emka TECHNOLOGIES - Telemetry - emkaBELT noninvasive telemetry respiration measurement system

Hinweis der Redaktion

1. I edited down the text. I'm still not sure we need this explanation- I read it over 5 times and it still doesn't explain the technology to me! Some of the slides are very cluttered with lots of graphics (our logo), which may be a problem if people in the audience are trying to quickly read what we are presenting. This picture should be smaller so the text in this slide can be spaced out and bigger.
2. I edited down the text. I'm still not sure we need this explanation- I read it over 5 times and it still doesn't explain the technology to me! Some of the slides are very cluttered with lots of graphics (our logo), which may be a problem if people in the audience are trying to quickly read what we are presenting. This picture should be smaller so the text in this slide can be spaced out and bigger.
3. I took out "what tests have proven" because not all of these have been proven by tests- like the fact that the belt size is adjustable. I think it is enough to just list these things and speak a little about each of them. Also- do these things differentiate us from the competition? I don't know! Specifically we should make sure to include why we are so great vs. Jet + Respiration!
4. I took out "what tests have proven" because not all of these have been proven by tests- like the fact that the belt size is adjustable. I think it is enough to just list these things and speak a little about each of them. Also- do these things differentiate us from the competition? I don't know! Specifically we should make sure to include why we are so great vs. Jet + Respiration!
5. I took out "what tests have proven" because not all of these have been proven by tests- like the fact that the belt size is adjustable. I think it is enough to just list these things and speak a little about each of them. Also- do these things differentiate us from the competition? I don't know! Specifically we should make sure to include why we are so great vs. Jet + Respiration!
6. I took out "what tests have proven" because not all of these have been proven by tests- like the fact that the belt size is adjustable. I think it is enough to just list these things and speak a little about each of them. Also- do these things differentiate us from the competition? I don't know! Specifically we should make sure to include why we are so great vs. Jet + Respiration!
7. All the screenshots in the presentation need labels. Also, if you lessen the size of the gray banner at the top you can make the graphs bigger. . . squeeze more scientific content into each slide. . . scientists like that! :)
8. Needs text boxes- ecg, volume. . .- also right side should be blown up on its own slide.
9. Graphics! Need a time course, better resolution, more readable X and Y axis! What is the X axis? What time units? And a larger Y axis with units.
10. Again, the numbers on the Y axis need to be made bigger, same for the comments in the file. They are very hard to read! Put in text boxes over the tiny comments and scales so people can read them.
11. Again, the numbers on the Y axis need to be made bigger, same for the comments in the file. They are very hard to read! Put in text boxes over the tiny comments and scales so people can read them.
12. I took out "what tests have proven" because not all of these have been proven by tests- like the fact that the belt size is adjustable. I think it is enough to just list these things and speak a little about each of them. Also- do these things differentiate us from the competition? I don't know! Specifically we should make sure to include why we are so great vs. Jet + Respiration!
13. I added this slide. . . emkaBELT gives investigators a nice alternative to the typical anesthetized dog or WBP mouse/rat safety pharm pulmonary assessment- we should mention that.