1. What have you learned from your audience feedback?
Our class participated in an initial screening where we presented our music videos so
far and they offered their opinions and suggested ways which we could improve it.
The following is the feedback we received after our first initial screening.

2. WWW
Good range of shots, good narrative and nice locations for narrative and performance.
EBI
Lighting needs improving, make the narrative shots of them arguing more obvious and we needed to sort out her arms
in the opening shot.
From this part of feedback I received from one of my classmates we decided to re-film the fighting scene
because it was not obvious or dramatic enough. This also happened to be the shots where our classmates
said the lighting was dim so we killed two birds with one stone and by completely re-filming this would help
improve our music video. When we first showed our initial screening we didn’t have our narrative shots in
and so the footage that was just to fill in the gaps and wasn’t going to be shown, so the comment about her
arms at first wasn’t used anyway.

3. WWW
Good pace of shots, fitting with tempo of song and accurate lip synching.
EBI
Very dark on our narrative shots.
This piece of feedback is similar to the last one and they agree that our narrative shots are
quite dark, so we acted on our feedback and re-filmed our narrative shots.

4. WWW
Good use of locations and the pace of our shots are really good.
EBI
Some shots in the park are too bright, camera quality changes.
Some of our feedback was that our performance shots in the park were too bright, we changed
this by editing and adjusting settings and putting some of the shots of them in the past in black
and white. They also commented on the camera quality not being continuous because we used
a different camera when filming our narrative shots the first time. So when we re-filmed this we
used the correct camera we had previously used.

5. WWW
Shots have got quicker.
EBI
Need to put the narrative shots at the start of our music video in and make transitions between the shots. Part of the clips
also jumped part way through and we need to add our ending in.
We learnt from our audience feedback that we needed to add in our narrative shots at the end
and beginning and that there was a slight problem with some footage that jumps that we had to
edit. However when researching our genre we found that transitions weren’t used a lot and so
we decided as a group that we were not going to include any transitions.

6. WWW
Our narrative shots are good and our outfit choices are relevant to our genre of music. Our choice of locations are also
good.
EBI
Scarlett looks too stiff when she is performing, and needs to move her arms more.
We acted on this feedback when we re-filmed the narrative shots and Scarlett used her arms
more when arguing with Ryan.

7. WWW
Use of different shot types, the narrative that we put in so far was clear and we used effective locations.
EBI
The fighting scene looked better and the lighting on the narrative shots needed improving.
A lot of our feedback told us similar things and the main shots that we found we needed to
improve were our narrative shots of Scarlett and Ryan, both the acting side of it and technically.
So we completely re-filmed this.

8. WWW
Good choice of shots and our narrative works well.
EBI
Some shots are dark and disappear?
We re-filmed the dark shots and we were unsure what was meant by disappear and no-one
owned up to writing this so we were unsure how we were to improve this.