This document provides an agenda and terms for a class discussion on identity. The agenda includes a presentation on terms, discussions on in-class writing experiences related to identity, and a lecture on writing strategies for an in-class essay. It outlines the basic features of a personal narrative for the in-class essay, including a well-told story, vivid descriptions of places and people, and an indication of the event's significance. It also defines key terms related to identity such as bias, culture, difference, discrimination, diversity, equality, ethnicity, fluid identity, oppression, and passing.
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2. AGENDA
Presentation: Terms
Discussion:
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In-class writing on Identity
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Personal Passing Experience
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Being Judged by Concrete Identifiers
Lecture: Writing Strategies for in-class essay #1:
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Basic Features of a Personal Narrative
In-Class Writing
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A Well-Told Story
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A Vivid Presentation of Places and People
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An Indication of the Event’s Significance
3. TERMS
1. Bias: A preference or an inclination, especially one that inhibits
impartial judgment; an unfair act or policy stemming from
prejudice.
2. Culture: Behavior
patterns, arts, beliefs, language, institutions, and all other
products of human work and thought.
3. Difference: A characteristic that distinguishes one person from
another or from an assumed norm, or the state of being
distinguished by such characteristics. Social justice issues
such as racism, classism, sexism, and heterosexism usually
center on the negative perception of difference by the dominant
group. Viewed positively, difference can be a catalyst for
equity, recognition of interdependence, and a source of
personal power.
4. 4. Discrimination: Treatment or consideration based on class or
category rather than individual merit; partiality or prejudice.
5. Diversity: The quality of being diverse; a respect in which
things differ; variety.
6. Equality: The state or quality of treating everyone in an equal
manner.
7. Ethnicity: A perception of being alike, a sense of peoplehood
by virtue of sharing a common ancestry (real or fictitious), values,
and behavior.
5. 8. Fluid Identity: The concept that identity is not rigid but can and
does change. This idea is often used in terms of gender, sexuality,
and race, as well as other factors of identity. This concept is
fundamentally contrary to binary systems. People who feel their
identity is fluid often believe that rigid categories are oppressive
and incapable of accurately describing their experience and
identities.
9. Oppression: Arbitrary and cruel use of power; using severe or
unjust force or authority. An unjust situation where, systematically
and over a long period of time, one group denies another group
access to the resources of society. Race, gender, class, sexuality,
nation, age, ethnicity, disability status, and religion constitute
major forms of oppression.
6. 10. Passing: Historically, passing has been defined in terms of racial
passing. It refers to a deception that allows a person to take advantage
of certain roles or opportunities from which he or she might be barred in
the absence of this posed identity. The most common racial passer, of
course, was the African American who lacked those characteristics
typical of his race. These mixed race people had physical appearances
that allowed them to be perceived and treated as if they where white.
But passing is not limited to African Americans assuming white roles in
society; it is not even limited to a racial basis. People pass in a variety of
ways and for a variety of reasons—from Blacks who pass for white, to
Jews who pass as Gentiles, to gays who pass for straight, for women
who pass for men—and the opposite of all of these. Reverse passing,
though less prevalent, also exists in multiple forms.
7. How do we express our own identities?
How much do we reveal about ourselves
and when do we do so?
How do we decide?
What does society expect from us in
terms of revealing who we are?
8. Write a paragraph or two describing a
time when you were unfairly judged on
concrete identity characteristics. OR
Write a paragraph or two describing a
time when you passed as someone or
something you were not. The passing
can be either purposeful or
inadvertent.
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This essay exam will be at our next meeting.
You can use a one page outline from which to write.
You will have approximately 90 minutes
Bring a blue or green book, pens or pencils, and your outline
In a narrative essay of two to three pages, respond to one of the
following prompts:
1. Tell about an experience when you were unfairly judged based on
concrete identity characteristics.

2. Tell about an experience when you passed as someone or
something you were not. The passing can be either purposeful or
inadvertent.
11. BASIC FEATURES OF A PERSONAL NARRATIVE:
•A Well-Told Story
•A Vivid Presentation of Places and
People
•An Indication of the Event’s Significance
12. A WELL-TOLD STORY
Choose an interesting story
• Shape it into an exciting or
memorable experience
• Arouse curiosity, build suspense,
and conclude action with the
climax
Begin at the beginning
• Write an introduction that sets the
stage for your tale
• Prepare your readers to understand
the significance of your event.
13. WHAT STORY WILL YOU TELL?
Where and when did it happen?
Make a quick narrative ladder:
• Exposition (Setting)
• Rising action
• Climax
• Falling Action
• Resolution
14. DEVELOP YOUR STORY
Develop your story in the body paragraphs
• Use action verbs and verbal phrases (the –
ing or to form of a verb: laughing, to
laugh)
• She drew the shades; I took my position;
nudging her aside, I passed the crowd;
• Use temporal transitions to cue readers
and move the narrative through time.
