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Below are 5 samples of titles and descriptions taken from our website. For each item you will
have a title, short description and long description. I would like you to write a new title, short
description and long description for the item. The text should be different and not repetitive.
Make sure the description tells a story, and the sentence flows one in to the other. Some tips for
writing a good description: ask yourself some of the following questions: How do they want to
feel when wearing it?, what story does it tell?, When would you wear it? What items can
coordinate with it? Is it heirloom quality (could it start a family tradition?)?. Make sure to
specify what is being sold. Describe in detail as much as possible. You may include dimensions.
Show that the item is versatile. Solve the customers' problem in the description.
For SEO purposes it is VERY important not to use words and phrases repetitively. It helps to read
the description out loud when you are done. This way you can hear if something sounds
repetitive.
We deal with Judaica items that have a story behind the figures and designs. It is recommended
to research about these symbols/figures so you can have a clearer understanding of what you
are writing about.
Regarding the title – In Etsy specifically it is very important to start the title with keywords that
are usually used in search. You can try searching for the words in the etsy search bar and it will
give you samples of popular searches. This can help you with how to begin your title. Again-
make sure to not be too repetitive, you must be creative and find different ways to write the
titles of similar items. (you may write a title like this: "Hamsa Pendant – 14k Gold with Evil Eye
Roman Glass", so that a popular search term "Hamsa Pendant" is at the beginning. Note- that
not every time the title should be written with a "-" but it can be done sometimes when it fits
better)
Thank you!
http://www.baltinesterjewelry.com/14k_gold_filigree_hamsa_and_evil_eye_roman_glass_pend
ant
Title #1: 14k Gold Filigree Hamsa and Evil Eye Roman Glass Pendant
Title #2: Hamsa 14k Gold Filigree with a
Roman Glass Evil Eye Pendant
Short Description #1: The intricate design of this pendant lends to the ethnic design. This trinket
is made of 14k gold and authentic roman glass fills the "eye".
Short Description #2:Crafted keeping tradition in mind, the 14k Gold Hamsa filigree studded
with a roman glass in the evil eye is the holy pendant.
Long Description #1: This pendant explains itself. The Hamsa is the protector of the evil eye as
you can see in the design. Including the evil eye, the designer thought of everything. The
handcrafted filigree design is made of pure 14k gold and its techniques have been passed down
to this Yemenite jeweler. The Roman glass is handpicked by our team of experts and no two
pieces look exactly the same. Therefore this pendant will be unique just for you.
Owning this talisman will give you everything you need; Protection from the "evil eye" and a
handcrafted unique design that will never be like any other.
As you browse our shop, you will notice many more similar designs to choose from. If you need
any assistance we are always here to help.
Long Description #2: Hamsa being an ancient middle eastern talisman is nothing but a palm
symbolising the hand of god. Wearing the hamsa is thought to give its owners success ,
harmony & protection from evil eye. Versatile in nature , our products are designed in such a
way that they can cater to various occasion and the hand picked roman glass further adds to
its glory when paired with any kind of outfit , making you look even more splendid than ever.
For further queries & assistance please feel free to contact us.
We will me more than happy to help you.
http://www.baltinesterjewelry.com/sterling_silver_wide_14k_gold_bordered_ani_ledodi_ring
Title #1: Sterling Silver Wide 14k Gold Bordered Ani Ledodi Ring
Title #2:Ani Ledodi 14k gold bordered first-
rate silver ring.
Short Description #1: This is the wide version of this design from our Jewish wedding Ring collection. Made
of marked 925 sterling silver, the verse of Ani Ledodi is cut out all around the convex shape band. The 14k gold
rounded borders really add style to this unique wedding band.
Short Description #2:Sketched out to perfection & fitting with ease to your everyday needs,
this 14k gold bordered ring can be worn day in and for a well suited night out.
Long Description #1: This ring has the words "Ani Ledodi Vedodi Li" cut out of its silver rounded band. The
words have been oxidized to make the letters really stand out. The smooth curved bands, surrounding the ring
top and bottom, are made of 14k gold. The added color gives the ring a smart and eye catching look.
