1. Blog Teacher Feedback

2. Identify things that aren’t good in the
following screen grabs…..

6. What’s good here?

10. EBI
• Sequential and chronological
• Assessment records for EVERY task
– Scan of assessment sheet (cropped, medium)
– Grade & Targets (bullet points) written in
– Presentation is consistent in this
• Wider range of photos / videos
– All have captions
– Not 20 on top of each other
• Backgrounds should reflect your genre
• Alignments and columns should be wide enough
• Don’t have ‘empty space’
• Label DRAFTED work – Example: Storyboard Draft 2
• Where’s draft 2 and 3 storyboards/timelines/scripts? (new timelines – website?)
• Do assessment records and update pictures etc every day – so you don’t get
behind
• Films you watched on your own – poster and ‘I watched this’ is not enough
• ‘Alterations along the way’: need to briefly state how you have changed ideas
• Technology = what have you used? (videos?)
• Audience feedback evidence from draft 1 and 2?
– Facebook screen shots
– Video interviews
– Picture and their comments?