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Iconic Entertainment Practice Film Pitch Feedback




                                                         By the feedback I have
                                                         here over half the class felt
                                                         i communicated and
                                                         delivered my pitch clearly.
                                                         This feedback contradicts
                                                         other answers throughout
                                                         the rest of the questions.



                                                    I feel my pitch obviously
                                                    wasn’t very professional
                                                    and enthusiastic judging by
                                                    the feedback the audience
                                                    gave.


                                                As most of the class gave me a poor
                                                feedback score on how exciting my
                                                idea was I feel I may have to change
                                                the script completely in order to
                                                gain more of a positive audience.




                                                I feel I should definitely improve the
                                                quality of my deliverance as over
                                                half of the class thought that I
                                                should speak to them more directly.
Shown clearly here the majority of
                                      the class were not very enthusiastic
                                      about my film idea. With over 45%
                                      which is nearly half the class giving
                                      me a score of 1 I feel that I need to
                                      drastically improve the quality and
                                      depth of the idea.




                                         The things the class thought I was
                                         best at in the pitch was that I was
                                         confident to answer questions,
                                         had clear and precise verbal
                                         delivery and also the originality of
                                         my idea impressed them. The
                                         things I need to work on are
                                         visual quality, confident body
                                         language and verbal delivery.




The areas the class thought I could
improve were answering questions
more confidently, speaking more
clearly, more open and relaxed body
language and to devise a more
original idea.

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Iconic entertainment practice film pitch feedback

  • 1. Iconic Entertainment Practice Film Pitch Feedback By the feedback I have here over half the class felt i communicated and delivered my pitch clearly. This feedback contradicts other answers throughout the rest of the questions. I feel my pitch obviously wasn’t very professional and enthusiastic judging by the feedback the audience gave. As most of the class gave me a poor feedback score on how exciting my idea was I feel I may have to change the script completely in order to gain more of a positive audience. I feel I should definitely improve the quality of my deliverance as over half of the class thought that I should speak to them more directly.
  • 2. Shown clearly here the majority of the class were not very enthusiastic about my film idea. With over 45% which is nearly half the class giving me a score of 1 I feel that I need to drastically improve the quality and depth of the idea. The things the class thought I was best at in the pitch was that I was confident to answer questions, had clear and precise verbal delivery and also the originality of my idea impressed them. The things I need to work on are visual quality, confident body language and verbal delivery. The areas the class thought I could improve were answering questions more confidently, speaking more clearly, more open and relaxed body language and to devise a more original idea.