The verse inscribed on the ring translates to "I am to my beloved as my beloved is to me". This comes from the
book written by King Solomon, "Song of Songs". He was writing about the love between G-d and His people. The
love between man and woman should mirror the love between man and G-d as depicted in King Solomon's work.
All of our Jewish Wedding Rings has many verses to choose from. You can choose any ring for man or woman.
We at Baltinester Jewelry do our best to please you our customers. Please contact us if you are looking for
something specific that you could not find on our site.
Long Description #2:Memories might fade with age but years down the line the one
thing that stays with a couple or people in love are their bands like these. Picked
mindfully from the works of King Solomon is the following epode inscripted skilfully
around the spherical band ‘Ani Ledodi Vedodi Li’ meaning ‘I am to my beloved as my
beloved is to me’. Even though the design is sculpted with simplicity the words would
grow your love by leaps and bounds. Jewish Wedding Rings conventionally incorporate
verses as part of their designs hence it makes it quite convenient for us at Baltinester to
please our customers with anything specific that they might have in mind.
http://www.baltinesterjewelry.com/14k_gold_shema_yisrael_cut_out_matte_and_shiny_ring
Title #1: 14k Gold Shema Yisrael Cut Out Matte and Shiny Ring
Title #2: Shema Yisrael 14k Gold Ring.
Short Description #1: The Shema Yisrael cut out words on this ring are in matte yellow 14k gold while the
rest of the gold on this ring has a brilliant shiny finish. You can see your fingers peaking through the face of the
ring.
Short Description #2: Trimmed with precision this 14k gold ring bearing the words Shema
Yisrael slips onto your fingers cozily.
Long Description #1: This 14k Gold Shema Yisrael Cut Out Matte and Shiny Ring has an effortless beauty.
The simplicity of the design is awe inspiring. The band and the oval-like border around the words "Shema
Yisrael" are finished in polished 14k yellow gold. The well known words which translate to "Hear O Israel" are cut
out from yellow matte gold.
Having the matte finish against the glossy finish really makes for an interesting variation. The cut out of the words
lets you see your finger through the ring adding yet another dimension.
Hear O Israel is said by Jewish people around the world several times a day. It is their declaration that G-d is
their only Lord existing. This phrase plays a main part in the beliefs of the Jewish people.
See our large selection of Shema Yisrael Jewelry that we offer. We at Baltinester sell only high quality handmade
items from Israel. Our goal is to please you, our customers.
Long Description #2: As you can see the spherical band is proposed to keep your
everyday activity in mind. Neither is it too jazzy nor subtle. Its a perfect balance in
between culture and present day work, making it suitable for any generation to wear.
Encapsulating the holiness of judaism and its binary invocations the Shema Yisrael
ring chiseled captures the crux of the jewish people making it a part of their family for
many years to come in a way passing on their family heirloom making it of significant
importance to anyone who owns it as well.
All our products are handcrafted from Israel keeping our customers exquisite taste in
mind.
http://www.baltinesterjewelry.com/14k_gold_lion_of_judah_silver_and_onyx_cufflinks
Title #1: 14k Gold Lion of Judah Silver and Onyx Cufflinks
Title #2:Lion of Judah Silver 14k Gold Onyx Cufflinks
Short Description #1: These are exquisite cufflinks that include the Lion as the symbol of the Tribe of Judah.
Made of Sterling Silver the 14k gold lion rests upon a black onyx to let the lion really stand out.
Short Description #2: The Lion of Judah 14k Cufflinks are not only an asset to oneself but make
a magnanimous gift.
Long Description #1: These 14k Gold Cufflinks have a very unique style. The contrast of the colors together
really makes these cufflinks stand out. The cufflink itself is made of sterling silver and the lion is made of 14k
yellow gold soldered onto a black onyx stone. In the back of the cufflink two lions are carved out one right side up
and one upside down on either side of the stem.
