1. School Magazine Peer Feedback
Are the fonts readable? Are there a maximum of 3 Yes, the fonts are readable and three fonts were used.
fonts? Have they used a different font for their However more cover lines needed.
masthead and their coverlines?
Is there a clear colour scheme? Is there a sense of
branding / House style Yes, good use of colour. But maybe less colour should be
used, with better contrasts (eg red on purple background is
not such a good idea)
Is the eye flow natural?
No – nothing on top left hand side of cover (maybe image
should be flipped in order for eye flow to be more natural?)
Is the picture believable/well edited?
It is a very nice picture, however needs more editing (eye
makeup smudges should be removed and some colour
enhancement should be used too)
Is the picture suitable for the magazine? (Subject,
model, mise-en-scene, costume, props, location) Yes – she clearly is a student however it is not clear that she
is in school. However the prop of a rubix cube indicates
studies/intelligence etc.
Is Spelling Punctuation and Grammar accurate-Are
there any typo’s? None
Are coverlines lined up
More coverlines needed!!! Good lining up however.
Are all key elements there (Masthead, dateline, main
cover line, other coverlines (kickers+explanatory)  Bar code needed + more c over lines and kickers
Is the page on A4 (21cmx29.7cm) Yes
Comments More elements needed, but good cover overall.