kay os par
Insan ka ghar ho ga
Sonny main aaya hai
Hum aagay bhar gay hain
Taraqi kar gay hain
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Bohot Khoob Hasni Ji
Celmira
« April 01, 2009, AM »
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101. wow Very nice! bhaoot khoob likha hai aapne.
Nysha
« April 01, 2009, AM »
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Nice One Again Maqsood Ji,.
Yunhi Likhte Rahiye,.
Pardhne Ka Mazaa Milta Rahega,.
Nice One,.
Azeem Aarzu
« April 01, 2009, AM »
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102. aap sahiban ki mohabat mairay liay bari anmool hai.
Ehvar ki kirpa aap sab par bani rahay
Dr Maqsood Hasni
«Reply #4 on: April 01, 2009, 09:31:07 AM »
http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shairi-e-zindagi/sonnay-main-aaya-hai-t45018.0.html
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Mein janta hoon
Tumharay aanay ki aasha
Din bhar,
Mujh ko zinda rakhti hai
Suraj kay sath
Mein bhi mar jata hoon
103. Suraj ki mirtu par
Gharab lahoo se obalta hai
Talu kay sath hi
Yaas ki lahad say
Aas,
Mujhy otha lati hai
Mairi aankhain
Mairi palkain
Jivan ki dehleez par
Saj sanwar kay
Baith jati hain
104. Mein janta hoon
Jab tum
Mairay kochay say
Gozro gay
Tumharay aanay ka wo pal
Mout ka pal ho ga
Tumharay naaanay ka
Yah pal
Sadyoon say
Jivan aur mirti kay bich
Diwar-e-chin ban kar
105. Hael chala aata hai
Tumharay aanay ki ommeed
Din bhar
Mujh ko zinda rahti hai
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sajid_ghayel
Bohat khoob Dr. Saheb aap ek bilkul naye andaz me apne kalam
pesh karte hain, jo kabile tareef hain. Aapki ek ghazal padhne ki
badi ummeed hain....
«Reply #1 on: April 01, 2009, 05:43:12 AM »
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Wow .. Lovely Thumbs UP
106. Roja
« April 01, 2009, AM »
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Bohot Khoob Hasni Ji
Celmira
« April 01, 2009, AM »
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Bohat Achche Maqsood Ji, Nice One,.
Azeem Aarzu
« April 01, 2009, 07 AM »
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107. aap dost mujhy apni yaad main rakhtay hain yah mairay liay
bohat bara izaz hai.
Allah aap sab ko kuch rakhy
Dr Maqsood Hasni
«April 01, 2009, 09:39:08 AM »
http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shairi-e-zindagi/mein-janta-hoon-t45032.0.html
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Sadyoon say
Ankh somondar
Jaisay tabeer say oljha khaab
Paimanay say lipti sharaab
Lehrain samait kar soya somondar
108. Chop main khoya somondar
Magar bala ka chasham shanas
Khoon main dobi piyas
Dam toorti aas
Shanakht odas odas
Kinaray somondar kay
Pursakoon sahi
Magar teh main samri ka bhachra
Aur saleeb-e- Essa
Ai kash koee aaay
Bond bond piyas laay
109. Rooh ki bhook mitaay
Kirishan kay geet sonaay
Magar boti boti anna ki maslihat ki qabr
Koch kay qaflay kohlu kay baiel
Baihimat hoslay
Zindgi ka qraz hain
Sadyoon say karbala
Odasi ka somondar
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wah wah,
Bahut hi khoob... Applause
110. {Angel}
«April 03, 2009, AM »
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Bohat Achche Maqsood Ji,.
Azeem Aarzu
« April 03, 2009, AM »
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banda'navazi k liay aap donoon ka shukarreya.
Dr Maqsood Hasni
« April 03, 2009, AM »
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111. bahoot khoob DR. Ji
Nysha
« April 03, 2009, AM »
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bari bari meharbani janab.
