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        AND WHERE YOU
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Hi Ben

Thank you for the explanation. I’m
sending you my last essay on education.

Will it be possible for you to check
another four my essays? I can pay the
same way, correct?

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select?

Thank you in advance,
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Dear Ben,

Thank you very much. I really appreciate you help. I believe
because of your kind assistance I was able to progress so fast.
My writing was never checked by the native speaker, so all
your corrections and comments are extremely valuable for me.

Thank for the suggestions of the synonyms in the essay on
International law. I know that it is always good using
synonyms, but sometimes I just run out of the proper words.

Of course, I will update you about me results. I do hope
tomorrow I will be able to do just a little bit better than usual.

Thanks again for all your help. You are a very good teacher!

Best regards,
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IELTS Essay Correction

  • 1. THIS WILL MAKE YOUR IELTS SCORE HIGHER
  • 2. “DO YOU KNOW THE …
  • 3. “DO YOU KNOW THE … MISTAKES YOU MAKE?
  • 4. “DO YOU KNOW THE … AND WHERE YOU MAKE THEM?
  • 6. Hi Ben Thank you for the explanation. I’m sending you my last essay on education. Will it be possible for you to check another four my essays? I can pay the same way, correct? Do you have prepared topics or I can select? Thank you in advance,
  • 7.
  • 10. I CAN CHECK YOUR ESSAY AND SHOW YOU
  • 11. I CAN CHECK YOUR ESSAY AND SHOW YOU WHERE THE MISTAKES ARE
  • 12. PASS FIRST TIME AVOID THE EMBARASSMENT
  • 13. AVOID THE EMBARASSMENT OF TELLING YOUR PARENTS
  • 14. AVOID THE EMBARASSMENT OF TELLING YOUR PARENTS YOU FAILED
  • 15. Dear Ben, Thank you very much. I really appreciate you help. I believe because of your kind assistance I was able to progress so fast. My writing was never checked by the native speaker, so all your corrections and comments are extremely valuable for me. Thank for the suggestions of the synonyms in the essay on International law. I know that it is always good using synonyms, but sometimes I just run out of the proper words. Of course, I will update you about me results. I do hope tomorrow I will be able to do just a little bit better than usual. Thanks again for all your help. You are a very good teacher! Best regards,
  • 16. IMPROVE FASTER FOCUS ON WHAT IS IMPORTANT
  • 18. I had no idea I was making all these mistakes!
  • 19. How does it work? 1. Purchase through PayPal. 2. Download the questions on the ‘thank you’ page. 3. Email me your answer. And in 24 hrs you will have: - A list of ALL YOUR mistakes. - Personalised advice you need for improvement.
  • 21. TAKE ACTION take the first step
  • 22. TAKE ACTION take the first step CLICK BELOW
  • 23. Thanks to flicker for providing a great service, and an even bigger thanks to all the awesome users! PAPER WITH RED INK http://www.flickr.com/photos/quinnanya/2021672445/sizes /l/in/photostream/ SKY: http://www.flickr.com/photos/monkeyatlarge/16645379/siz es/z/in/photostream/ BRUNETTE STUDENT: http://www.flickr.com/photos/83633410@N07/765826128 8/sizes/c/in/photostream/ GUY HEAD IN HAND: http://www.flickr.com/photos/bouzafr/4151256995/ SMILE GINGER: http://www.flickr.com/photos/romainguy/ CHINESE GIRL SMILE: http://www.flickr.com/photos/eelssej_/
  • 24. TAKE ACTION take the first step CLICK BELOW