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Origins of Eli ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Research, Review, Better Writing ,[object Object]
Research, Review, Better Writing ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Research, Review, Better Writing ,[object Object]
Research, Review, Better Writing ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Research, Review, Better Writing ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
What is Eli? ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
What is Eli? ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
What Does Eli Do?  ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Working with Eli Today ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Create an Eli Account ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
The Writing Activity ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
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  1. Bullet 1 annotations - Hayes, 1996; Hayes & Flower, 1986; Sommers, 1980; Wallace et al., 1996 Bullet 2 annotations - Bridwell, 1980; Flower et al., 1986; Galbraith & Torrance, 2004; Hayes & Flower, 1986; Wallace & Hayes, 1991
  2. Bullet 1 annotations: Kieft, Rijlaarsdam, Galbraith, and van den Bergh, 2007 *Transition to Bill
  3. Bill of Jeff take this
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