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Write Great Web Content:
Plain Language in Action
    Session 2: May 26, 2011
Course topics for Session 2
• Part 1: Review topics and homework from
  Session 1
• Part 2: Write content that is appropriate for
  intended users
• Part 3: In-course assignment: Write a bite, a
  snack, and a meal
• Part 4: Discuss in-course assignment
• Part 5: Session 2 wrap-up
• Part 6: Session 2 homework – writing
  assignment and reading assignment
                  ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2      2
Course topics for Session 2
• Part 1: Review topics and homework from
  Session 1
• Part 2: Write content that is appropriate for
  intended users
• Part 3: In-course assignment: Write a bite, a
  snack, and a meal
• Part 4: Discuss in-course assignment
• Part 5: Session 2 wrap-up
• Part 6: Session 2 homework – writing
  assignment and reading assignment
                  ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2      3
Part 1: Review topics and homework
from Session 1
Session 1 topics:
• What is plain language?
• How to write task-oriented web content

Session 1 reading homework:
• Chapter 2, “People! People! People!”

Session 1 writing homework:
• Rewrite a task page at your own site or use
  HHS’s “How to Request Information” page

                  ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2    4
Part 1: Review Session 1 reading homework
– Chapter 2, “People! People! People!”
• Find a page or a section in the chapter
  that was meaningful to you
• What assumptions do you make about
  your users?
• What facts do you know about them?
• Would you consider developing personas
  for your users? Have you done this
  already?
               ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2   5
Part 1: Review participants’ homework
from Session 1
• Andrea Sigritz’s redo of the
  HowTo.gov TOS page

• Lucy Walker’s redo of the Texas
  Council for Developmental
  Disabilities RFP page



• Diane Slagle’s redo of UCSD’s
  Student Health Services page’s
  “Basic Care” content
                     ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2   6
Course topics for Session 2
• Part 1: Review topics and homework from
  Session 1
• Part 2: Write content that is appropriate for
  intended users
• Part 3: In-course assignment: Write a bite, a
  snack, and a meal
• Part 4: Discuss in-course assignment
• Part 5: Session 2 wrap-up
• Part 6: Session 2 homework – writing
  assignment and reading assignment
                  ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2      7
Part 2: Write content that is
appropriate for intended users
Discuss:
• Who are your intended users? (Describe
  by role, group, or title)
• How do they differ from each other?
• How is writing content for them
  challenging?
• How have you tailored your content to
  meet your users’ needs?
               ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2   8
Case study in writing content that’s
appropriate for intended users




              ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2   9
Five guidelines for writing content that’s
appropriate for intended users
1. Match the content’s technical complexity
   to the users’ level.
2. Help users find the content that’s
   targeted to them.
3. Link to glossary, illustration, screenshot,
   demo, list of abbreviations, etc.
4. Be the intended users’ advocate when
   discussing content with your SMEs.
5. Write a bite, a snack, and a meal.
                ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2   10
Case study: Content for the general
public




             ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2   11
Case study: Content for health
departments




             ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2   12
Case study: Content for healthcare
professionals




             ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2   13
Match the content’s technical
complexity to the users’ level




              ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2   14
Help users find the content that’s
targeted to them




              ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2   15
Help users find the content that’s
targeted to them




              ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2   16
Link to glossary, illustration, screenshot,
demo, list of abbreviations, etc.
• Discuss: Find five ways EIA
  provides content appropriate
  for a range of users




                 ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2   17
Be the intended users’ advocate when
discussing content with your SMEs




             ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2   18
Write a bite, a snack, and a meal
How content-hungry is          How much content does
the reader?                    the web writer provide?
• Bite                         Message-oriented
                               heading
• Snack                        Brief summary,
                               “executive summary”
• Meal


                 ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2          19
Sample bites, snacks, and meals




            ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2   20
Sample bites, snacks, and meals




            ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2   21
Sample bites, snacks, and meals




            ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2   22
These bites and snacks need work




           ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2   23
These bites and snacks need work




           ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2   24
Course topics for Session 2
• Part 1: Review topics and homework from
  Session 1
• Part 2: Write content that is appropriate for
  intended users
• Part 3: In-course assignment: Write a bite, a
  snack, and a meal
• Part 4: Discuss in-course assignment
• Part 5: Session 2 wrap-up
• Part 6: Session 2 homework – writing
  assignment and reading assignment
                  ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2      25
Part 3: In-course assignment:
Write a bite, and a snack for this meal




              ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2   26
Course topics for Session 2
• Part 1: Review topics and homework from
  Session 1
• Part 2: Write content that is appropriate for
  intended users
• Part 3: In-course assignment: Write a bite, a
  snack, and a meal
• Part 4: Discuss in-course assignment
• Part 5: Session 2 wrap-up
• Part 6: Session 2 homework – writing
  assignment and reading assignment
                  ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2      27
Course topics for Session 2
• Part 1: Review topics and homework from
  Session 1
• Part 2: Write content that is appropriate for
  intended users
• Part 3: In-course assignment: Write a bite, a
  snack, and a meal
• Part 4: Discuss in-course assignment
• Part 5: Session 2 wrap-up
• Part 6: Session 2 homework – writing
  assignment and reading assignment
                  ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2      28
Part 5: Session 2 wrap-up
• Questions?
• Web pages to look at again?
• Review the five guidelines for writing
  content that’s appropriate for intended
  users?
• Review the bite, snack, and meal
  approach?

                ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2   29
Course topics for Session 2
• Part 1: Review topics and homework from
  Session 1
• Part 2: Write content that is appropriate for
  intended users
• Part 3: In-course assignment: Write a bite, a
  snack, and a meal
• Part 4: Discuss in-course assignment
• Part 5: Session 2 wrap-up
• Part 6: Session 2 homework – writing
  assignment and reading assignment
                  ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2      30
Part 6: Writing and reading
homework for Session 2
By Tuesday, May 31:
• Write a bite and a
  snack
Read
• Chapter 6, “Focusing
  on Your Essential
  Messages”



                 ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2   31
Resource




           ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2   32
Evaluation




             ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2   33

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Session2 pl online_course_26_may2011- final

