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The most common mistakes

      Trial Matura 2009
Whatever you do in the exam…


…read the instructions
Zadanie 2.
The Gold Rush
1 America made California an American state in 1850, two years after winning it from Mexico in
the Mexican-American War. During those two years something important happened in California.
Something which sent men hurrying across wild and dangerous country, or on long journeys by
sea, to get there. On January 24, 1848, nine days before the end of the war, thirty-six-year-old
James Wilson Marshall was working on the land, eighty kilometers east of Sutter's Fort, which
was later to become the city of Sacramento. 2 Suddenly he saw something bright and yellow in
a river. Looking more carefully he discovered small pieces of gold, washed down in the river
from the Sierra Nevada mountains. On March 15, a San Francisco newspaper, The Californian,
told the story of Marshall's discovery. The News travelled across the world, and soon men from
Australia, France, Britain, Germany, China, Mexico, Peru and Hawaii, as well as the rest of
America, started the long journey to California. They all wanted to find gold, and to become rich.
They were often called "Forty-niners", because most of them arrived in 1849. This was the start
of the Gold Rush.
By 1852, there were more than 100,000 prospectors in California. Gold mining villages
grew on the lower western sides of the Sierra Nevada mountains – the "Gold
Country". San Francisco was soon a large, busy city, selling everything the prospectors
and miners needed. Sailing ships arrived and their sailors ran off to the Gold Country
to look for gold in the rivers, or to work in the mines.
Ships often sailed away from San Francisco with half their sailors missing! California
was soon a dangerous place to live. There were more than a thousand killings in San
Francisco during the early 1850s. And many of the Forty-niners were wild men who
took things from, and killed, the Indians – the first Americans.
3 By the middle of the 1850s, it was getting more and more difficult to find gold by
prospecting in rivers. Most of the gold was under the ground, so mining businesses
started to use machines to get at the gold. Then, in the 1860s, people discovered
something new in the ground. 4 They called it black gold, because it soon made
them rich. Its real name? Oil.
In 1869, workers finished building 5 the first railway between the east and the west
coasts of America, through the Rocky Mountains and the Sierra Nevada mountains.
Most of the workers were Chinese. They worked hard, at difficult and dangerous jobs,
for very little money. After they finished the railway, journeys from other parts of
America were easier.

Adapted from “California” by John Escott
DFU - Forma:
2 pkt.

- wypowiedź zgodna z wymaganą formą,

- układ tekstu spójny, logiczny,

- objętośd pracy może przekroczyd podane granice do ± 10 % (108-119, 151-165 słów),

1 pkt

- wypowiedź częściowo zgodna z wymaganą formą,

- układ tekstu częściowo spójny, logiczny,

- objętośd pracy może przekroczyd podane granice do ± 15 % (102-107, 166-172 słów),

0 pkt.

- praca jest niezgodna z wymaganą formą (niezależnie od stopnia realizacji pozostałych kryteriów),

•   - układ tekstu niespójny, chaotyczny,

•   - objętośd pracy przekracza podane granice ponad ± 15% (do 101 słów, od 173 słów).
Pronouns



I want to apply for the post
     at Your newspaper
Pronouns


I want to apply for the post
     at Your newspaper
         your
Commas

You offer a job, which is connected
         with my interests.
Commas

You offer a job , which is connected
          with my interests.
Inverted commas

I have been working in my school
       magazine ,,Czadek”.
Inverted commas

I have been working in my school
       magazine ”Czadek”.
Correct the following mistakes…
I have read your advertisement published
    in a newspaper about work in your
                 company.
Could you inform me how much
         will I earn?
The advertisement focused my
attention because it was exactly
what I have been searching for.
Please, answer for my letter.
Besides with that
I can start in the next
        Monday.
Your faithfully
Please, tell me how much will
          you pay me
Please, tell me how much will
          you pay me
UK
I was a school redactor
I expect for your quick answer.
I am looking forward for your
            answer.
I want to spent …
I have big experience in
 redacting a newspaper.
I apply for this job
Typos – spelling mistakes

       ambicious
       expirience

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The most common mistakes - matura probna 2009

