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REDEMPTION
1. BLACK SCREEN (TITLES)
The sound of a girl violently fighting with her mother, them
shouting and physically hurting each other can be heard.
VICKI
(shouting)
Stop trying to ruin my life.
MUM
Vicki, I’m your mother
VICKI
(screaming)
-I hate you. I fucking hate you.
Vicki punches her Mother in the arm.
MUM
Vicki what’s happening to you..
VICKI
(now calm)
My life is no longer your business.
Now leave.
The sound of the door slamming can be heard.
2. FADE IN. NIGHT. INT. VICKI’S BEDROOM
Looking through the window of Vicki’s house, we see Vicki
pacing up and down her bedroom looking guilty and
frustrated. She has her hand on her head as a sign of
stress. Eventually she turns out the light. Fade to black.
3. FADE IN. DAY. INT. VICKI’S BEDROOM
Looking through the same window into her bedroom, Vicki is
brushing her hair in the mirror and getting ready for
school. She throws her black backpack on her back and stomps
out of her bedroom door.
4.DAY. INT. VICKI’S HALLWAY
Vicki stomps down the stairs. Her mother is putting on her
coat at the bottom of the stairs.
MUM
Hi...
2.
Vicki ignores this and storms out of the front door. It
slams. We see the clock on the wall slam in frustration. The
clock changes from 8.30 - 4.15.
5. DAY. EXT. SCHOOL YARD
Vicki walks out of her school looking morbid. The weather is
gloomy. Edgy rock music fades in similar to the style of
’Twilight’.
6. DAY. EXT. MONTAGE
Vicki is walking home from school. We see her looking grumpy
as she walks down the street’s with her earphones in. She
trips and stumbles over a shoe and then carries on walking.
Approaches her house and walks through the front door.
7. DAY. INT. VICKI’S BEDROOM
Vicki throws her backpack of her back and and ties her hair
up. Whilst doing this she walks in front of her full body
mirror and see’s no reflection.
VICKI
(To herself)
What..the..hell
8. DAY. INT. VICKI’S KITCHEN
Vicki’s mum is sitting at the kitchen table, reading the
newspaper.
VICKI
Mum...MUM! Hello can you stop
ignoring me?! There is something
wrong with my..
The phone rings. Mum gets up from the table and answers the
phone. We see her start to break down.
VICKI
Mum..mum...what’s going on? MUM!
Vicki walks towards her Mum...she see’s a bright light in
the corner of the room which confuses her...
3.
9. DAY. EXT. STREET
Suddenly Vicki is walking down her street. Confused, she
rushes towards her house. She trips over the same shoe which
she previously tripped over and stops. She see’s herself
lying on the floor, her head pouring with blood.
VICKI
SCREAMS.
She bends down to ’herself’ and tries to wipe away the blood
but it is useless. Suddenly she see’s the bright light once
again however this time the light is much closer. Vicki’s
reaches her hand out to touch this light and realizes that
her hand begins to dissolve as she does this. She runs away
from the light.
10. DAY. INT. VICKI’S KITCHEN
The sound of Vicki’s mum wailing upstairs can be heard. The
bright light is almost right next to Vicki but it is
starting to become weaker. But it is creeping up on her. The
sound of the argument with the mother the night before rings
in her head.
VICKI
I hate. I fucking hate you.
Vicki starts crying and rushes up the stairs.
11. DAY. INT. VICKI’S BEDROOM
Vicki’s mum is asleep in Vicki’s bed crying. Her face is
buried in Vicki’s pillows and soft toys. Vicki rushes over
to her desk. Meanwhile the light grows closer. Vicki tries
to pick up a pen. The music builds the tension in this scene
as Vicki’s uses all her strength to pick up this pen.
Eventually it lifts and writes on a plain piece of paper.
NOTE:
Mum, I’m sorry.
Love you always
Vick.
Vicki rushes over to her grieving mother and tucks the
message under her mothers arm. She kisses her mother on the
head.
(CONTINUED)
CONTINUED: 4.