• Just after; when; still; no longer; after a few
days; for a week or so; before long; one
afternoon
15. USE PREPOSITIONAL PHRASES TO DESCRIBE
He chased Mikey and me around the
yellow house and up a backyard path
we knew by heart: under a low tree, up
a bank, through a hedge, down some
snowy steps, and across the grocery
store’s delivery driveway.
16. THE GOAL: CREATE A VIVID PRESENTATION OF
PLACES
Recreate the time and place of the event
• Ground readers in specifics:
• When? Christmas morning; one day in late fall, Saturday night
• Where? At a 7-11 in San Jose, at my Aunt Helen’s Easter party, In the
back alley of a club in Sunnyvale
Name specific objects
• White, spherical snowball
• City clothes
• Translucent skin
• Dirty sidewalk
Use similes and metaphors to draw comparisons
• Simile: The car rumbled like an approaching storm.
• Metaphor: I wanted to slingshot myself into the future. (compares
himself to a stone)
17. DESCRIBING THE PLACE
The shopping center was swarming with frantic lastminute shoppers like ourselves. We went first to the
General Store, my favorite. It carried mostly
knickknacks and other useless items which nobody
needs but buys anyway. I was thirteen years old at
the time, and things like buttons and calendars and
posters would catch my fancy. This day was no
different. The object of my desire was a 75-cent
Snoopy button.
18. THE STRATEGY: LISTING KEY PLACES
Make a list of all the places where
the event occurred, skipping
some space after each entry on
your list.
In the space after each entry on
your list, make some notes
describing each place. What do
you see (except people for
now)? What objects stand out?
Are thy large or small, green or
brown, square or oblong? What
sounds do you hear? Do you
detect any smells? Does any
taste come to mind? Any
textures?
19. THE GOAL: MAKE A VIVID PRESENTATION OF
PEOPLE
Descriptive details of behaviors or actions
• She stuck her hand in the bag and picked up the
poor, little dead squirrel.
• He drew his hands through his long, greasy hair
A bit of dialogue
• “Poor dear,” she murmured
• “Get out of my house,” he screamed
Detail the person’s appearance
• A thin woman: all action
• He wore dress clothes: a black suit and tie
20. DESCRIBING THE PEOPLE
It wasn’t until my father opened the door that I realized
something terrifyingly life altering was about to be
revealed. Always movie-star handsome, he looked
older than I had remembered him, and his light
green eyes had gone dull.
When I showed up, my father’s eyes were Caribbean
clear, yet huge and eerily calm, though it was hard
to see the rest of his face through all the white tape
and the plastic tubing.
21. THE STRATEGY: RECALLING KEY PEOPLE
List the people who played
more than a causal role in the
event
Describe a key person: Write a
brief description of a person
other than yourself who
played a major role in the
event. Name and detail a few
distinctive physical features
or items of dress. Describe in
a few phrases this person’s
way of moving and gesturing.
22. WRITING KEY SCENES IN DIALOGUE
Next thing I knew, he was talking about calling the police and having
me arrested and thrown in jail, as if he had just nabbed a professional
thief instead of a terrified kid. I couldn’t believe what he was saying.
“Jean, what’s going on?”
The sound of my sister’s voice eased the pressure a bit. She
always managed to get me out of trouble. She would come through
this time too.
“Excuse me. Are you a relative of this young girl?”
“Yes, I’m her sister. What’s the problem?”
“Well, I just caught her shoplifting and I’m afraid I’ll have to call the police.”
“What did she take?”
“This button.”
“A button? You are having a thirteen-year-old arrested for stealing a button?”
“I’m sorry, but she broke the law.”
23. THE STRATEGY CONTINUED: USE DIALOGUE
TO CONVEY IMMEDIACY AND DRAMA
Reconstruct one important
conversation
• Try to remember any especially
memorable comments, any
unusual choice of words, or any
telling remarks that you made or
were made to you.
• Try to partially re-create the
conversation so that readers will
be able to imagine what was going
on and how your language and the
other person’s language reveal
who you were and your
relationship.
24. THE GOAL: INDICATE THE EVENT’S
SIGNIFICANCE
Show that the event was important
• Dramatize the event so readers can understand your
feelings about it.
• Show scenes from your point of view so readers can
identify with you.
Tell us that the event was important
• Tell how you felt at the time of the experience
• Tell how you feel about it now, in reflection.
25. AUTOBIOGRAPHICAL SIGNIFICANCE
Telling the story from your point of view:
As the officers led me through the mall, I sensed a hundred
pairs of eyes staring at me. My face flushed and I broke out in a
sweat. Now everyone knew I was a criminal. In their eyes I was
a juvenile delinquent, and thank God the cops were getting me
off the streets. The worst part was thinking my grandmother
might be having the same thoughts. The humiliation at that
moment was overwhelming. I felt like Hester Prynne being put
on public display for everyone to ridicule.
Show and tell how you felt at the time:
I felt like a terrible human being. I would rather have stayed in
jail than confront my mom right then. I dreaded each passing
minute that brought our encounter closer.
26. THE STRATEGY: RECALL
REMEMBERED FEELINGS AND
THOUGHTS
• What were your expectations before the event?
