4. 1. Shorter is better
Make This Look Like This
Aim for 600-700 words On July 5th, 2012, July 5, 2012 –
Jeffery Immelt, the General Electric
max CEO of U.S.-based CEO Jeffery
conglomerate
Immelt goes to
General Electric,
eastern China to
“If it is possible to cut a traveled to the
meet with
eastern border of
word out, always cut it the People’s biochemists.
Republic of China
out.” – George Orwell in order to conduct
a meeting with key
science researchers
in the biochemistry
field.
5. 2. Write for the reader, not yourself
Write This Not This
How R&D affects How does Think of readers as busy,
the economy: research and impatient people
development
1. Creates jobs affect the
2. Develops new economy? Well,
sources of there are a lot of
Be concise, not chatty
revenue different ways.
3. Technology The answer really
transfer depends on your
individual
perspective...
6. 3. Question your modifiers
Mark Zuckerberg
is preparing for
Facebook’s IPO.
Avoid overuse of
adjectives and adverbs
The omnipresent
Mark Zuckerberg
is busily
preparing
himself for the
long-awaited,
definitive IPO of
Facebook.
7. 4. Be direct
Make information easy
to find
Straightforward headings
8. 5. Use headings that work
Write This Not This
Make article easy to find NRC explores Semiconductor
semiconductor technology is
technology currently being
Short and direct with explored by NRC
active language
9. 6. Use subheadings as much as possible
Visual road-sign
Every few paragraphs
10. 7. Page chunk
Make text short
Split information into
multiple pages with
different pieces of the
topic
11. 8. Make sentences short and simple
Make This Look Like This
Engineers apply Engineers use
scientific principles science to solve
to solve significant problems and Long sentences distract
technical problems
and to deliver
develop and drive away readers
breakthrough innovative
products, processes, products and
raw materials and processes that Communicate quickly
packaging people use every
technologies that day. and efficiently
delight consumers
throughout their
day-to day.
12. 9. Create meaningful links
Use This Not This
For more To find out more
Descriptive information, information
please visit about our Health
Health Science Science
Signposts for scanning Laboratories Laboratories,
click here
13. 10. Watch formatting
Would You Want to Read This? Avoid at all costs:
P&G’s structure offers our employees the benefit
of an international company with the local
Over-bolding
focus to win with consumers in roughly
180 countries where P&G brands are sold.
Underlining for emphasis
The US Educated Foreign National recruiting Italics
program is seeking to utilize your skills to build
the business in one of our Emerging Markets. WRITING IN CAPS
As a build-from-within Company, our success Lists more than 2 levels
depends entirely on the strength of our people.
To ensure a fast start, we have our new hires
begin their careers in a location where they have
the BEST OPPORTUNITY TO SUCCEED. This
typically means a location where they have:
•Exceptional business knowledge
•Language skills
•Oral and written
•Tests will be administered
•Technical mastery
•Unrestricted work authorization
•Ability to work in the United States
-Readers SCAN websites, not read them-Only have a few seconds to get attention
-Avoid “cuteness”
-Begin with the shortest and clearest statement you can make on the topic (i.e. conclusion)-Keywords
-Use keywords readers are looking for
-Should not scroll more than a page and a half (standard browser screen) without a subheading or heading
-Long background information or related information can be linked off into a separate page-Try not to split a continuous story into Part 1, Part 2, Part 3 but rather into coherent sub-topics
-Need to be able to understand them out of context-NEVER use “click here”
-Over-bolding is irritating to readers-Underlining makes ordinary words look like links, confusing-Italics are hard to see-Writing in caps slows reading and can be grating-Lists more than 2 levels look complicated-Note: try to reduce lists to 9 points or less