4. Do your diary
1. Work completed– progress
since last meeting
2. What’s going well and why?
3. What’s not going well and
why?
4. Meeting/ discussion points
5. Plan for next week
5. Supervisors
Sami Peter Barbara
9 – 10 9 – 10 9 - 10
Mostafa Taiheng] Mari]
Jason Asad ]
Shyam Matthew James
Shigang Rishi Michael
Rico Brendan
7. Learnings…..
• what have you learned about
how to go about your project?
• what are the normal
development processes
associated with your topic?
• WHAT ARE YOU GOING
TO DO NEXT?
9. Next steps….
Review & update your
project plan……
What changes are you likely to make
now?
Implementation/research
plan
Make a plan of what you are going to
do next
Confirm with your supervisor
15. Try it out……
Jot down 3 important
things that you found
out in your lit
review.
Be prepared to tell
us three things about
1 of your important
areas
You need your lit review
16.
17. You have ……
Tell us about 1
important thing….
Class will give you
feedback on your
presentation
1 minute, 1
slide
18. criteria
Body Language
• eye contact
• reading notes or
slides
• use of gesture
• posture
• personal
presentation
Speaking
• clarity
• page
• volume
• intonation
• filler words
• pronunciation
• appropriateness
• pauses
20. who goes first?
Jamal Charles Krishnan Sami Barbara Peter
Abdul Daniel James Mostafa Mari Taiheng
Roy Anup Sandeep Jason James Asad
Exequiel Lalit Lila raj Shyam Michael Matthew
Kan Kabindra Deependra Shigang Brendan Rishi
Rico
22. Interim Report presentation
What, where how when
What: 7-10 min presentation + 2 -3 min
video
When: Wednesday, Week12
Where: Purple 12.1.15
How much: 30%
23. Task
Prepare a multimedia presentation that
outlines key aspects of your project work
during semester 1 and a work plan for
semester 2.
2 -3 min video
24. Purpose – why?
• Demonstrate your understanding by
developing visual tools to support the
explanation of complex technical information
• Professionally deliver scientific/ technical
ideas in an audio-visual format.
• Demonstrate your ability to combine a range
of presentation media to effectively engage
an audience
26. Structure
• A formal greeting
• An orientation to your project topic
• A video of the literature review
findings
• An explanation of how these ideas
will be used to conduct your project
• General project implementation
approach
• Achievements to date
• A semester 2 work plan.
• A conclusion
27. Criteria for assessment
• Oral communication skills [25%]
– Body language
– Speaking
– Question response
• Content [25%]
• Communicating with ICT’s [50%]
– Research video
– Presentation software
30. Next Week
• What’s next ……
– Communicating ideas with video
• Sharing your implementation
ideas.
31. Supervisors
Jamal Charles Krishnan
11 - 12 11 - 12 9 – 10
Abdul Daniel James
Roy Anup Sandeep
Exequiel Lalit Lila raj
Kan Kabindra Deependra
Craig
(ext)
Editor's Notes
The main focus for this week is: Beginning your literature review
Source: http://www.monash.edu.au/lls/llonline/quickrefs/20-editing-proofreading.xml Subject-verb agreement Do subjects and their verbs agree in number, particularly when a long or complex subject precedes the main verb? Correct The lecturer, as well as some of the tutors, is planning a test for next week.
Source: http://www.monash.edu.au/lls/llonline/quickrefs/20-editing-proofreading.xml Pronouns Do pronouns refer clearly to an antecedent? If you leave the book on the table, you can take it after the class. Does the it refer to the table or the book?
Body language keeps eye contact all the time, slowly scanning all of the audience; does not read notes or slides uses gestures smoothly, naturally to emphasize or illustrate points moves with purpose good, confident posture well presented, with appropriate clothing Speaking speaks clearly; at a good pace good volume and ; change of tone to maintain interest rarely uses filler words pronounces words correctly speaks in a style that is appropriate for the occasion adds variety to speaking style (lower or higher volume, change of pace, use of character voices) uses pauses for dramatic effect or to let ideas sink in
Body language keeps eye contact all the time, slowly scanning all of the audience; does not read notes or slides uses gestures smoothly, naturally to emphasize or illustrate points moves with purpose good, confident posture well presented, with appropriate clothing Speaking speaks clearly; at a good pace good volume and ; change of tone to maintain interest rarely uses filler words pronounces words correctly speaks in a style that is appropriate for the occasion adds variety to speaking style (lower or higher volume, change of pace, use of character voices) uses pauses for dramatic effect or to let ideas sink in
Source: http://www.monash.edu.au/lls/llonline/quickrefs/20-editing-proofreading.xml Run-on sentences Have you divided run-on sentences into two by using either a full stop or a semi colon? Correct : We can see changes but not learning itself; the concept is theoretical and hence not directly observable.
Source: http://www.monash.edu.au/lls/llonline/quickrefs/20-editing-proofreading.xml Parallel Structures Are components of your sentence grammatically equal?
Source: http://www.monash.edu.au/lls/llonline/quickrefs/20-editing-proofreading.xml Articles (a/an/the/zero article) Is the noun countable or uncountable, specific or general? Does the noun require an article, and if so, which one? Normally, uncountable nouns cannot be pluralised in English: eg information, evidence, advice, knowledge.