The lion represents the tribe of Judah as well as courage and protection of the Jewish people. You can find the
lion in many pieces of Judaic art, especially protecting holy structures such as the Holy Ark or Jewish
Synagogues.
Baltinester Jewelry is your place to come for all Judaic Jewelry. We use only the best materials and the best
artists. Please look around our store for more Lion of Judah Jewelry that you may enjoy.
Long Description #2: Cufflinks play the role of further adding allure to a man’s existing
pleasing personality.The Lions on the cuffs epitomize not only the tribe of judah but the
courage and protection of jewish people. As the saying goes, there is a lion in every heart. It
not only makes a style statement but rightly describes what one wears on his sleeve. Other
than the holding a holy meaning to the jews , lions in general are termed with words like
honor , courage , leadership and strength.
We deal with a wide range of Judaic Jewellery that might grab your attention.
http://www.baltinesterjewelry.com/14k_red_gold_antique_style_rose_engraved_band
Title #1: 14k Red Gold Antique Style Rose Engraved Band
Title #2: Floral 14k Gold Band
Short Description #1: This ring will make you feel like you are walking through the garden. The oxidization
within the grooves of the carved out rose pattern creates a very antique style.
Short Description #2: For the independent and confident women than you are or are becoming.
This 14k gold band is not just another piece of jewelry. Its an identity in its own.
Long Description #1: The roses are in the center, the cobble stone pattern is along the edges and the ring
has a snake like swerve all around. All those elements together make this ring a unique accessory to own.
This ring will take you back to those days when families would sit and relax on their porches and work in their
gardens.
An artistic piece of jewelry like this can be used as a heirloom like piece of jewelry, to be passed down from
mother to daughter.
Long Description #2:Just by looking at the ring once , one would want to wear it
immediately. It is so wearable. A beautiful timeless piece covered with floral craftsmanship
worn in any shape or size , of a finger , would completely flow with ease with any outfit you
wear. It takes you back to a time when things were simpler just like this elegant band is.
Sometimes you just need a timeless piece to do the talking and this little piece is definitely
going to steal the thunder from any piece of jewellery.
A piece like this is what Baltinester believes in and endorses.

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  • 1. Below are 5 samples of titles and descriptions taken from our website. For each item you will have a title, short description and long description. I would like you to write a new title, short description and long description for the item. The text should be different and not repetitive. Make sure the description tells a story, and the sentence flows one in to the other. Some tips for writing a good description: ask yourself some of the following questions: How do they want to feel when wearing it?, what story does it tell?, When would you wear it? What items can coordinate with it? Is it heirloom quality (could it start a family tradition?)?. Make sure to specify what is being sold. Describe in detail as much as possible. You may include dimensions. Show that the item is versatile. Solve the customers' problem in the description. For SEO purposes it is VERY important not to use words and phrases repetitively. It helps to read the description out loud when you are done. This way you can hear if something sounds repetitive. We deal with Judaica items that have a story behind the figures and designs. It is recommended to research about these symbols/figures so you can have a clearer understanding of what you are writing about. Regarding the title – In Etsy specifically it is very important to start the title with keywords that are usually used in search. You can try searching for the words in the etsy search bar and it will give you samples of popular searches. This can help you with how to begin your title. Again- make sure to not be too repetitive, you must be creative and find different ways to write the titles of similar items. (you may write a title like this: "Hamsa Pendant – 14k Gold with Evil Eye Roman Glass", so that a popular search term "Hamsa Pendant" is at the beginning. Note- that not every time the title should be written with a "-" but it can be done sometimes when it fits better) Thank you! http://www.baltinesterjewelry.com/14k_gold_filigree_hamsa_and_evil_eye_roman_glass_pend ant Title #1: 14k Gold Filigree Hamsa and Evil Eye Roman Glass Pendant Title #2: Hamsa 14k Gold Filigree with a Roman Glass Evil Eye Pendant Short Description #1: The intricate design of this pendant lends to the ethnic design. This trinket is made of 14k gold and authentic roman glass fills the "eye". Short Description #2:Crafted keeping tradition in mind, the 14k Gold Hamsa filigree studded with a roman glass in the evil eye is the holy pendant. Long Description #1: This pendant explains itself. The Hamsa is the protector of the evil eye as you can see in the design. Including the evil eye, the designer thought of everything. The handcrafted filigree design is made of pure 14k gold and its techniques have been passed down to this Yemenite jeweler. The Roman glass is handpicked by our team of experts and no two pieces look exactly the same. Therefore this pendant will be unique just for you. Owning this talisman will give you everything you need; Protection from the "evil eye" and a handcrafted unique design that will never be like any other.