« April 03, 2009, PM »
Dr Maqsood Hasni
http://www.yoindia.com/shayaaridab/shairi-e-zindagi/sadyoon-s
ay-t45050.0.html
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Teh karnay say pehlay
112. Yah teh karnay say pehlay
Kah ab doo rastoon par chaltay hain
Zara sochna
Dil say niklo gay kaisay
Yah bhi kah
Tairay mun aangan main
Mairi mohabatoon kay dairay hain
Soch ki sirioon par
Wafa kay naqash-e-marmarein
Phailay howay hain
Yah teh karnay say pehlay
113. Zara sochna
Rastay anjanay hain
Kahein iqrar kay somandar ki gehraeyaan
Kahein bainoqi inkar ki khaeyaan
Bhoji aankhoon kay sitaray
Dohaee dain gay
Lot aaoo
Tum kab doo rastoon kay rahi ho
Yah teh karnay say pehlay
Zara sochna
Mairay baichain ratjagay
114. Taira rasta rokain gay
Damun say pakrain gay
Chopa kar cehra tum apna
Mairi mohabatoon kay suraj say
Kayoonkar nikal pao gay?!
Yah teh karnay say pehlay
Kah ab doo rastoon par chaltay hain
Zara sochna
Mairi bahoon main aakash si vosatain hain
Tairay thakay qadmoon ko
Mairay hath sehlaein gay
115. Tairi garam sansoon ko
Aanch jazboon ko
Mairi chahat kay mashroob
Pinay ko milain gay
Phir kehta hoon
Yah teh karnay say pehlay
Kah ab doo rastoon par chaltay hain
Zara sochna
Kah ehal-e-wafa ka itbaar baqi rahay
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Bohot Khoob Hasni Ji
116. Celmira
« April 03, 2009, PM »
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janab ki tovajo aur mohabat k liay dil-o-jan say ehsan'mand
hoon.
Allah aap ko salamat rakhy.
Dr Maqsood Hasni
« April 04, 2009, AM »
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wah wah kya baat hai Dr. ji. behad umda likha hai . keep writing
......
Nysha
117. «April 04, 2009, AM »
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mein janab ki tovajo mohabat aur hosla'afzae k liay shukar'gozar
hoon.
Dr Maqsood Hasni
« April 04, 2009, AM »
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Bahut bahut khoobsurat shayri hai, har ek alfaaz dilko chhu
jaata hai...
{Angel}
« April 04, 2009, AM »
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118. bari bari mehar'bani janab.
Allah aap ko kush rakhy.
Dr Maqsood Hasni
« April 04, 2009, AM »
http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shairi-e-zindagi/teh-karna
y-say-pehlay-t44993.0.html
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Ik Pal
Ik pal nay
Aaksh aur dharti ko
Ik dhagay main bon kay
119. Rang dhanak ochalay
Doja pal
Jo bhik tha pehlay pal ki
Khisay say otra
Mathay ki raikha tehra
Kirpa aur dan ka pal
Phun chakar ka mara
Girta hai monh kay bal
Silwat say pak sahi
Phir bhi,
Hantal say karwa
120. Otran ka phal
Ulfat main,
Kuch day kar
Panay ki icha
Hatam say hai chal
Gairat say aari
Halaq main tapka
wo qatra,
Soqrat ka zahir
Na Ganga jal
Mehar mohabat say bharpoor
121. Neem ka pani
Na karwa na khara
Wo to
Aab-e-zam zam
Os main Rehman ka bal
Her farzana
Ehad say mokti chahay
Her diwana
Ehad ka bandi
Mar mitnay ki batain
Taltatay rehna
122. Kal ta kal
Jab bhi
Pal ki bigri kal
Dar Nanak kay baitha
Baikal, baikal
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Bohot Khoob Hasni Ji
Celmira
« March 29, 2009, PM »
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Good 1 Hasni ji
123. Roja
« March 29, 2009, PM »
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Nce one hasni ji
jannatjahan
« March 29, 2009, PM »
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Great, Hasni Ji !!!!!!!!!
karndhar
« March 30, 2009, AM »
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124. -Rahim-
«March 30, 2009, AM »
Nice one Hasni jee
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Dr Maqsood Hasni
« March 30, 2009, AM »
aap sab mairay liay bari maniviat rakhtay hain.
mein aap sab ki mohabat ka qaraz'dar hoon.
