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Your Topic Pagan
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Thesis Statement
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I believe that... Before you die you should visit Pagan, Myanmar.
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Your Subtopics
Topic Topic Topic
History Tourist Atractions Religion
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2. Topic 1 History
What is one good sentence
The city of Pagan was founded in 849 A.D..
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Support #1
Pagan was founded by King Pyinbya. Pagan is located on the banks of the Ayeyarwady
1-5 sentences
River.
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Source http://www.ancientbagan.com/bagan-history.htm
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Support #2 King Anawrahta reigned between the 11th and 13th centuries. Under his ruling Bagan
1-5 sentences became the capital of Myanmar. He conquered the Mon which were the people of the
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Source http://www.asiatravelling.net/myanmar/bagan/bagan_history.htm
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Support #3
1-5 sentences Pagan is now called Bagan. The city is also known as the City of the Enemy Crusher.
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Source http://www.5starmyanmar.com/Bagan-Myanmar-Burma.htm
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The Kings of Pagan with the help of the Mon have beautiful architecture
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all over the city.
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3. Topic 2 Tourist Atractions
What is one good sentence
One of the most remarkable things about Pagan has to be it's elaborate
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architecture.
your reader?
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Support #1
Considered the most elaborate and most amazing of Pagan's temples the Shwezigon
1-5 sentences
pagoda is the first place people should visit in Pagan.
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Source http://www.hoteltravel.com/myanmar/nyaung_u/guides/overview.htm
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Support #2
One of the only survivors of the early Pagan, the Ananda Temple is a must see in Pagan
1-5 sentences
as well. The temple is located next to Ananda Ok Kyaung monastery.
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Source http://www.hoteltravel.com/myanmar/nyaung_u/guides/overview.htm
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Support #3 Towering above all other temples in Pagan, the Thatbyinnyu Temple is named after the
1-5 sentences Omniscience of the Buddha which means seeing widely. The temple appears to be an
Need a transition word? experiment in architecture as there are no others built like it.
Source http://myanmartravelinformation.com/mti-bagan/thabbyinyu.htm
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Temples were made for praising Buddha and many were named after
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Buddha as well.
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4. Topic 3 Religion
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to introduce this topic to
your reader?
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Support #1
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Support #2
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Support #3
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Is the information arranged from less important to most important?
Does every sentence help support your topic?
Does this information get you a step closer to proving your thesis?
Do you provide sentences of different lengths and complexities in this paragraph?

5. Introduction Paragraph
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Ask yourself
1) How can I get my reader's attention?
2) Imagine your reader knows nothing about your topic. What background information could I give my reader about
my topic?
3) Why should the reader care to know this information?
4) What is it you are trying to prove?
Attention Getter
1 Sentence
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What was your attention getter? A Question A Quick Story An Interesting Fact A Quote
A Shocking Statistic An Unusual Statement Other
Background Information
2-5 Sentences
- Introduce your topic, but not
your thesis
- Provide insider details that
would help your reader better
understand your topic, without
providing information you are
discussing in your support.
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Why should your reader care?
Complete this sentence..
It is important that you read this
essay because...
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Thesis Statement
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wrote on page 1)
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6. Conclusion Paragraph
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A conclusion should...
1) Include a brief summary of the paper's main points.
2) Suggest results or consequences
3) Leave a lasting impression
Restate your thesis in
a fresh, new way
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Summarize / Reflect / Give
Final thoughts on Topic 1
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Summarize / Reflect / Give
Final thoughts on Topic 2
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Summarize / Reflect / Give
Final thoughts on Topic 3
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Final Thought
1 Sentence
-Contains vivid language
-Compound or Complex sentence
-Leave a lasting impression
-Sums up your essay in one
incredible sentence
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7. BIBLIOGRAPHY
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Paragraph 1- Introduction Paragraph 3 - Body Paragraph 2 Paragraph 5 - Conclusion
- Attention Getter - Topic Introduction - Thesis Restatement
- Background Information - Support 1 - Summarize/Reflect/Final - Topic 1
- Why should we care sentence - Support 2 - Summarize/Reflect/Final - Topic 2
- Thesis Statement - Support 3 - Summarize/Reflect/Final - Topic 3
- Transition - Strong Final Thought
Paragraph 2 - Body Paragraph 1
Paragraph 4 - Body Paragraph 3 Final page - Bibliography
- Topic Introduction - On a new page
- Support 1 - Topic Introduction - Titled - Bibliography
- Support 2 - Support 1 - Use citations created from Easybib
- Support 3 - Support 2 - MLA Format
- Transition - Support 3 - Alphabetized
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