  • 2. As you browse our shop, you will notice many more similar designs to choose from. If you need any assistance we are always here to help. Long Description #2: Hamsa being an ancient middle eastern talisman is nothing but a palm symbolising the hand of god. Wearing the hamsa is thought to give its owners success , harmony & protection from evil eye. Versatile in nature , our products are designed in such a way that they can cater to various occasion and the hand picked roman glass further adds to its glory when paired with any kind of outfit , making you look even more splendid than ever. For further queries & assistance please feel free to contact us. We will me more than happy to help you. http://www.baltinesterjewelry.com/sterling_silver_wide_14k_gold_bordered_ani_ledodi_ring Title #1: Sterling Silver Wide 14k Gold Bordered Ani Ledodi Ring Title #2:Ani Ledodi 14k gold bordered first- rate silver ring. Short Description #1: This is the wide version of this design from our Jewish wedding Ring collection. Made of marked 925 sterling silver, the verse of Ani Ledodi is cut out all around the convex shape band. The 14k gold rounded borders really add style to this unique wedding band. Short Description #2:Sketched out to perfection & fitting with ease to your everyday needs, this 14k gold bordered ring can be worn day in and for a well suited night out. Long Description #1: This ring has the words "Ani Ledodi Vedodi Li" cut out of its silver rounded band. The words have been oxidized to make the letters really stand out. The smooth curved bands, surrounding the ring top and bottom, are made of 14k gold. The added color gives the ring a smart and eye catching look. The verse inscribed on the ring translates to "I am to my beloved as my beloved is to me". This comes from the book written by King Solomon, "Song of Songs". He was writing about the love between G-d and His people. The love between man and woman should mirror the love between man and G-d as depicted in King Solomon's work. All of our Jewish Wedding Rings has many verses to choose from. You can choose any ring for man or woman. We at Baltinester Jewelry do our best to please you our customers. Please contact us if you are looking for something specific that you could not find on our site. Long Description #2:Memories might fade with age but years down the line the one thing that stays with a couple or people in love are their bands like these. Picked mindfully from the works of King Solomon is the following epode inscripted skilfully around the spherical band ‘Ani Ledodi Vedodi Li’ meaning ‘I am to my beloved as my beloved is to me’. Even though the design is sculpted with simplicity the words would grow your love by leaps and bounds. Jewish Wedding Rings conventionally incorporate verses as part of their designs hence it makes it quite convenient for us at Baltinester to please our customers with anything specific that they might have in mind. http://www.baltinesterjewelry.com/14k_gold_shema_yisrael_cut_out_matte_and_shiny_ring Title #1: 14k Gold Shema Yisrael Cut Out Matte and Shiny Ring Title #2: Shema Yisrael 14k Gold Ring.