Palan'har aap sab ko kush rakhay
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Nysha
125. «March 30, 2009, AM »
Very NICe Hasni Ji
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Dr Maqsood Hasni
«March 30, 2009, AM »
bari bari meharbani janab
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Pooja
« April 06, 2009, PM »
bahoot khoob Hasni ji
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126. tovajo kay liay ehsan'mand hoon.
Eshvar aap par apni kirpa banay rakhy.
Dr Maqsood Hasni
« April 06, 2009, PM »
http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shairi-e-zindagi/ek-pal-t44961.0.html
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Jagtay rehn
Choor tairay sohaag ki choriaan chora na lay
Jagtay rehna
Chanda ki koe mast kiran aankhoon ki masti
127. Hontoon ki surkhi
Chora na lay
Jagtay rehna
Hawa ka koee jhonka
Tairay badan, tairay cehray
Haya-o-taqadas kay sab reshtay
Apnay napak lams say
Choor choor na kar day
Jagtay rehna
Shab kay pechlay pehar ki anaetoon main
Khuda tujh ko bhi shareek kar lay
128. Jagtay rehna
Gholab chanda ki ragoon say
Sari shabnum nachoor na lay
Jagtay rehna
Raqeeb tujh ko tairi mohabatoon say
Mehroom na kar day
Jagtay rehna, Mairay dost
jagtay rehna
Jaagna hi zindgi,
Jagtay hi aazad hain
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129. sajid_ghayel
« April 13, 2009, AM »
Bohat khoob Doctor Saheb...
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aap ki mohabat aap ki tovajo mairay liay bari maneviat ki hamil
hai.
Allah aap ko kush rakhy
Dr Maqsood Hasni
« April 13, 2009, AM »
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Wah wah Dr. Ji wah kya baat hai. bahoot khoob likha hai.
Nysha
130. «April 13, 2009, AM »
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janab nay apni mohabat anaet aur tovajo main rakha,
yahhi maira hasal hai.
Eshvar ki daya aur kirpa aap par bani rahay.
issi tara apni yaad main rakheay
Dr Maqsood Hasni
«April 13, 2009, AM »
http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shairi-e-zindagi/jagtay-rehna-t45333.0.html
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Laaj
131. Fart-e-Jajbaat main jab tum nay
Anabi hont apnay
Hontoon par mairay rakh diay
Zidagi!
Mein to
Oon lamhoon ki laaj nibha raha hoon
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Azeem Aarzu
« April 17, 2009, »
Bohat Achche Maqsood Ji, Nice One,.
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Dr Maqsood Hasni
132. « April 17, 2009, PM »
shukarreya janab
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Rajesh Harish
«April 17, 2009, PM »
Nice one Hasni Ji
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Dr Maqsood Hasni
«April 17, 2009, PM »
shukarriya janab
Eshvar ki kirpa aap par bani rahay
http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shairi-e-zindagi/laag-t45454.0.html
134. *********
khamosh_aawaaz
«April 18, 2009, 01:02:06 AM »
VERY NICE LINES ....DR SB
K_A
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Dr Maqsood Hasni
«April 18, 2009, AM »
janab ki es tovajo aur mohabat k liay mumnoon hoon.
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Nysha
135. «April 18, 2009, AM »
Very Nice Dr , Maqsood Ji!
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Tanha(Saurabh)
Maqbool Shayar
« April 18, 2009, 10:15:17 AM »
bohat khoob Hasni ji!