• What was your first reaction to the event as it was happening
and right after it ended?
• How did you show your feelings? What did you say?
• What did you want the people involved to think of you? Why did
you care what they thought of you?
• What did you think of yourself at the time?
• How long did these initial feelings last?
• What were the immediate consequences of the event for you
personally?
Pause now to reread what you have written. Then write another
sentence or two about the event’s significance to you at the time it
occurred.
27. THE STRATEGY CONTINUED: EXPLORE
YOUR PRESENT PERSPECTIVE
• Looking back, how do you feel about this event? If you understand it
differently now than you did then, what is the difference?
• What do your actions at the time of the event say about the kind of
person you were then? How would you respond to the same event if it
occurred today?
• Can looking at the event historically or culturally help explain what
happened? For example, did you upset racial, gender, or religious
expectations? Did you feel torn between identities or cultures? Did you
feel out of place?
• Do you see now that there was a conflict underlying the event? For
example, were you struggling with contradictory desires? Did you feel
pressured by others? Were you desires and rights in conflict with
someone else’s? Was the event about power or responsibility?
Pause to reflect on what you have written about your present perspective.
Then write another sentence or two, commenting on the event’s
significance as you look back on it
28. GOAL: FORMULATING A TENTATIVE
THESIS
Readers do not expect you to begin your narrative
essay with the kind of explicit thesis statement typical
of argumentative or explanatory writing. If you do
decide to tell readers explicitly why the event was
meaningful or significant, you will most likely do so as
you tell the story, by commenting on or evaluating
what happened, instead of announcing the significance
at the beginning. Keep in mind that you are not obliged
to tell readers the significance, but you must show it
through the way you tell the story.
29. NARRATIVE ESSAY THESIS EXAMPLE
“When the Walls Came Tumbling Down”
by Trey Ellis
A year before his death, my dad was forced to come
out to me. I thought he was in Paris for a vacation.
Instead, he was there for treatment with AZT, which in
1986 was experimental and not yet approved in the
United States for people infected with the virus that
causes AIDS.
30. STRATEGY: REVIEW THE EVENT’S
SIGNIFICANCE
Write a few sentences that
briefly summarize the
event for the reader.
Sometimes, this summary
of the event (and its
significance) can serve as
a thesis. Whether you are
going to use it in your
essay or not, writing a
clear, brief summary of
your story is a good idea. If
you can see how and why
the story is important, you
will be able to stay focused
as you write.
31. THE GOAL: WRITING A GOOD INTRODUCTION
The Strategy:
Arouse readers’ curiosity
• Begin with a surprising announcement
• Establish the setting and situation
Get readers to identify with you
• Tell them a few things about yourself
• Begin in the middle of the action or with
a funny or important dialogue
32. THE GOAL: WRITING A GOOD CONCLUSION
The Strategy:
Conclude with reflections on the meaning of the
experience? (avoid tagging on a moral)
Should you be philosophical? Satirical? Self critical?
To underscore the event’s continuing significance, can you
show that the conflict was never fully resolved?
Could you contrast your remembered and current feelings
and thoughts?
Should you frame the essay by echoing something from the
beginning to give readers a sense of closure?
33. FRAMING: INTRODUCTION
“
Calling Home” by Jean Brandt
As we all piled into the car, I knew it was going
to be a fabulous day. My grandmother was
visiting for the holidays; and she and I, along
with my older brother and sister, Louis and
Susan, were setting off for a day of last-minute
Christmas shopping. On the way to the mall,
we sang Christmas carols, chattered, and
laughed. With Christmas only two days away,
we were caught up with holiday spirit. I felt
light-headed and full of joy. I loved shopping—
especially at Christmas.
34. FRAMING: CONCLUSION
Not a word was spoken as we walked to the car. Slowly, I sank
into the back seat anticipating the scolding. Expecting harsh tones,
I was relieved to hear almost the opposite from my father.
“I’m not going to punish you and I’ll tell you why. Although I
think what you did was wrong, I think what the police did was more
wrong. There’s no excuse for locking a thirteen-year-old behind bars.
That doesn’t mean I condone what you did, but I think you’ve been
punished enough already.”
As I looked from my father’s eyes to my mother’s, I knew this
ordeal was over. Although it would never be forgotten, the incident
was not mentioned again.
35. FRAMING
Framing is a narrative device that echoes the beginning in
the ending. The reader will then think of the beginning
while reading the ending.
In our example, Brandt begins her essay in the car on the
way to the mall. She ends her story on the car ride back
home; at this time, she reflects on the incident, adding
some discussion of the significance of the event.
Take a few minutes to consider how you might begin and
end your story using framing.
36. HOMEWORK
Post #3: Finish your in-class writing
and post it: Basic Features:
dialogue, description, anecdote, fra
ming, outlining, significance
• Study the terms we discussed in
class.
• Don’t forget that we have in-class
essay #1 the next time we meet.
Please bring both your outline and
a large, green or blue book in
which to write. You may use blue or
black ink or a number two pencil.