VICKI
I’m sorry
A master shot shows that Vicki has disappeared. The light
now in the corner of the room dies out.
Fade to black.

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Redemption

  • 2. 1. BLACK SCREEN (TITLES) The sound of a girl violently fighting with her mother, them shouting and physically hurting each other can be heard. VICKI (shouting) Stop trying to ruin my life. MUM Vicki, I’m your mother VICKI (screaming) -I hate you. I fucking hate you. Vicki punches her Mother in the arm. MUM Vicki what’s happening to you.. VICKI (now calm) My life is no longer your business. Now leave. The sound of the door slamming can be heard. 2. FADE IN. NIGHT. INT. VICKI’S BEDROOM Looking through the window of Vicki’s house, we see Vicki pacing up and down her bedroom looking guilty and frustrated. She has her hand on her head as a sign of stress. Eventually she turns out the light. Fade to black. 3. FADE IN. DAY. INT. VICKI’S BEDROOM Looking through the same window into her bedroom, Vicki is brushing her hair in the mirror and getting ready for school. She throws her black backpack on her back and stomps out of her bedroom door. 4.DAY. INT. VICKI’S HALLWAY Vicki stomps down the stairs. Her mother is putting on her coat at the bottom of the stairs. MUM Hi...
  • 3. 2. Vicki ignores this and storms out of the front door. It slams. We see the clock on the wall slam in frustration. The clock changes from 8.30 - 4.15. 5. DAY. EXT. SCHOOL YARD Vicki walks out of her school looking morbid. The weather is gloomy. Edgy rock music fades in similar to the style of ’Twilight’. 6. DAY. EXT. MONTAGE Vicki is walking home from school. We see her looking grumpy as she walks down the street’s with her earphones in. She trips and stumbles over a shoe and then carries on walking. Approaches her house and walks through the front door. 7. DAY. INT. VICKI’S BEDROOM Vicki throws her backpack of her back and and ties her hair up. Whilst doing this she walks in front of her full body mirror and see’s no reflection. VICKI (To herself) What..the..hell 8. DAY. INT. VICKI’S KITCHEN Vicki’s mum is sitting at the kitchen table, reading the newspaper. VICKI Mum...MUM! Hello can you stop ignoring me?! There is something wrong with my.. The phone rings. Mum gets up from the table and answers the phone. We see her start to break down. VICKI Mum..mum...what’s going on? MUM! Vicki walks towards her Mum...she see’s a bright light in the corner of the room which confuses her...
  • 4. 3. 9. DAY. EXT. STREET Suddenly Vicki is walking down her street. Confused, she rushes towards her house. She trips over the same shoe which she previously tripped over and stops. She see’s herself lying on the floor, her head pouring with blood. VICKI SCREAMS. She bends down to ’herself’ and tries to wipe away the blood but it is useless. Suddenly she see’s the bright light once again however this time the light is much closer. Vicki’s reaches her hand out to touch this light and realizes that her hand begins to dissolve as she does this. She runs away from the light. 10. DAY. INT. VICKI’S KITCHEN The sound of Vicki’s mum wailing upstairs can be heard. The bright light is almost right next to Vicki but it is starting to become weaker. But it is creeping up on her. The sound of the argument with the mother the night before rings in her head. VICKI I hate. I fucking hate you. Vicki starts crying and rushes up the stairs. 11. DAY. INT. VICKI’S BEDROOM Vicki’s mum is asleep in Vicki’s bed crying. Her face is buried in Vicki’s pillows and soft toys. Vicki rushes over to her desk. Meanwhile the light grows closer. Vicki tries to pick up a pen. The music builds the tension in this scene as Vicki’s uses all her strength to pick up this pen. Eventually it lifts and writes on a plain piece of paper. NOTE: Mum, I’m sorry. Love you always Vick. Vicki rushes over to her grieving mother and tucks the message under her mothers arm. She kisses her mother on the head. (CONTINUED)
  • 5. CONTINUED: 4. VICKI I’m sorry A master shot shows that Vicki has disappeared. The light now in the corner of the room dies out. Fade to black.