Draft story for assessment

2. There once was a monkey family who lived in the forest in Africa. In the forest, there were NO aeroplanes, NO MTR, NO buses, NO mini-buses, NO ferries, NO trams, NO Peak tram, NO taxis, and of course, NO helicopters! They travelled through the forest on foot! One day, the young female monkey, Abby, saw a group of people sitting inside a box with four wheels. She was amazed and went to find her brother Danny, to tell him.

3. “Hey, Danny”, she exclaimed. “I see something special, there is a box walking by itself!” Danny was really excited. The pair of young monkeys rushed off to see the box. Danny could hardly believe his eyes.