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Dr Maqsood Hasni
«April 18, 2009, AM »
janab ki tovajo nay maira hosla boland kiya hai.
136. Allah Sahib aap ko kush rakhy.
http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shairi-e-zindagi/yaksaan-t45460.0.html
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Sanjh
Bahmi ehtaram say nibh rahi hai
Bailuos sanjh hai hamari
Jab woh roth jatay hain
Hum mana laitay hain
Hum rothain to,
Raqeeb ki ban aati hai
Sar-e-Mehfal tohein kay dar say
137. Hum khud hi man jatay hain
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Azeem Aarzu
« April 17, 2009, PM »
Nice One Again Maqsood Bhai,.
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Rajesh Harish
«April 17, 2009, PM »
Nice one Hasni Ji
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Dr Maqsood Hasni
138. « April 17, 2009, PM »
navazesh,
meharbani janab
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khamosh_aawaaz
« April 18, 2009, AM »
NICE LINES............DR SB.
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Dr Maqsood Hasni
« April 18, 2009, AM »
shukarreya janab
139. *********
Nysha
« April 18, 2009, AM »
Very Nice Dr, Ji! Keep writing................
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Dr Maqsood Hasni
« April 18, 2009, AM »
janab nay hamaisha mairi hosla afzae farmae hai.
nahain janta aap ka kin alfaz main shukariya ada karoon.
Eshvar aap ko her moamla main safal rakhy.
http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shairi-e-zindagi/sanjh-t45455.0.html
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140. Taraqqi
Tariki mehman bani ojaloon ki
« April 19, 2009, AM »
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wah ji wa kiya baat hai.
saaz_haldwanvi
« April 21, 2009, PM »
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141. ye mehman sahar hone tak hai
maqsood se mash-hoor hone tak hai
a-daab !
[saaz haldwanvi]
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Dr Maqsood Hasni
« April 21, 2009, PM »
aap ki mohabat aur pazirie k sabab kuch na'kuch qalam say
nikal jata hai.
dua hai,
aap par sada Hazrat Barana ji ki kirpa ka hon barsta rahay aur
kushaan aap ka moqadar rahain.
143. khamosh_aawaaz
« April 19, 2009, AM »
KYAA BAAT HAI DR SB............. NETAAON KAA YAHI HAAL
HAI
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Dr Maqsood Hasni
«April 19, 2009, AM »
shukariya janab
Eshvar aap ko her moamaly main safl rakhy.
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Tanha(Saurabh)
Maqbool Shayar
144. «April 20, 2009, AM »
bohat khoob kaha aapne hasni sahab.....
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Celmira
« April 20, 2009, AM »
Nice one Hasni Ji
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Dr Maqsood Hasni
« April 20, 2009, AM »
aap donoon dostoon ki es mohabat aur inyat k liay mumnoon
hoon.
145. Allah Sahib aap ko kush rakhy.
http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/shairi-e-zindagi/door-ofaq-main-t45484.0.html
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Ab main tujhay
Ab main tujhay tairi ijazat say sochta hoon
Tairi Aankh ka kajal abhi phela nahain
Tairay boloon ki kalyaan abhi jowaan hain
Kalaee kay talaee churay ki khanak
Kab kal say joda hoee hai
Kuch bhi to badla nahain
146. Tairi donyan main koee aur tha
Main yah kaisay maan loon
Tu to wohi hai
Jis nay mairy soch kay darwazay par
Sabr ka phera batha rakha hai
Sochna yah hai
Kis karda jurm ki wo saza thi
Kah tu mujh say khafa thi
Ya yah koee annokhi adda thi?
Tu kayoon mujh say bai'parwa thi
Tum nay mujh ko sochnay nahain diya
147. Apni zaat kay jaziroon ko khojnay nahain diya
Band kowaroon kay pechay
Tujhy sochnay ki Aarzoo ka chehra
Kabhi jita tha kabhi marta tha
Main sochay hoon?!
