3. 4. 缺少谓语动词或过多使用谓语动词。如： I have some questions want to ask you. / I want the room has a kitchen. / students who ( are/come ) from various countries. 5. 拼写错误，行文潦草，无法看清、看懂。如： chicken (kitchen), recive/ receive (receive), Austrilia (Australia), along (alone)… 6. 语言不得体：不看对象，不看场景，用语不当。 I want to live alone. I want a kitchen. I don’t want to be interrupted. I hope I can have a good time…
4. 7. 标点混乱；人称代词及时态、语态乱用。 I’m glad to receive yours letter. / many countries’ students / other countries’ cultures / when I arrived there / I hope to come to you school 8. 内容要点不全，缺项，整体结构不完整。 9. 文段多于或少于规定的字数。 10. 格式不规范，如书信体中漏缺开首词和结尾语等。
7. I am so glad to have the chance to go to your school. To tell the truth, nothing in the world can delight me so much as receiving a letter from your school. I’d like to be punctual for school in September. Happy though I was, still there is something I have to inquire about. First of all, I wonder if someone is going to meet me at the airport when I arrive in Australia, and what kind of transportation I will take to get to the school. In addition, I hope the school may allow me to live alone. If there is a kitchen in my room, it will be very comfortable and I will be thankful. What’s more, I hope I can study in a class with students from other countries. If so, I think we will get on very well with each other. Thanks for reading. Hope to receive your letter as soon as possible. Best wishes!
9. I am so glad to have the chance to go to your school. ( 李奕霖 ) To tell the truth( 孙侨 ), nothing in the world can delight me so much as receiving a letter from your school.( 秦嘉 ) I’d like to be punctual for school in September.( 史晓蓉、孙侨 ) Happy though I was( 孙侨 ), still there is something I have to inquire about.( 王雪扬 ) First of all( 邹孟荷 ), I wonder if someone is going to meet me at the airport when I arrive in Australia, and what kind of transportation I will take to get to the school.( 宫贺、毕然、赵心如、周楠、李伯震、杨戈、招继楠 ) In addition( 毕然 ), I hope the school may allow me to live alone.( 李晓雯 ) If there is a kitchen in my room, it will be very comfortable and I will be thankful( 王梦雪、王蕾、宫贺、李贤雯 ) ( 王雪扬版 )I’m looking forward to living by myself in a room equipped with a kitchen where I can cook meals instead of eating in the canteen.
10. What’s more( 王梦雪、邹孟荷 ), I hope I can study in a class with students from other countries.( 武真如、王雅雯 ) If so, I think we will get on very well with each other.( 吕高阳 ) Thanks for reading. Hope to receive your letter as soon as possible.( 李伯震 ) Best wishes!( your English Teacher ) Do you want to learn the skills to write such kind of compositions?
25. Good afternoon, everyone, On the morning of April 29, 2007, from 10:00 to 11:00, hundreds of millions of students from primary, middle schools and universities all over China joined in a national student sports program. Eleven million students in Shandong took an active part in this program. The Ministry of Education calls on students to exercise for an hour every day, in the hope that they will have good health to work fifty years and enjoy the whole life. Personally, I think it a good idea for us senior 3 students to have daily exercise. Although we take an hour a day for exercise, it is well worth it. Taking exercise helps us build up our body and keep a clear mind. Therefore, we can work more efficiently. Thank you!
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