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Writing/Comprehending/Organizing/Thinking Brandon Literacy Support Teachers January 27th, 2010 Presented by Faye Brownlie References: Grand Conversations, Thoughtful Responses Student Diversity, 2nd Ed It’s All about Thinking
Managing the Writers Workshop Work with large chunks of time Build criteria with students Teach one specific criteria at a time, over time Model, model, model Focus on pre-writing  Coach students as they are writing Goal-set with students Increase your silent writing time
The Gradual Release Model Model Guided practice Independent practice Independent application Pearson & Gallagher (1983)
How can we best use our resource time together?  Can we introduce writing in a playful way to a diverse group of K children?
Students need: To see themselves as writers To have fun To develop a sense of sound/symbol relationships To find their stories To work with criteria Teacher’s Need:  What’s Next for This Beginning Writer? – Reid, Schultz, Peterson (Pembroke Pub)
The Gradual Release Model K-1 Writing: Model - pictures & print Refer to criteria Kids draw & write Refer to criteria Pearson & Gallagher (1983)
Power Paragraphs Create a power structure: Power 1 – the big idea Power 2 – 3 big details about the big idea Power 3 – 2 more precise details/examples about the 2nd powers Together, write the paragraph, 1 topic sentence (power 1), and 3 explanatory sentences (powers 2 and 3) Reread for fluency Do several together, then students can create their structure, get feedback before writing, then write independently
								power 1 power 2				power 2				power 2 2 details							2 details (power 3)
Response Journals   ,[object Object]
 initially, written in class, together
 develop criteria for powerful responses,[object Object]
Online literacy videos www.sd72.bc.ca Literacy Videos Clustering from Text Squiggles It’s All in the Bag
Learning Intention: I can examine a picture and infer what is happening I can provide ‘because’ reasoning (evidence) for my inference
Peter’s Poofect Pet - Tina Powell www.bigfatpen.com
Learning Intention:  I can write and describe a small event from my morning. Gr. 3 Writing: Model – a small moment Establish criteria Kids write Descriptive feedback on criteria Pearson & Gallagher (1983)
Choose a topic Write in front of the students Students describe ‘what works’ in your writing Students choose a ‘morning’ topic Students write Students self-assess Students meet with peers to share and provide feedback
All alone, I stepped into my car.  With my map in hand, I began to drive.  At the lights I turned left, then the map said to turn right.  “Oh, no!” 		The sign said, “Road closed”.   		“Help,” I thought.  “What am I going to do?”
Notices…criteria Mystery Opening Detailed Sounds like you (Voice)
Lori Johnson Grade1 ColdstreamElementary Richmond Learning Intentions Self Assessment Descriptive Feedback Ownership
Browsing Bags– Lousesa Newman, Jennifer HallTait Elementary
Browsing Bags
Descriptive Feedback What’s working? What’s not? What’s next?
Descriptive Feedback Give a specific compliment Set a goal Have an action plan
Descriptive Feedback In guided reading groups In 1:1 reading conferences In whole class strategy sequences Choose a partner.  What does descriptive feedback look like in this scenario? Report back to your table group.
Formative assessment to determine students  strengths and needs Brownlie, Feniak & Schnellert, 2006; Earl & Katz, 2005; Schnellert, Butler & Higginson, in press; Smith & Wilhelm, 2006
My students need to learn to record notes when reading information text. Can I introduce the double-entry journal to my grade 2/3 class?
Students need: A model Guided practice in following the model An opportunity to practice the strategy, with support as needed Choice in the degree of complexity they use to complete the task
Brandon Lit Leaders Jan2010
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Brandon Lit Leaders Jan2010