Kaisay tum ko scoh sakoon ga
Mairi itni basaat kahaan
Tum wahaan ho jahaan main nahain
Main zarra tu paharoon ka badsha
Main zamein tu Aasmaan
Haan itni tashfi zaroor hai
148. Aakash ki shanakhat zamein hai
Main tairi shanakhat hoon
Aur tu mairy honay ka saboot
Ab main tujhay tairi ijazat say sochta hoon
Mon May 31, 2010 10:30 pm
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Alex9090
5 Star Member
It is a nice one, doc. Did you write it??
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Dr Maqsood Hasni
149. punjab
bari bari meharbani janab.
ji haan,
yah satrain mairay hi qalam se nikli thein.
Tue Jun 01, 2010 2:12 pm
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Alex9090
5 Star Member
That makes it even more brilliant. Very touching and not a bit of
it amateurish, NICE!
Tue Jun 01, 2010 9:42 pm
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150. Dr Maqsood Hasni
Senior Proud Pakistani
punjab
aap k qlam se nikle her lafz ne mujhy itabar diya hai. achy aur
khoob'surat log achi aur khoob'surat baat karte hain.
ab to dil chahta hai aisi hi aur chizain paish nkaroon.
Allah aap ko kush rakhy
Wed Jun 02, 2010 1:51 pm
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Aatish
Forum Family Member
V.nICe ShArIng G.!!!
151. Wed Jun 02, 2010 3:38 pm
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Dr Maqsood Hasni
Senior Proud Pakistani
punjab
tovajo k liay ehsan'mand hoon
Wed Jun 02, 2010 6:23 pm
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Sohni Kurri
5 Star Member
Location: Pakistan, Norway
152. zabardast!!!
Wed Jun 02, 2010 8:05 pm
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Dr Maqsood Hasni
Senior Proud Pakistani
aap sab kitne ache aur mohabat kane wale log ho.
Allah aap sab ko kush rakhy.
Wed Jun 02, 2010 8:41 pm
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Sohni Kurri
5 Star Member
153. Pakistan, Norway
Dr Maqsood Hasni wrote:
aap sab kitne ache aur mohabat kane wale log ho.
Allah aap sab ko kush rakhy.
Ameen ,, or ap bhi hamesha khush rahe Razz
http://www.forumpakistan.com/ab-main-tujhay-tairi-ijazat-say-sochta-hoon-t53362.html#ixzz4H
OyCdYzl
غزل
ک آنکھوں انیتھ ل کم ہ
خو جوا ہرتھ سوال اک د
ں وہ بہت تھے ش ع کو کہنے
156. Bin-Momin
Forum Family Member
bht ala... Smile
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shukarriya janab
Dr Maqsood Hasni
Senior Proud Pakistani
punjab
Mon Feb 04, 2013 10:11 pm
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mayosi ki had pe shair ne tapte tawway pe beth k jalte dil ki
barras nikalte khayalat k waseeh tar kichao tanao k mahol me
157. kuch likha he wo share kar raha hon Laughing
Yeh sach hai ke tujhe main kehta tha zindagi apni
Aur aaj tujhse mein bezaar hoon zindagi ki tarah
Laughing lol ( had darje k jhoote hote hein kuch shair )
Bin-Momin
Forum Family Member
Mon Feb 04, 2013 10:55 pm
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shukarriya janab
bohat khoob kaha aap ne
Dr Maqsood Hasni
165. bht umdaa Smile
Bin-Momin
Forum Family Member
Sun Feb 03, 2013 11:43 pm
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bari bari meharbani janab.................................