  • 1. Write Great Web Content: Plain Language in Action Session 2: May 26, 2011
  • 2. Course topics for Session 2 • Part 1: Review topics and homework from Session 1 • Part 2: Write content that is appropriate for intended users • Part 3: In-course assignment: Write a bite, a snack, and a meal • Part 4: Discuss in-course assignment • Part 5: Session 2 wrap-up • Part 6: Session 2 homework – writing assignment and reading assignment ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2 2
  • 3. Course topics for Session 2 • Part 1: Review topics and homework from Session 1 • Part 2: Write content that is appropriate for intended users • Part 3: In-course assignment: Write a bite, a snack, and a meal • Part 4: Discuss in-course assignment • Part 5: Session 2 wrap-up • Part 6: Session 2 homework – writing assignment and reading assignment ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2 3
  • 4. Part 1: Review topics and homework from Session 1 Session 1 topics: • What is plain language? • How to write task-oriented web content Session 1 reading homework: • Chapter 2, “People! People! People!” Session 1 writing homework: • Rewrite a task page at your own site or use HHS’s “How to Request Information” page ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2 4
  • 5. Part 1: Review Session 1 reading homework – Chapter 2, “People! People! People!” • Find a page or a section in the chapter that was meaningful to you • What assumptions do you make about your users? • What facts do you know about them? • Would you consider developing personas for your users? Have you done this already? ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2 5
  • 6. Part 1: Review participants’ homework from Session 1 • Andrea Sigritz’s redo of the HowTo.gov TOS page • Lucy Walker’s redo of the Texas Council for Developmental Disabilities RFP page • Diane Slagle’s redo of UCSD’s Student Health Services page’s “Basic Care” content ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2 6
  • 7. Course topics for Session 2 • Part 1: Review topics and homework from Session 1 • Part 2: Write content that is appropriate for intended users • Part 3: In-course assignment: Write a bite, a snack, and a meal • Part 4: Discuss in-course assignment • Part 5: Session 2 wrap-up • Part 6: Session 2 homework – writing assignment and reading assignment ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2 7
  • 8. Part 2: Write content that is appropriate for intended users Discuss: • Who are your intended users? (Describe by role, group, or title) • How do they differ from each other? • How is writing content for them challenging? • How have you tailored your content to meet your users’ needs? ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2 8
  • 9. Case study in writing content that’s appropriate for intended users ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2 9
  • 10. Five guidelines for writing content that’s appropriate for intended users 1. Match the content’s technical complexity to the users’ level. 2. Help users find the content that’s targeted to them. 3. Link to glossary, illustration, screenshot, demo, list of abbreviations, etc. 4. Be the intended users’ advocate when discussing content with your SMEs. 5. Write a bite, a snack, and a meal. ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2 10
  • 11. Case study: Content for the general public ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2 11
  • 12. Case study: Content for health departments ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2 12
  • 13. Case study: Content for healthcare professionals ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2 13
  • 14. Match the content’s technical complexity to the users’ level ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2 14
  • 15. Help users find the content that’s targeted to them ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2 15
  • 16. Help users find the content that’s targeted to them ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2 16
  • 17. Link to glossary, illustration, screenshot, demo, list of abbreviations, etc. • Discuss: Find five ways EIA provides content appropriate for a range of users ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2 17
  • 18. Be the intended users’ advocate when discussing content with your SMEs ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2 18
  • 19. Write a bite, a snack, and a meal How content-hungry is How much content does the reader? the web writer provide? • Bite Message-oriented heading • Snack Brief summary, “executive summary” • Meal ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2 19
  • 20. Sample bites, snacks, and meals ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2 20
  • 21. Sample bites, snacks, and meals ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2 21
  • 22. Sample bites, snacks, and meals ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2 22
  • 23. These bites and snacks need work ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2 23
  • 24. These bites and snacks need work ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2 24
  • 25. Course topics for Session 2 • Part 1: Review topics and homework from Session 1 • Part 2: Write content that is appropriate for intended users • Part 3: In-course assignment: Write a bite, a snack, and a meal • Part 4: Discuss in-course assignment • Part 5: Session 2 wrap-up • Part 6: Session 2 homework – writing assignment and reading assignment ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2 25
  • 26. Part 3: In-course assignment: Write a bite, and a snack for this meal ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2 26
  • 27. Course topics for Session 2 • Part 1: Review topics and homework from Session 1 • Part 2: Write content that is appropriate for intended users • Part 3: In-course assignment: Write a bite, a snack, and a meal • Part 4: Discuss in-course assignment • Part 5: Session 2 wrap-up • Part 6: Session 2 homework – writing assignment and reading assignment ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2 27
  • 28. Course topics for Session 2 • Part 1: Review topics and homework from Session 1 • Part 2: Write content that is appropriate for intended users • Part 3: In-course assignment: Write a bite, a snack, and a meal • Part 4: Discuss in-course assignment • Part 5: Session 2 wrap-up • Part 6: Session 2 homework – writing assignment and reading assignment ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2 28
  • 29. Part 5: Session 2 wrap-up • Questions? • Web pages to look at again? • Review the five guidelines for writing content that’s appropriate for intended users? • Review the bite, snack, and meal approach? ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2 29
  • 30. Course topics for Session 2 • Part 1: Review topics and homework from Session 1 • Part 2: Write content that is appropriate for intended users • Part 3: In-course assignment: Write a bite, a snack, and a meal • Part 4: Discuss in-course assignment • Part 5: Session 2 wrap-up • Part 6: Session 2 homework – writing assignment and reading assignment ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2 30
  • 31. Part 6: Writing and reading homework for Session 2 By Tuesday, May 31: • Write a bite and a snack Read • Chapter 6, “Focusing on Your Essential Messages” ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2 31
  • 32. Resource ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2 32
  • 33. Evaluation ©E-WRITE, 2011 - Session 2 33