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World’s Best-Kept  Copywriting Secrets  Presented by  Robert W. Bly for Cincom – 11/06/08
Here’s What NOT To Do ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
What We Will Cover Today: ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
The Secret of the Big Promise ,[object Object],[object Object],06/17/10 “ The basis of every great advertisement is a credible promise.” -- Kurt Vonnegut,  Timequake  (G.P. Putnam, 1997), p. 155 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
06/17/10 Make a BIG Promise. “ Promise, large promise, is the soul of an advertisement .” –  Samuel Johnson World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
06/17/10 That’s Right – a  REALLY BIG  Promise! World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
The USP (Unique Selling Proposition) ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],06/17/10 -- Rosser Reeves,  Reality in Advertising   (Alfred A. Knopf, 1961) World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
What’s the USP? 06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
Your Product’s “Reason for Being” ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
Which pulled best? 06/17/10 A B ATTENTION World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
Have a Secondary Promise ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
The Secondary Promise 06/17/10 The Big Promise The Secondary Promise World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
The 4 U’s ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
Rate Each Headline (1=weakest; 4=strongest) 06/17/10 Help where you need it, when you need it from people you can trust. That’s a Cincom promise. Urgent  ……………………. [ ] 1  [ ] 2  [ ] 3  [ ] 4 Unique  …………………… [ ] 1  [ ] 2  [ ] 3  [ ] 4 Ultra-Specific  …………... [ ] 1  [ ] 2  [ ] 3  [ ] 4 Useful  ……………………. [ ] 1  [ ] 2  [ ] 3  [ ] 4 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
Rate Each Headline (1=weakest; 4=strongest) ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],06/17/10 “ Why Japanese Women Have Beautiful Skin” World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
The Rule of 3 Benefits 06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
Beliefs, Feelings, and Desires (BFD) 06/17/10 Product Prospect World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
Does this copywriter  know his audience? 06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
Beliefs, Feelings, and Desires ,[object Object],[object Object],06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
Beliefs, Feelings, and Desires ,[object Object],[object Object],06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
Beliefs, Feelings, and Desires ,[object Object],[object Object],06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
06/17/10 Addressing the core complex generated a huge response. World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
Deeper… ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
This is  personal . 06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
06/17/10 Features & Benefits Pyramid World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets Appeal to OEMs, VARs, distributors, dealers, agents, engineers, designers, reps, technical evaluators, and other technical buyers. Appeal to sophisticated and experienced users, middle managers, hobbyists, enthusiasts, experts, comparison shoppers, past buyers, professionals, frequent buyers, knowledgeable buyers. Appeal to consumers, top-level executives, entrepreneurs, first-time buyers, end users, novices, current customers, prospects. ULTIMATE BENEFITS BENEFITS ADVANTAGES FEATURES Appeal to consumers, unsophisticated buyers, casual users, "dreamers," opportunity seekers What the Product  is  or  has A Feature Other Products Lack What the Product  Does The "Benefit of the Benefit"
Features & Benefits  of a  No.2   Pencil 06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
Four-Legged Stool 06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets Big Idea Future Benefit Track Record Credibility
Big Idea & Future Benefit 06/17/10 Future Benefit Big Idea World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
Track Record 06/17/10 Track Record World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
Credibility 06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
Which leg is this? 06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
And this? 06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
And this? 06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
And this? 06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
Motivating Sequence ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
Motivating Sequence in Action 06/17/10 Solution World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets Attention Problem Proof Call to action
Without a Special Offer,  Direct Mail Will Not Work. 06/17/10 ACTION World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
06/17/10 Response = ƒ(Offer) OFFERS World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Position part of your product as a premium.   06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
06/17/10 Quick-Response Bonus Have a “ Premium Page” World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
Determining Copy Length 06/17/10 Audience: ___________________ Product: _____________________ World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets Long Copy Medium Copy Medium Copy Short Copy High Low Involvement High Low Emotion
Copy Intensity Grid (Degree of Hyperbole vs. Clarity) 06/17/10 Motivation Availability Limited Plentiful World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets Need ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],Want ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
II . Needed Product, Limited Availability 06/17/10 ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
III . Want/Plentiful 06/17/10 ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
(But Not  This Hypey!) 06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
Abundant Proof 06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
Proof ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
Use a “Positioning Metaphor” 06/17/10 Metaphor :  “It’s the Rolls-Royce of __________.” Simile :  “It’s like the Rolls-Royce of ___________.” World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
Transubstantiation 06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
Transubstantiation 06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
An Image… 06/17/10 Or a Statistic SPIN Reality With . . . World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
“ Specifcs Sell.”   -- Claude Hopkins 06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
What’s in a name?   06/17/10 ,[object Object],[object Object],World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
Spin: Interpreting the Facts to Prove Your Sales Argument   06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
Spin Reality With . . . . Negative Selling 06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets               
The “I’m a Dummy” Technique 06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
Be  Specific 06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
Use a Gimmick 06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
Offer a Money-Back Guarantee 06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
Go  Beyond  Money-Back 06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
Give Scientific Proof (“False Logic”) 06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],Copy Platform 06/17/10 USP (Unique Selling Proposition) 1 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],Copy Platform 06/17/10 2 Market World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],Copy Platform 06/17/10 Core Complex of the Audience 3 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],Copy Platform 06/17/10 Research Prospects on Three Levels 4 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],Copy Platform 06/17/10 Four LEGS of the Stool 5 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],Copy Platform 06/17/10 The Package 6 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],Copy Platform 06/17/10 Offer 7 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
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Word's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets

  • 1. World’s Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets Presented by Robert W. Bly for Cincom – 11/06/08
  • 2.
