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Students: Please read at least two others’ papers. Complete this form for each paper
and turn the paper copies in at our last class.

Author of the Paper _______Megan Gerdts_______________________________

Title of Paper ________She doesn’t say_____________________________________

Reviewer ______Lauren Nourse___________________________________________

Date _______July 15. 2010___________________________

Please check and give feedback on:

   o Formatting: needs page numbers
   o Citations: seem correct
   o Active vs. passive voice: see my notes for suggested changes
   o Areas for more elaboration
   o Organizational flow of ideas/themes: flowed well
   o Clarity:
   o Spelling: no changes
   o Grammar: no changes
   o Continuity of voice – not just a recitation of the researchers linked together
             Well constructed description of project
             At times repetitive but may be the nature of the review
   o Intro to the problem and the study
             Is there a research part to this or will the project be the creation of the
             user manual?

   o Importance of the issue/themes contributing to analysis of the issue
           Very well documented on need for the training.

   o Summary tells us key research findings/gaps/justification for the research
     project
            Clearly defined the gaps necessitating a project: just not sure esactly
            the extent of the project

   o Were you convinced? ______X_YES ___________NO



Additional Comments:
Clearly and effectively reviewed the gap in training on technology and clearly
restated the TPACK philosophy and how it will be used in her study.
Megan feedback

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Megan feedback

  • 1. Students: Please read at least two others’ papers. Complete this form for each paper and turn the paper copies in at our last class. Author of the Paper _______Megan Gerdts_______________________________ Title of Paper ________She doesn’t say_____________________________________ Reviewer ______Lauren Nourse___________________________________________ Date _______July 15. 2010___________________________ Please check and give feedback on: o Formatting: needs page numbers o Citations: seem correct o Active vs. passive voice: see my notes for suggested changes o Areas for more elaboration o Organizational flow of ideas/themes: flowed well o Clarity: o Spelling: no changes o Grammar: no changes o Continuity of voice – not just a recitation of the researchers linked together Well constructed description of project At times repetitive but may be the nature of the review o Intro to the problem and the study Is there a research part to this or will the project be the creation of the user manual? o Importance of the issue/themes contributing to analysis of the issue Very well documented on need for the training. o Summary tells us key research findings/gaps/justification for the research project Clearly defined the gaps necessitating a project: just not sure esactly the extent of the project o Were you convinced? ______X_YES ___________NO Additional Comments: Clearly and effectively reviewed the gap in training on technology and clearly restated the TPACK philosophy and how it will be used in her study.