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The Five Paragraph Essay
a step- by- step introduction……….
Why should I learn this
   essay structure?
Can be used for both informative
 and persuasive writing
Incorporates many of the basics of
 good writing
Speeds up the writing process
 because of its formulaic nature
Can be used for structure of a
 research-based essay when
 expanded
What IS the Five Paragraph
           Essay?
An introduction
The first body paragraph
The second body
 paragraph
The third body paragraph
A conclusion
PART ONE:
The Five Paragraph
       Essay

Introduction
THE INTRODUCTION
Consists of:
 oThe Hook
 oGeneral topic sentences (2 or 3)
  which are more specific than the
  hook
 oA thesis statement including
  three supporting ideas, all
  written in parallel structure
First….


  THE HOOK
THE INTRODUCTION
          important definitions

Hook: An opening sentence or two that
 grabs the reader’s interest and introduces
 the general topic of the essay
Examples:
  Historical information
  An anecdote
  A surprising statement
  A declarative statement
  A quote
THE INTRODUCTION
           the hook
HISTORICAL INFORMATION: Some
 topics are better understood if a brief
 historical review of the topic is
 presented to lead into the discussion
 of the moment:

  Make sure it’s factual

  Keep it brief
Example of hook with
              Historical Information:
        If I wanted to write an informative
         essay on cool skateboarding tricks:
    In the spring of 1975, skateboarding took an
    evolutionary boost toward the sport that we see
    today. In Del Mar, California a slalom and freestyle
    contest was held at the Ocean Festival. That day,
    the Zephyr team showed the world what
    skateboarding could be. They rode their boards
    like no one had in the public eye, low and smooth,
    and skateboarding was taken from being a hobby
    to a serious, exciting sport.

TAKEN FROM: http://skateboard.about.com/cs/boardscience/a/brief_history.htm
THE INTRODUCTION
        the hook
ANECDOTE: An interesting
 little story

 Include sights, sounds, smells
  and other sensory images

 Keep it brief
Example of hook with
                          Anecdote:
     If I wanted to write an informative article on
                           auctions:
     Mike Cantlon remembers coming across his first
     auction ten years ago while cruising the back roads
     of Wisconsin. He parked his car and wandered into
     the crowd, toward the auctioneer's singsong chant
     and wafting smell of barbecued sandwiches. Hours
     later, Cantlon emerged lugging a $22 beam drill-for
     constructing post-and-beam barns—and a passion
     for auctions that has clung like a cocklebur on an
     old saddle blanket. "It's an addiction," says
     Cantlon, a financial planner and one of the growing
     number of auction fanatics for whom Saturdays
     will never be the same.
TAKEN FROM: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/intros.htm
THE INTRODUCTION
               the hook
A SUPRISING STATEMENT: There are many
  ways a statement can surprise a reader.
  Sometimes the statement is surprising because
  it is disgusting. Sometimes it is joyful.
  Sometimes it is shocking. Sometimes it is
  surprising because of who said it.
o Take care to explain how the statement relates to
  your topic
o Description is great, over- exaggeration is not
o Make sure that the statement is relevant, not
  just shocking
Example of hook with a
                         Surprising Statement:
         If I wanted to inform parents of ways to
       protect their children and prevent accidents:

    Have a minute? Good. Because that may be all
    it takes to save the life of a child—your child.
    Accidents kill nearly 8,000 children under age
    15 each year. And for every fatality, 42 more
    children are admitted to hospitals for
    treatment. Yet such deaths and injuries can be
    avoided through these easy steps parents can
    take right now. You don't have a minute to lose.

TAKEN FROM: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/intros.htm
THE INTRODUCTION
             the hook
 A DECLARITIVE STATEMENT: In this
 pattern, the writer simply states straight out
 what the topic of his paper is going to be about.
 It is the technique that most student writers
 use with only modest success most of the time,
 but good professional writers use it too.


oDon’t give too much information
oDon’t write, “In this essay…”
oDon’t write, “I’m going to tell you about…”
Example of hook with
                    Declarative Statement:
           If I wanted to explain why people should
          consider attending a free concert in a public
                              park:

      If you attend a concert in a city park, chances are
      you’re less interested in the performance than in
      the whole package, in which the music, the
      weather, the general gregariousness and the spirit
      of the moment become inseparable.
TAKEN FROM: http://www.nytimes.com/2006/07/13/arts/music/13squa.html
THE INTRODUCTION
            the hook
A QUOTE: When a writer uses the words of
  another to help illustrate a point

 Your quote should be unusual, funny, or obscure
 Don’t choose a long quote
 Your quote should have a meaning you plan to
  reveal to the reader as the essay progresses
 Remember to put opening and closing quotation
  marks around your quote
 Include who said or wrote your quote
Example of hook with a
                 Quote:
If I wanted to write an informative essay
      on how to recover from making a
                mistake:
"You must never feel badly about
making mistakes," explained Reason
quietly, "as long as you take the
trouble to learn from them.”
 -Norton Juster, The Phantom Tollbooth
NEXT:
        The
GENERAL TOPIC
  SENTENCES
  after the hook
General Topic
       Sentences
    Why do we need them?
They keep the reader focused on
 the point of the essay

