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In the end, there are no bad topics,
          just bad essays.

However, some topics are TRICKIER
than others – either because they
  are in bad taste or just cliché.

            Examples…
How you’re so awesome

How did you get that way? Your
 essay should make you look
awesome without just saying it.
Your High School Drama

Because it makes you look like high
school is your whole life, instead of
     thinking about college.
Your Travel Journal

It can be done well, but you have to
  show what YOU gained from the
  experience, not just how cool the
       places you visited were.
Religious or Philosophical
          Arguments

Figured out the meaning of life?
 Great. But don’t preach to the
person who’s reading your essay.
Quoting famous people

Martin Luther King once said… that
students should come up with their
      OWN brilliant words!
Making fun of the prompt

You can definitely be funny in your
essay, but don’t try to turn it into a
satire, or be cynical in your essay –
 colleges won’t want you on their
               campus.
Your Excuses

  There may be very good reasons
 that you didn’t perform as well as
you should have in high school – but
  this should be coming from your
 advisor. Stay positive in your own
               essay.
Your illegal behavior

Even if you got caught, got punished
 and learned from the experience…
    colleges don’t want trouble.
Hot-button issues

 People have strong feelings about
 topics like abortion, terrorism, gun
control, police, etc… no matter what
   you write, you may offend the
         reader of your essay.
Stories outside of high school

Show that you’re engaged with the
          larger world!
Show how you’ve grown

You may be awesome now, but what
 key life experience, mentor, or idea
 did you have which helped you get
                there?
Specific personal details

Your essay should be so specific that
 there is no WAY it could belong to
            anybody else.

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College Essays: Yellow, Red, Green Flags

  • 1. In the end, there are no bad topics, just bad essays. However, some topics are TRICKIER than others – either because they are in bad taste or just cliché. Examples…
  • 2. How you’re so awesome How did you get that way? Your essay should make you look awesome without just saying it.
  • 3. Your High School Drama Because it makes you look like high school is your whole life, instead of thinking about college.
  • 4. Your Travel Journal It can be done well, but you have to show what YOU gained from the experience, not just how cool the places you visited were.
  • 5. Religious or Philosophical Arguments Figured out the meaning of life? Great. But don’t preach to the person who’s reading your essay.
  • 6. Quoting famous people Martin Luther King once said… that students should come up with their OWN brilliant words!
  • 7. Making fun of the prompt You can definitely be funny in your essay, but don’t try to turn it into a satire, or be cynical in your essay – colleges won’t want you on their campus.
  • 8. Your Excuses There may be very good reasons that you didn’t perform as well as you should have in high school – but this should be coming from your advisor. Stay positive in your own essay.
  • 9. Your illegal behavior Even if you got caught, got punished and learned from the experience… colleges don’t want trouble.
  • 10. Hot-button issues People have strong feelings about topics like abortion, terrorism, gun control, police, etc… no matter what you write, you may offend the reader of your essay.
  • 11. Stories outside of high school Show that you’re engaged with the larger world!
  • 12. Show how you’ve grown You may be awesome now, but what key life experience, mentor, or idea did you have which helped you get there?
  • 13. Specific personal details Your essay should be so specific that there is no WAY it could belong to anybody else.