  • 3. Short Description #1: The Shema Yisrael cut out words on this ring are in matte yellow 14k gold while the rest of the gold on this ring has a brilliant shiny finish. You can see your fingers peaking through the face of the ring. Short Description #2: Trimmed with precision this 14k gold ring bearing the words Shema Yisrael slips onto your fingers cozily. Long Description #1: This 14k Gold Shema Yisrael Cut Out Matte and Shiny Ring has an effortless beauty. The simplicity of the design is awe inspiring. The band and the oval-like border around the words "Shema Yisrael" are finished in polished 14k yellow gold. The well known words which translate to "Hear O Israel" are cut out from yellow matte gold. Having the matte finish against the glossy finish really makes for an interesting variation. The cut out of the words lets you see your finger through the ring adding yet another dimension. Hear O Israel is said by Jewish people around the world several times a day. It is their declaration that G-d is their only Lord existing. This phrase plays a main part in the beliefs of the Jewish people. See our large selection of Shema Yisrael Jewelry that we offer. We at Baltinester sell only high quality handmade items from Israel. Our goal is to please you, our customers. Long Description #2: As you can see the spherical band is proposed to keep your everyday activity in mind. Neither is it too jazzy nor subtle. Its a perfect balance in between culture and present day work, making it suitable for any generation to wear. Encapsulating the holiness of judaism and its binary invocations the Shema Yisrael ring chiseled captures the crux of the jewish people making it a part of their family for many years to come in a way passing on their family heirloom making it of significant importance to anyone who owns it as well. All our products are handcrafted from Israel keeping our customers exquisite taste in mind. http://www.baltinesterjewelry.com/14k_gold_lion_of_judah_silver_and_onyx_cufflinks Title #1: 14k Gold Lion of Judah Silver and Onyx Cufflinks Title #2:Lion of Judah Silver 14k Gold Onyx Cufflinks Short Description #1: These are exquisite cufflinks that include the Lion as the symbol of the Tribe of Judah. Made of Sterling Silver the 14k gold lion rests upon a black onyx to let the lion really stand out. Short Description #2: The Lion of Judah 14k Cufflinks are not only an asset to oneself but make a magnanimous gift. Long Description #1: These 14k Gold Cufflinks have a very unique style. The contrast of the colors together really makes these cufflinks stand out. The cufflink itself is made of sterling silver and the lion is made of 14k yellow gold soldered onto a black onyx stone. In the back of the cufflink two lions are carved out one right side up and one upside down on either side of the stem. The lion represents the tribe of Judah as well as courage and protection of the Jewish people. You can find the lion in many pieces of Judaic art, especially protecting holy structures such as the Holy Ark or Jewish Synagogues. Baltinester Jewelry is your place to come for all Judaic Jewelry. We use only the best materials and the best artists. Please look around our store for more Lion of Judah Jewelry that you may enjoy.
  • 4. Long Description #2: Cufflinks play the role of further adding allure to a man’s existing pleasing personality.The Lions on the cuffs epitomize not only the tribe of judah but the courage and protection of jewish people. As the saying goes, there is a lion in every heart. It not only makes a style statement but rightly describes what one wears on his sleeve. Other than the holding a holy meaning to the jews , lions in general are termed with words like honor , courage , leadership and strength. We deal with a wide range of Judaic Jewellery that might grab your attention. http://www.baltinesterjewelry.com/14k_red_gold_antique_style_rose_engraved_band Title #1: 14k Red Gold Antique Style Rose Engraved Band Title #2: Floral 14k Gold Band Short Description #1: This ring will make you feel like you are walking through the garden. The oxidization within the grooves of the carved out rose pattern creates a very antique style. Short Description #2: For the independent and confident women than you are or are becoming. This 14k gold band is not just another piece of jewelry. Its an identity in its own. Long Description #1: The roses are in the center, the cobble stone pattern is along the edges and the ring has a snake like swerve all around. All those elements together make this ring a unique accessory to own. This ring will take you back to those days when families would sit and relax on their porches and work in their gardens. An artistic piece of jewelry like this can be used as a heirloom like piece of jewelry, to be passed down from mother to daughter. Long Description #2:Just by looking at the ring once , one would want to wear it immediately. It is so wearable. A beautiful timeless piece covered with floral craftsmanship worn in any shape or size , of a finger , would completely flow with ease with any outfit you wear. It takes you back to a time when things were simpler just like this elegant band is. Sometimes you just need a timeless piece to do the talking and this little piece is definitely going to steal the thunder from any piece of jewellery. A piece like this is what Baltinester believes in and endorses.