  • 1. The most common mistakes Trial Matura 2009
  • 2. Whatever you do in the exam… …read the instructions
  • 3. Zadanie 2. The Gold Rush 1 America made California an American state in 1850, two years after winning it from Mexico in the Mexican-American War. During those two years something important happened in California. Something which sent men hurrying across wild and dangerous country, or on long journeys by sea, to get there. On January 24, 1848, nine days before the end of the war, thirty-six-year-old James Wilson Marshall was working on the land, eighty kilometers east of Sutter's Fort, which was later to become the city of Sacramento. 2 Suddenly he saw something bright and yellow in a river. Looking more carefully he discovered small pieces of gold, washed down in the river from the Sierra Nevada mountains. On March 15, a San Francisco newspaper, The Californian, told the story of Marshall's discovery. The News travelled across the world, and soon men from Australia, France, Britain, Germany, China, Mexico, Peru and Hawaii, as well as the rest of America, started the long journey to California. They all wanted to find gold, and to become rich. They were often called "Forty-niners", because most of them arrived in 1849. This was the start of the Gold Rush.
  • 4. By 1852, there were more than 100,000 prospectors in California. Gold mining villages grew on the lower western sides of the Sierra Nevada mountains – the "Gold Country". San Francisco was soon a large, busy city, selling everything the prospectors and miners needed. Sailing ships arrived and their sailors ran off to the Gold Country to look for gold in the rivers, or to work in the mines. Ships often sailed away from San Francisco with half their sailors missing! California was soon a dangerous place to live. There were more than a thousand killings in San Francisco during the early 1850s. And many of the Forty-niners were wild men who took things from, and killed, the Indians – the first Americans. 3 By the middle of the 1850s, it was getting more and more difficult to find gold by prospecting in rivers. Most of the gold was under the ground, so mining businesses started to use machines to get at the gold. Then, in the 1860s, people discovered something new in the ground. 4 They called it black gold, because it soon made them rich. Its real name? Oil. In 1869, workers finished building 5 the first railway between the east and the west coasts of America, through the Rocky Mountains and the Sierra Nevada mountains. Most of the workers were Chinese. They worked hard, at difficult and dangerous jobs, for very little money. After they finished the railway, journeys from other parts of America were easier. Adapted from “California” by John Escott
  • 5.
  • 6.
  • 7.
  • 8.
  • 9. DFU - Forma: 2 pkt. - wypowiedź zgodna z wymaganą formą, - układ tekstu spójny, logiczny, - objętośd pracy może przekroczyd podane granice do ± 10 % (108-119, 151-165 słów), 1 pkt - wypowiedź częściowo zgodna z wymaganą formą, - układ tekstu częściowo spójny, logiczny, - objętośd pracy może przekroczyd podane granice do ± 15 % (102-107, 166-172 słów), 0 pkt. - praca jest niezgodna z wymaganą formą (niezależnie od stopnia realizacji pozostałych kryteriów), • - układ tekstu niespójny, chaotyczny, • - objętośd pracy przekracza podane granice ponad ± 15% (do 101 słów, od 173 słów).
  • 10.
  • 11. Pronouns I want to apply for the post at Your newspaper
  • 12. Pronouns I want to apply for the post at Your newspaper your
  • 13. Commas You offer a job, which is connected with my interests.
  • 14. Commas You offer a job , which is connected with my interests.
  • 15. Inverted commas I have been working in my school magazine ,,Czadek”.
  • 16. Inverted commas I have been working in my school magazine ”Czadek”.
  • 17. Correct the following mistakes…
  • 18. I have read your advertisement published in a newspaper about work in your company.
  • 19. Could you inform me how much will I earn?
  • 20. The advertisement focused my attention because it was exactly what I have been searching for.
  • 21. Please, answer for my letter.
  • 23. I can start in the next Monday.
  • 25. Please, tell me how much will you pay me
  • 26. Please, tell me how much will you pay me
  • 27. UK
  • 28. I was a school redactor
  • 29. I expect for your quick answer.
  • 30. I am looking forward for your answer.
  • 31. I want to spent …
  • 32. I have big experience in redacting a newspaper.
  • 33. I apply for this job
  • 34. Typos – spelling mistakes ambicious expirience