They serve as a transition
 between the hook and the thesis
 statement
Thesis statement

General
Ex: There are many reasons why junk
 food should be banned from schools.
Specific
Ex: Junk food should be banned from
 school canteens because (give your
 specific reasons here)

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How to make five paragraph essay

  • 1. The Five Paragraph Essay a step- by- step introduction……….
  • 2. Why should I learn this essay structure? Can be used for both informative and persuasive writing Incorporates many of the basics of good writing Speeds up the writing process because of its formulaic nature Can be used for structure of a research-based essay when expanded
  • 3. What IS the Five Paragraph Essay? An introduction The first body paragraph The second body paragraph The third body paragraph A conclusion
  • 4. PART ONE: The Five Paragraph Essay Introduction
  • 5. THE INTRODUCTION Consists of: oThe Hook oGeneral topic sentences (2 or 3) which are more specific than the hook oA thesis statement including three supporting ideas, all written in parallel structure
  • 7. THE INTRODUCTION important definitions Hook: An opening sentence or two that grabs the reader’s interest and introduces the general topic of the essay Examples: Historical information An anecdote A surprising statement A declarative statement A quote
  • 8. THE INTRODUCTION the hook HISTORICAL INFORMATION: Some topics are better understood if a brief historical review of the topic is presented to lead into the discussion of the moment: Make sure it’s factual Keep it brief
  • 9. Example of hook with Historical Information: If I wanted to write an informative essay on cool skateboarding tricks: In the spring of 1975, skateboarding took an evolutionary boost toward the sport that we see today. In Del Mar, California a slalom and freestyle contest was held at the Ocean Festival. That day, the Zephyr team showed the world what skateboarding could be. They rode their boards like no one had in the public eye, low and smooth, and skateboarding was taken from being a hobby to a serious, exciting sport. TAKEN FROM: http://skateboard.about.com/cs/boardscience/a/brief_history.htm
  • 10. THE INTRODUCTION the hook ANECDOTE: An interesting little story Include sights, sounds, smells and other sensory images Keep it brief
  • 11. Example of hook with Anecdote: If I wanted to write an informative article on auctions: Mike Cantlon remembers coming across his first auction ten years ago while cruising the back roads of Wisconsin. He parked his car and wandered into the crowd, toward the auctioneer's singsong chant and wafting smell of barbecued sandwiches. Hours later, Cantlon emerged lugging a $22 beam drill-for constructing post-and-beam barns—and a passion for auctions that has clung like a cocklebur on an old saddle blanket. "It's an addiction," says Cantlon, a financial planner and one of the growing number of auction fanatics for whom Saturdays will never be the same. TAKEN FROM: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/intros.htm
  • 12. THE INTRODUCTION the hook A SUPRISING STATEMENT: There are many ways a statement can surprise a reader. Sometimes the statement is surprising because it is disgusting. Sometimes it is joyful. Sometimes it is shocking. Sometimes it is surprising because of who said it. o Take care to explain how the statement relates to your topic o Description is great, over- exaggeration is not o Make sure that the statement is relevant, not just shocking
  • 13. Example of hook with a Surprising Statement: If I wanted to inform parents of ways to protect their children and prevent accidents: Have a minute? Good. Because that may be all it takes to save the life of a child—your child. Accidents kill nearly 8,000 children under age 15 each year. And for every fatality, 42 more children are admitted to hospitals for treatment. Yet such deaths and injuries can be avoided through these easy steps parents can take right now. You don't have a minute to lose. TAKEN FROM: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/intros.htm
  • 14. THE INTRODUCTION the hook A DECLARITIVE STATEMENT: In this pattern, the writer simply states straight out what the topic of his paper is going to be about. It is the technique that most student writers use with only modest success most of the time, but good professional writers use it too. oDon’t give too much information oDon’t write, “In this essay…” oDon’t write, “I’m going to tell you about…”
  • 15. Example of hook with Declarative Statement: If I wanted to explain why people should consider attending a free concert in a public park: If you attend a concert in a city park, chances are you’re less interested in the performance than in the whole package, in which the music, the weather, the general gregariousness and the spirit of the moment become inseparable. TAKEN FROM: http://www.nytimes.com/2006/07/13/arts/music/13squa.html
  • 16. THE INTRODUCTION the hook A QUOTE: When a writer uses the words of another to help illustrate a point  Your quote should be unusual, funny, or obscure  Don’t choose a long quote  Your quote should have a meaning you plan to reveal to the reader as the essay progresses  Remember to put opening and closing quotation marks around your quote  Include who said or wrote your quote
  • 17. Example of hook with a Quote: If I wanted to write an informative essay on how to recover from making a mistake: "You must never feel badly about making mistakes," explained Reason quietly, "as long as you take the trouble to learn from them.” -Norton Juster, The Phantom Tollbooth
  • 18. NEXT: The GENERAL TOPIC SENTENCES after the hook
  • 19. General Topic Sentences Why do we need them? They keep the reader focused on the point of the essay They serve as a transition between the hook and the thesis statement
  • 20. Thesis statement General Ex: There are many reasons why junk food should be banned from schools. Specific Ex: Junk food should be banned from school canteens because (give your specific reasons here)