  • 1. Writing/Comprehending/Organizing/Thinking Brandon Literacy Support Teachers January 27th, 2010 Presented by Faye Brownlie References: Grand Conversations, Thoughtful Responses Student Diversity, 2nd Ed It’s All about Thinking
  • 2. Managing the Writers Workshop Work with large chunks of time Build criteria with students Teach one specific criteria at a time, over time Model, model, model Focus on pre-writing Coach students as they are writing Goal-set with students Increase your silent writing time
  • 3. The Gradual Release Model Model Guided practice Independent practice Independent application Pearson & Gallagher (1983)
  • 4. How can we best use our resource time together? Can we introduce writing in a playful way to a diverse group of K children?
  • 5. Students need: To see themselves as writers To have fun To develop a sense of sound/symbol relationships To find their stories To work with criteria Teacher’s Need: What’s Next for This Beginning Writer? – Reid, Schultz, Peterson (Pembroke Pub)
  • 6. The Gradual Release Model K-1 Writing: Model - pictures & print Refer to criteria Kids draw & write Refer to criteria Pearson & Gallagher (1983)
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  • 28. Power Paragraphs Create a power structure: Power 1 – the big idea Power 2 – 3 big details about the big idea Power 3 – 2 more precise details/examples about the 2nd powers Together, write the paragraph, 1 topic sentence (power 1), and 3 explanatory sentences (powers 2 and 3) Reread for fluency Do several together, then students can create their structure, get feedback before writing, then write independently
  • 29. power 1 power 2 power 2 power 2 2 details 2 details (power 3)
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  • 42. Online literacy videos www.sd72.bc.ca Literacy Videos Clustering from Text Squiggles It’s All in the Bag
  • 43. Learning Intention: I can examine a picture and infer what is happening I can provide ‘because’ reasoning (evidence) for my inference
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  • 48. Peter’s Poofect Pet - Tina Powell www.bigfatpen.com
  • 49. Learning Intention: I can write and describe a small event from my morning. Gr. 3 Writing: Model – a small moment Establish criteria Kids write Descriptive feedback on criteria Pearson & Gallagher (1983)
  • 50. Choose a topic Write in front of the students Students describe ‘what works’ in your writing Students choose a ‘morning’ topic Students write Students self-assess Students meet with peers to share and provide feedback
  • 51. All alone, I stepped into my car. With my map in hand, I began to drive. At the lights I turned left, then the map said to turn right. “Oh, no!” The sign said, “Road closed”. “Help,” I thought. “What am I going to do?”
  • 52. Notices…criteria Mystery Opening Detailed Sounds like you (Voice)
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  • 56. Lori Johnson Grade1 ColdstreamElementary Richmond Learning Intentions Self Assessment Descriptive Feedback Ownership
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  • 59. Browsing Bags– Lousesa Newman, Jennifer HallTait Elementary
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  • 67. Descriptive Feedback What’s working? What’s not? What’s next?
  • 68. Descriptive Feedback Give a specific compliment Set a goal Have an action plan
  • 69. Descriptive Feedback In guided reading groups In 1:1 reading conferences In whole class strategy sequences Choose a partner. What does descriptive feedback look like in this scenario? Report back to your table group.
  • 70. Formative assessment to determine students strengths and needs Brownlie, Feniak & Schnellert, 2006; Earl & Katz, 2005; Schnellert, Butler & Higginson, in press; Smith & Wilhelm, 2006
  • 71. My students need to learn to record notes when reading information text. Can I introduce the double-entry journal to my grade 2/3 class?
  • 72. Students need: A model Guided practice in following the model An opportunity to practice the strategy, with support as needed Choice in the degree of complexity they use to complete the task

Hinweis der Redaktion

  1. Stephy – Oct 7/09Home sunny thinking of her mom in the thinking bubble.Sound/symbol and drawing knowledge!
  2. Stephy – Nov 18/09 – first independent!I get the lunch for duck.
  3. Stephy – Dec.7/09 It was a calm day…….can come? Yes said stephy. Lovely said shirley. Mom is in my home. She will …. Yes said yes. The end.
  4. Vishal – oct 7/09 rabbit trees mountainsosNotice the letter/sound combinations!
  5. Vishal – Nov 23/09 Once upon a time there was a boy. He ….and he was planning a birthday party.
  6. Vishal – Dec. 11/09 The monster was playing basketball and the one with the spots scored and he wins the contest. He gets the medal.
  7. Armann – Oct 7/09 fm for family.
  8. Mika, Oct 7/09
  9. Mika, Nov. 23/09The sharks in the water. They were going to school and picking out a new home reading and ‘bathrooms?’
  10. Shirley Oct 07/09
  11. Shirley Oct. 26/09
  12. Shirley
  13. Shirley on Dec. 11/09