1. Students: Please read at least two others’ papers. Complete this form for each paper
and turn the paper copies in at our last class.
Author of the Paper _______Lauren Nourse_______________________________
Title of Paper ___Why is Homework a Dirty Word?________________
Reviewer ___Jefferson Hartman____
Date _______July 13, 2010_________________________
Please check and give feedback on:
o Formatting
o Citations
o Active vs. passive voice
o Areas for more elaboration
o Organizational flow of ideas/themes
o Clarity
o Spelling
o Grammar
o Continuity of voice – not just a recitation of the researchers linked together
Yes, she uses her own words effectively
o Intro to the problem and the study
Does homework done online improve assessment scores as opposed
to traditional paper/pencil techniques
o Importance of the issue/themes contributing to analysis of the issue
Nice way of presenting positives and negatives of homework on line
o Summary tells us key research findings/gaps/justification for the research
project
Reminds the reader of important research
o Were you convinced? ____X______YES ___________NO
Additional Comments:
Connected to proposed study?
Theoretical rational not present