  • 3.
  • 4.
  • 5. 06/17/10 Make a BIG Promise. “ Promise, large promise, is the soul of an advertisement .” – Samuel Johnson World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
  • 6. 06/17/10 That’s Right – a REALLY BIG Promise! World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
  • 7.
  • 8. What’s the USP? 06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
  • 9.
  • 10. Which pulled best? 06/17/10 A B ATTENTION World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
  • 11.
  • 12. The Secondary Promise 06/17/10 The Big Promise The Secondary Promise World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
  • 13.
  • 14. Rate Each Headline (1=weakest; 4=strongest) 06/17/10 Help where you need it, when you need it from people you can trust. That’s a Cincom promise. Urgent ……………………. [ ] 1 [ ] 2 [ ] 3 [ ] 4 Unique …………………… [ ] 1 [ ] 2 [ ] 3 [ ] 4 Ultra-Specific …………... [ ] 1 [ ] 2 [ ] 3 [ ] 4 Useful ……………………. [ ] 1 [ ] 2 [ ] 3 [ ] 4 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
  • 15.
  • 16. The Rule of 3 Benefits 06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
  • 17. Beliefs, Feelings, and Desires (BFD) 06/17/10 Product Prospect World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
  • 18. Does this copywriter know his audience? 06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
  • 19.
  • 20.
  • 21.
  • 22. 06/17/10 Addressing the core complex generated a huge response. World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
  • 23.
  • 24. This is personal . 06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
  • 25. 06/17/10 Features & Benefits Pyramid World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets Appeal to OEMs, VARs, distributors, dealers, agents, engineers, designers, reps, technical evaluators, and other technical buyers. Appeal to sophisticated and experienced users, middle managers, hobbyists, enthusiasts, experts, comparison shoppers, past buyers, professionals, frequent buyers, knowledgeable buyers. Appeal to consumers, top-level executives, entrepreneurs, first-time buyers, end users, novices, current customers, prospects. ULTIMATE BENEFITS BENEFITS ADVANTAGES FEATURES Appeal to consumers, unsophisticated buyers, casual users, "dreamers," opportunity seekers What the Product is or has A Feature Other Products Lack What the Product Does The "Benefit of the Benefit"
  • 26. Features & Benefits of a No.2 Pencil 06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
  • 27. Four-Legged Stool 06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets Big Idea Future Benefit Track Record Credibility
  • 28. Big Idea & Future Benefit 06/17/10 Future Benefit Big Idea World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
  • 29. Track Record 06/17/10 Track Record World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
  • 30. Credibility 06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
  • 31. Which leg is this? 06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
  • 32. And this? 06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
  • 33. And this? 06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
  • 34. And this? 06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
  • 35.
  • 36. Motivating Sequence in Action 06/17/10 Solution World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets Attention Problem Proof Call to action
  • 37. Without a Special Offer, Direct Mail Will Not Work. 06/17/10 ACTION World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
  • 38.
  • 39. Position part of your product as a premium. 06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
  • 40. 06/17/10 Quick-Response Bonus Have a “ Premium Page” World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
  • 41. Determining Copy Length 06/17/10 Audience: ___________________ Product: _____________________ World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets Long Copy Medium Copy Medium Copy Short Copy High Low Involvement High Low Emotion
  • 42.
  • 43.
  • 44.
  • 45. (But Not This Hypey!) 06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
  • 46. Abundant Proof 06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
  • 47.
  • 48. Use a “Positioning Metaphor” 06/17/10 Metaphor : “It’s the Rolls-Royce of __________.” Simile : “It’s like the Rolls-Royce of ___________.” World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
  • 49. Transubstantiation 06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
  • 50. Transubstantiation 06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
  • 51. An Image… 06/17/10 Or a Statistic SPIN Reality With . . . World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
  • 52. “ Specifcs Sell.” -- Claude Hopkins 06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
  • 53.
  • 54. Spin: Interpreting the Facts to Prove Your Sales Argument 06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
  • 55. Spin Reality With . . . . Negative Selling 06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets               
  • 56. The “I’m a Dummy” Technique 06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
  • 57. Be Specific 06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
  • 58. Use a Gimmick 06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
  • 59. Offer a Money-Back Guarantee 06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
  • 60. Go Beyond Money-Back 06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
  • 61. Give Scientific Proof (“False Logic”) 06/17/10 World's Best-Kept Copywriting Secrets
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  • 69. Thank you. Subscribe to “Bob Bly’s Direct Response Letter” at www.bly.com