Dr Maqsood Hasni
Senior Proud Pakistani
punjab
Mon Feb 04, 2013 10:13 pm
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166. dhobte soraj jesi kuch ankhien b hoti hena Dr. Saheb ? kabi
dekhi hein ? aap to aksar mareezon ki ankhon me dekhte
hongein lolzz Laughing
Bin-Momin
Forum Family Member
Mon Feb 04, 2013 10:58 pm
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*% h@d w%*
5 Star Member
Very nice sharings Smile
Tue Feb 05, 2013 1:41 pm
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167. aap ahbab ki mohabatoon ke liay ehsan'mand hoon
Allah aap sab ko khush rakhe
Dr Maqsood Hasni
Senior Proud Pakistani
Tue Feb 05, 2013 6:45 pm
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Dr Maqsood Hasni
Senior Proud Pakistani
punjab
I K QAZI wrote:
Aap Samet!!!
171. Full PK Member
Pakistan
Very very nice that is great.....
Fri Feb 10, 2012 4:28 pm
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Dr Maqsood Hasni
Senior Proud Pakistani
punjab
aap ne tovajo farmaee, es ke liay aap ki bari bari meharbani.
Allah aap ko kush rakhe.
Tue Feb 21, 2012 12:33 pm
174. Moderator
Germany
Dear newbee!! We are very mature people here so we can go
along with it. But we always keep this forum as a familly forum
there4 I think that this type of poetry is too blunt.There are some
poetry; topics,conversation etc which are too sensitive in its
nature. I m requesting you to please realise this.
Thu Mar 14, 2013 8:27 pm
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jaribhai
Senior Proud Pakistani
175. Karachi
Yeh newbie to lagta hai doctor sahib se koi purana intiqam lena
chah rahi hain Razz
Thu Mar 14, 2013 10:06 pm
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I K QAZI
Moderator
Germany
Dr.Sahib Bhi Saadhay/Shareef aadmi Hain K Aisi "Tavajo" l liye
Bhi Shukriya Adaa Kar Rahe Hain. Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes
Laughing Ye Tou Khud Tavajo Dilao Notice hai! !! Rolling Eyes
Rolling Eyes
176. Tue Mar 19, 2013 3:16 pm
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Ibn
5 Star Member
I K QAZI wrote:
Dr.Sahib Bhi Saadhay/Shareef aadmi Hain K Aisi "Tavajo" l
liye Bhi Shukriya Adaa Kar Rahe Hain. Rolling Eyes Rolling
Eyes Laughing Ye Tou Khud Tavajo Dilao Notice hai! !! Rolling
Eyes Rolling Eyes
Hahaha lolz
177. Samaj m ye nahi ata, k is ko kesy samjhaain??
Ye pagli phool or titli ki baaten q nahi karti,,
Dar'e'weh'shat py har dam q ye dery daal rakhti hy??
M kehta hun, sambhal ja tu,
K jis rasty py tu nikli hy wo rasta bhayanak hy,
Tujhy barbad kr dy ga, tujhy ye noch daaly ga,
Kahin esa naho, ye zindegani ik nasoor ban jay,
K fir tu moat jo chahy or wo bhi na aay,
M kehta hun sambhal ja tu,,
Tue Mar 19, 2013 4:06 pm
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178. jaribhai
Senior Proud Pakistani
Karachi
Reply with quote
I K QAZI wrote:
Dr.Sahib Bhi Saadhay/Shareef aadmi Hain K Aisi "Tavajo" l
liye Bhi Shukriya Adaa Kar Rahe Hain. Rolling Eyes Rolling
Eyes Laughing Ye Tou Khud Tavajo Dilao Notice hai! !! Rolling
Eyes Rolling Eyes
Hahahahahaha,,, doctor sahib mature hain,, unpe aisi chezain
asar nahin karteen!!!
179. Tue Mar 19, 2013 4:13 pm
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Dr Maqsood Hasni
Senior Proud Pakistani
punjab
bohat socha hai jawab main kya likhoon, kuch samjh main
nahain aa raha ta'hum itna janta hoon aap log maire bachoon ki
tara ho aur baroon se kis tara aur kis andaz se baat karni
chahiay khoob jante ho. mein nazar'andaz karne ke siwa aur kar
hi kya sakta tha. bache nadaniyaan sharatain aur shokhyaan
karte hi rehte hain.